Reviews For On the line
Reviewer: themoonwalks77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2024 09:28 am Title: Chapter 1:The Story of us.
Date: Feb 18, 2024 09:28 am Title: Chapter 1:The Story of us.
Nice introduction and plot! Very interesting XD
Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed 
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Date: Jul 29, 2011 06:23 am Title: Chapter 1:The Story of us.
Author's Response: Wow! That's Michael's birth year! It also happens to my dad's too. Cool! That was one of the best years ever!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 29, 2011 06:23 am Title: Chapter 1:The Story of us.
Woah, your read count is 1958 ^_^ kool beans
Author's Response: Wow! That's Michael's birth year! It also happens to my dad's too. Cool! That was one of the best years ever!!
Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2011 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 1:The Story of us.
Author's Response: Yeah were friends :) I've really enjoyed you reading my stories and actually liking them. Your comments are always so sweet. It's really made me fell good about my writing. Thanks for all the wonderful reviews! The net chapter has been posted!
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2011 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 1:The Story of us.
I understand, school starts back up in a couple weeks for me. :-/ I have enjoyed reading the stories on here. Cuz usually once school starts, I don't get to read on here as often. And I made a new friend. We're friends right? It's okay if we're not xF. Anyway tho, still love your story.
Author's Response: Yeah were friends :) I've really enjoyed you reading my stories and actually liking them. Your comments are always so sweet. It's really made me fell good about my writing. Thanks for all the wonderful reviews! The net chapter has been posted!
Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2011 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 1:The Story of us.
Date: Jul 18, 2011 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 1:The Story of us.
I honestly really like this, i would want to see what happen between them and why they lost their love & if they are able to fix their love or not. Great pliot, i hope you contiune the story.
Author's Response: Thank you! Please rate! I will continue this.