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Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed 
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Date: Aug 01, 2011 05:28 am Title: Chapter 26: Tell me something good
[Report This]Date: Aug 01, 2011 05:28 am Title: Chapter 26: Tell me something good
Awe yay shes pregnant (^L^) that woulda been funny if she wasn't pregnant and she fainted because of the fight and just wanted some cheesecake afterwards. xD but.....not in this case LOL!
Love the chapter <3
Reviewer: Invisible Ink Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2011 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 26: Tell me something good
Date: Jul 31, 2011 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 26: Tell me something good
AWW!!
Reviewer: mrsmjjbarbie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2011 01:53 am Title: Chapter 26: Tell me something good
Author's Response: Thanks! LOL!!Yes I watch soooo much everybody hates Chris I had to put them in there. That's one of my favorite shows. Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2011 01:53 am Title: Chapter 26: Tell me something good
Omg, Malvo & Killmoves? I'm wayyyy too familiar w/ those names ;). I choked because I was laughing so hard. Either way, this is a good story although I think the chapters should be longer and more descriptive but your use of dialougue is great!
Author's Response: Thanks! LOL!!Yes I watch soooo much everybody hates Chris I had to put them in there. That's one of my favorite shows. Thanks for the review!!