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Reviewer: MjjPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2020 12:55 am Title: Prologue

Lia has got a lot on her plate. Dealing with her uncle on top of everything else. Maybe Michael can be a light to pull her from the craziness. That is if they can reconcile a bit lol

Reviewer: liberiangurlmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2020 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 3

❤️❤️❤️

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2020 04:46 pm Title: Prologue

Great!!

Reviewer: wings919 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2020 09:21 am Title: Prologue

I love it and I hope you will write another slash story in the future

Author's Response:

Thank you, I might write another one soon :) x

Reviewer: MjjPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2020 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

This really is incredible. I'm familiar with your writings and I'm glad I clicked this one. If you're ever interested, a story like this would do very well on Wattpad too within the MJ community and in general! But I'm tuned in here and I do hope you continue. I would love to read more. Already the plot and characters have me drawn in.

Also, question, was the first chapter a flashback or should I just wait and see lol? And man, Lia's uncle is too much. And so are those dudes. I do hope she manages to get away from them and that trouble. Can't wait to find out how she got involved in the first place. Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Thank you love, I am currently updating here on this site and wattpad at the same time for this story so people can read on both :) I appreciate your encouraging comments about this story! It was just a flashback in the prologue but don't worry, there are many more scenes with Michael to come as the story unfolds ;)

Reviewer: MjjPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2020 03:53 pm Title: Prologue

Wow. I'm into this! This is very well written and descriptive and as we approach summer, it's very nice to imagine the island vibes and see the imagery. Well done!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

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