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Reviewer: ladiC Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2020 11:21 am Title: Chapter 19 : When Am I Going To Make A Living

Hmmm...

Reviewer: MJzNubianQueen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2020 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 19 : When Am I Going To Make A Living

Ewwwww how does she go and do Vincent??? What a waste on a 1 minute man. Granted Michael is with Tati but I doubt if he ever found out it would sit well with him.
Her Mum is lit =)
Cant wait for next chapter

Reviewer: MichaelBeMine Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2020 04:28 am Title: Chapter 15 : Baby, would you mind touching me? Ever so slowly...

loving this! im wondering will Georgia be able to keep up with her golddigger plans or will she seriously fall for Michael?

 

Something tells me Michael should be careful who he loves.



Author's Response:

I'm sure Georgia can be a golddigger and develop feelings for Michael at the same time lol, she is full of ressources.

Indeed, Michael is falling very hard and quick with someone he barely knows :/

Reviewer: FaithTrustAndPixieDust Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 18 : Cause it's a bittersweet symphony this life

I keep on forgetting how gorgeous Georgia’s face claim is. I’m in love lol

Author's Response:

She is so beautiful, innit??

Reviewer: ladiC Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 04:28 am Title: Chapter 18 : Cause it's a bittersweet symphony this life

Lol‘

Reviewer: MichaelManiac Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2020 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 15 : Baby, would you mind touching me? Ever so slowly...

Pardon me for reviewing out of order.

Michael is so confusing, that's all I can really say.

To respond to for request for feemme fatal films(that's like twenty days late, I'm just seeing this sorry) Mildred Pierce with Joan Crawford has been considered one of the greats. It a bit different from the typical femme fatal plots but that's what makes it so iconic. There's Sunset Blv and Double Indemity that are also greats.

Author's Response:

No worries :)

 

I'll check that out, thank :)

Reviewer: MichaelManiac Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2020 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice...

Michael acts like he's going to war. They're both so dramatic. I still don't get why he asked her to help out on tour a couple of days before he was set to leave. That man is so confusing. Michael may think this is the end but I'm more than sure Georgia has other plans. I will not be satisfied until her and Tatiana have it out. Lol.

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

"Michael acts like he's going to war. They're both so dramatic."

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If it was 1987 and my boo who isn't my boo was going to Japan for a month and cheated on me too, I'd feel like he was going to war as wel LMAOOO. I did not even notice how dramatic I wrote the chapter but when I re-read it, I see it lmao!

 

I'm sure Michael thought Georgia would drop everything to join him on tour, he had one job and it was not to be caught sleeping with someone else. He had it too easy if he thinks Georgia would have followed him anyways.

I don't know about you but Georgia sounds a little bit through with Michael... Don't you think lmao?

I can't wait for Georgia vs Tatiana as well lmao. Tatiana always struck me as someone who could throw hands if needed lmao

The new chapter is here :)

Reviewer: MichaelManiac Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2020 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 16 : Oops, I did it again

Vincent set Mike up and he knows it.But oh well, it's what he deserves *Insert Kim K gif*

Georgia may be telling herself that she's playing a game but I feel like a part of her his actually hurt. At least that it seems like she can't win against Tatiana. It's actually quite sad tbh. Most men are after sex and it makes it difficult for women who don't want to put out or in Georgia's case, can't. They're trifling. Screw them, screw Mykol.

I wonder how Vincent is going to try and shoot his shot now that he's opened Pandora's box. I'm behind on my updates, be right back!

Author's Response:

Yas he did lmao! Vincent is waiting with his popcorn for the drama loool!

Yes, Georgia is definitely hurt she lose and especially against Tatiana who she believes is beneath her. She underestimated the power of pussy unfortunately!

 

"I wonder how Vincent is going to try and shoot his shot now that he's opened Pandora's box."

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Reviewer: FaithTrustAndPixieDust Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2020 12:01 am Title: Chapter 17 - Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice...

Why can’t he just admit he wants to be with her instead of being all extra. Men.

Author's Response:

Michael probably wants to persuaade himself he does not care. I bet he wish he would have met Georgia differently but I'm sure this is not ove yet ;-)

Reviewer: MJzNubianQueen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2020 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice...

Hmmmmmm......now this I did not expect :) what now???
**yo Annie what is with the pg...I need me some details, descriptions**

Cant wait for next chapter, dont be too long now...

Author's Response:

Hey girl :)

The PG is coming but I don't think Michael deserves it with his cheating ass lmao

The new chapter is here :) I'm trying to post at least once a week ;)

Reviewer: ladiC Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2020 11:44 am Title: Chapter 16 : Oops, I did it again

How embarrassing! 😯



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LMAO ikr

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2020 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 15 : Baby, would you mind touching me? Ever so slowly...

“You look tired” she said grabbing his hand “Come. Come to bed with me” she instructed “You still have three hours”

Yess!!!!

If he was petty, it would have got up and told her he had to go or he felt like watching cartoons.

Guys never turn anything down. But me?

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Wa wa wa wait. She got only one nipple pierced!?! No, you do them at the same time. Prolonging it by separating them just means all sorts of headaches. A longer time without swimming, without hot tubs, without... 

i can't

 

So Michael is catching feelings but is afraid that now Georgia is catching feelings?! I'm confused. This man is confusing. He wants "just sex" but he refuses to have "just sex". Oh, men. They never know what they want. I'll tell him what he wants. He wants a relationship. He just needs to face it.



Author's Response:

HAHAHA! I actually like the one nipple pierced look lol! I bet Michael isn't complaining lmao

Right, Michael wants a relationship!

 

Hey, I had a question about the website (I don't know if the review section is the right place lol)

- Is there a bug with the Contact feature on the account page? There are some reviewers I don't see anymore I wanted to message

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2020 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 14 : If you're looking for somewhere to go, thought I'd take you to a movie show

There was nothing as stressful as horizontal parking for someone like Georgia, the state of her car proved she was not good at it. 

Parallel parking is the bane of my existence. I'll walk for miles to avoid that.

She opened the cupboards on top of Michael’s head and took out two large bowls. She rinsed them out and grabbed two forks from the dish rack to hand them to Michael so that he could serve them. He grabbed the first bowl from Georgia’s hand with a frown on his forehead.

I love how you paint the scene. It really colors everything well, and I'm not left filling in an entirely blank canvas in my mind. So many authors (published and unpublished) neglect this 

She opened the cupboards on top of Michael’s head and took out two large bowls. She rinsed them out and grabbed two forks from the dish rack to hand them to Michael so that he could serve them. He grabbed the first bowl from Georgia’s hand with a frown on his forehead.

The least she can do is share the bed with him! Damn, he'd better be keeping a tally of how many O's she owes him...



Author's Response:

- I do not have my driver licence but the way my sister sweat when it tikes to park, I feel it in my soul lmao

- Thank you so much for the compliment! It was always easier for me when I first started learning english to read books that was very detailed!

- LMAOOOOOO!  I think Michael lost count already

Reviewer: thatmoonwalkerchickk_ Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2020 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 16 : Oops, I did it again

WAIT WAIT I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER NOW SKSKSKS I WAS OT EXPECTING THAT!



Author's Response:

It's here !

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2020 11:20 am Title: Chapter 13 : You know you belong right here inside my arms

“You’re drunk, we’re not having sex!”

Said no guy ever!

 

C'mon Michael, offering someone a job (which involves them working for an income) is not the same as just giving them money for nothing (as of yet lol). He'd better tell her soon!



Author's Response:

I'd like to believe Michael is a gentleman lol :)

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