Date: Jun 27, 2019 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 13
Wow! This is one of the most fascinating fanfictions I've ever read. Your deep understanding of human emotions and great attention to detail make the story unbelievably realistic. I just could't stop reading it! Thank you so much, I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter.
Thank you so much Strega, your positive comments mean the world to me! Hoping to post the next part later today x
Date: Jun 23, 2019 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh my gosh!! Michael got hit! It can't be from somebody good. Thanks for the update: I'm literally so behind XD life caught up w/me. How is the writing going, Ms. Apricot?
Hey! I wandered what happened to you :) Glad to see you back on the site, the writing is going great! I'm patiently awaiting your next creative piece of fiction btw x
Date: Jun 17, 2019 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 12
I’m glad Kane finally told Michael his true feelings! But gosh darn it Kane. Going back there for Evander is too risky, a lot can go wrong. I wonder what will happen...and I’m curious if we’ll eventually see Scalisi in the picture at some point...so many questions!
I know, just like Kane unable to resist deadly action smh. So many questions, just lay back and watch the story unfold :)
Date: Jun 17, 2019 09:27 am Title: Chapter 12
Awww I know Kane means well by killing Evander, but Michael doesn’t necessarily agree at all. AND YESSS HE FINALLY ADMITTED IT!!!!:))
Yes he just couldn't resist showing michael some lurve in the end :)
Date: Jun 02, 2019 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 11
I’m looking forward to seeing how things are gonna play out since Evander knows about everything, and poor Mikey:(((
I know, don't worry all will be revealed, thank you very much for your support on this story <3
Date: Jun 01, 2019 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 11
So much happens here, omg Evander is such an evil man. I just love your writing as I’ve said already it reads like a novel or a movie. Sooo good! I’m always excited when I’ve seen you’ve updated this story. Michael is meeting Scalisi?? Can’t wait till you update again!
Thank you so much :)
Date: May 24, 2019 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 10
DAMMNNN MAJOR CLIFFHANGER!!! I hope you update soon, things look like they’re getting serious!!
Hehe yes I just had to leave you in the edge 😁 👀 yes things are mounting up, but never fear the next chapter is here xx
Date: May 14, 2019 04:01 am Title: Chapter 1
i really hope youll consider putting this story on Wattpad!!
Hey Susie, this story is already in wattpad however I find not that many readers on there have discovered it yet. I’ts tricky getting it in front of the MJ fans specifically.
Date: May 10, 2019 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 8
"The whole world knows it's a sin in the eyes of God to be that way."
Leviticus 18:22 : "You shall not lie with a male as one lies with a female, it is an abomination." (NASB)
I enjoyed the angst between Michael and Kane when he was about to leave Michael. Michael did realize that he gave his life away to too many controllers.
Thank you for your review & yes Michael really did :)