Date: Nov 10, 2020 12:03 am Title: Chapter 5
Omg I can't even begin to describe how I feel every time you update one of your stories. I swear I am always so happy like it's my birthday or something. :D
Anyways that was such a good chapter. I was screaming in happiness when Michael told Mark that his name is Michael. I've been waiting for this moment since you started the story. And they kissed even though Michael said in the beginning he never kisses clients!!! I love that he's starting to trust Mark. And I hope Mark will take Michael away from this environment he is currently in. Especially from Patryck. I wish he could arrest him or something. And I am also really excited what Michael is going to say to the fact that Mark is working for the police.
But I have one question: Why does Mark keep calling Michael 'kid' even though Michael said now several times that he doesn't want to be called that?
Anyway thank you for this amazing chapter. I just love your stories soooooo much and I know I say that in every review but it's the truth and I feel like I HAVE to say it over and over again. :D
Date: Nov 09, 2020 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
HOW I JUST LOVE THIS STORY XDD PLEASE UPDATE IT AS SOON AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN. IT'S WRITTEN WITH SUCH GENIUS AND FEELS SO REAL. I JUST LOVE HOW MARK IS SO INCREDIBLY SENSITIVE TO MICHEAL'S UNFORTUNATE CIRCUMSTANCES AND HOW REALISTICLY MICHAEL'S DISTRUST IS PORTRAYED BECAUSE PEOPLE LIKE THAT DON'T RECEIVE MUCH LOVE IN THEIR LIVES. I HOPE MICHAEL STARTS SEEING MARK IS SOMEONE HE CAN TRUST SOON XD SO MARK CAN LOVE AND HELP HIM WITH THE 2 THINGS HE NEEDS MOST LOVE AND TRUST. PLEASE CONTINUE THIS GREAT STORY. XD
Date: Nov 08, 2020 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm so glad you updated this story!! ๐ The wait was so worth it. What an excellent chapter. Gosh I'm so glad Michael and Mark crossed paths, like Mark said it was fate. Now it is up to Mark to convince MJ to let him in to take care of him. And I so hope in the future he kicks that evil pimps ass ๐ก Please update soon! ๐’ ๐๐ผ
Date: Nov 08, 2020 09:19 am Title: Chapter 5
Wooo this chapter is amazing ! I love this story so so much....I just canโt wait for the next chapter.Take your time but please donโt make us wait for so long ๐ซBut Iโm happy this great chapter is longer ๐๐
Date: Oct 27, 2020 05:49 am Title: Chapter 1
God, this is some good fic. I was wondering if I could find this kind of things and Im happy forma discover this. Keep going and patrรณn muy english
Author's Response: A new reader and reviewer!๐๐ thank you so much Candyshopboy, I'm glad you like it!
Date: Sep 20, 2020 12:28 am Title: Chapter 4
Omg poor Michael :(((( why did he pass out? But it was really cute how they spent some time to get. Mark is luckily really sweet with him. You are really the best writer I ever came across. I would give your chapters 10000000 stars out of 10 :D
Author's Response: Gosh Sunkid the best writer you ever came across: thats such a sweet compliment, i feel truly honoured๐๐ just uploaded a new chapter nd I cant wait to hear what you guys think๐
Date: Sep 09, 2020 10:10 am Title: Chapter 4
OMG !! IT MAKES YOU WONDER WHAT HAPPENED TO MJ EALIER THAT DAY, EVEN AT THE COFFEE SHOP SOMETHING WAS WRONG. MARK IS SO CARING AND NICE TO HIM. HE'S VERY PATIENT WITH HIM ALSO. I THINK MJ REALLY NEEDS SOMEONE LIKE MARK IN HIS LIFE. HE'S HAD A VERY ROUGH LIFE IT SEEMS. I HOPE MARK CAN HELP HIM. GOOD STORY. PLEASE CONTINUE THIS WONDERFUL STORY XDD
Author's Response: Yeah.. something was wrong and you're about to find out what happened.. Mark will try and help, just keep reading๐ and thanks again for this wonderful review๐๐
Date: Sep 09, 2020 07:41 am Title: Chapter 4
I'm glad Mark really cares about MJ, I think he's the only one who can save him from that dangerous lifestyle. I wonder if he was finally forced into working for that evil Patryck guy. Oh poor MJ. Hopefully he finally has someone looking out for him now with Mark. I'm looking forward to the next update, you're such a great writer!
Author's Response: Thank you so so much Eva!๐๐ You'll find out soon whats happened, but yes: Mark will look out for him from now on however hard Michael will find it to trust him๐