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Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2011 04:04 am Title: Chapter 19: So kiss me

Aww she was all like "Kiss me man!"

and he was all like "Kiss me woman!"

xD that was adorable >_< THEN the daggone rowboat gonna tip over. Those prone to accident lovers, hope they brought a first aid kit. Especially for Alica cuz it seems she gets hurt the most ò_Ó at least their not acting lackadaisical toward each other anymore. :) 

 

Lackadaisical was the word of the day :D ...Hopefully I used it right. :P

 

Loved the chapter !! =D



Author's Response: I know they are so accident prone!! But it's adorable for them. When I wrote this chapter I was thinking about the song Kiss the girl and the seen where they sing it on the Little Mermaid. Excellent word of the day:) Thanks for the review!!!!!!

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2011 02:25 am Title: Chapter 19: So kiss me

awwww that is so sweet next chapter plzz!!! lol



Author's Response: I just posted the next chapter. It's short but there's going to be another part to it. Thanks for the review!

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