Date: Sep 20, 2020 12:28 am Title: Chapter 4
Omg poor Michael :(((( why did he pass out? But it was really cute how they spent some time to get. Mark is luckily really sweet with him. You are really the best writer I ever came across. I would give your chapters 10000000 stars out of 10 :D
Date: Sep 09, 2020 10:10 am Title: Chapter 4
OMG !! IT MAKES YOU WONDER WHAT HAPPENED TO MJ EALIER THAT DAY, EVEN AT THE COFFEE SHOP SOMETHING WAS WRONG. MARK IS SO CARING AND NICE TO HIM. HE'S VERY PATIENT WITH HIM ALSO. I THINK MJ REALLY NEEDS SOMEONE LIKE MARK IN HIS LIFE. HE'S HAD A VERY ROUGH LIFE IT SEEMS. I HOPE MARK CAN HELP HIM. GOOD STORY. PLEASE CONTINUE THIS WONDERFUL STORY XDD
Date: Sep 09, 2020 07:41 am Title: Chapter 4
I'm glad Mark really cares about MJ, I think he's the only one who can save him from that dangerous lifestyle. I wonder if he was finally forced into working for that evil Patryck guy. Oh poor MJ. Hopefully he finally has someone looking out for him now with Mark. I'm looking forward to the next update, you're such a great writer!
Date: Aug 28, 2020 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 3
A very happy birthday to you!
Thank you for updating woohoo! So it’s Patryck who’s been bullying Michael, gosh such a scary predicament Michael is in. I’m so intrigued to where all this will go. Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: I've just uploaded an update😉 thank you so much Eva!💜 and yeah.. it is really scary, and it'll get worse before it gets better (let's hope all works out😘)
Date: Aug 28, 2020 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
I AM SORRY I DIDN'T READ THE END NOTES THE OTHER DAY. I WAS IN A HURRY. I HOPE YOU HAD A VERY WONDERFUL HAPPY BIRTHDAY AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU. XD I HOPE ALL IS WELL XDD
Author's Response: Thank you IloveMJ! And no worries: i think it's lovely for you to comment back on this😘
Date: Aug 28, 2020 01:07 am Title: Chapter 3
Omg HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! I hope you're having a great day :D
So Patryck is the one that's beating Michael. I hope Mark will come and get him out of this environment. Thank you so much for updating and again I wish you an amazing birthday! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much Sunkid!💜🤗 Mark is definately the one person who might be able to get him out.. stay tuned for more
Date: Aug 27, 2020 07:43 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh Happy birthday darling it’s a gift from you right? I love this story so much.And Michael’ s birthday is coming in two days!Is there going to be a update?😉
Author's Response: Thank you Wings!💜💜 and yes, it was a gift😉
Date: Aug 26, 2020 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
AHH POOR MICHAEL. THAT WAS VERY SAD TO SEE HIM GET BEATEN LIKE THAT BUT THIS IS VERY REALISTIC AND A REALITY IN THE LIFE OF A PROTITUTES. IT'S A VERY INTERSTING STORY LINE AND KEEPS ME VERY INTERESTED IN WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT. PLEASE CONTINUE THIS WONDERFUL STORY. XD
Author's Response: Thank you so much IloveMJ!💜 It is sad.. but yes unfortunately it can be part of reality in this line of work..
Date: Aug 24, 2020 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
I hoped we'd get an update on the story. I'm sooo glad you had the chance to continue! This is such a unique story and you write so well. I wonder what the story behind MJ's bruises are, I hope Mark will help him out of his tough situation. And the fact that Mark is Police chief makes it even more interesting. Both have secrets to hide. Wonder what will MJs reaction be if and when he finds out. I love your story! Please continue
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this long review!💜💜 I so love reading them and I hope i won't disappoint you😊