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Reviewer: Hienle21202 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2021 09:05 am Title: Chapter 68: Gun Down

I am excited when Damien came back. He is so crazy but his existence makes story more dramatic

Author's Response:

Yes, in deed there is nothing more excited than a good villian nonetheless, Damien is dead but we have another bad guy worse than Damien. Stay tuned you will see who's this new villian.

Reviewer: Hienle21202 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2021 09:03 am Title: Chapter 68: Gun Down

He must be alive 'cause he is a main character

Author's Response:

Nice to see you back!  thank you. Some times the main character must die, let us not for get that Michael is the main character. However, stay tuned to see what would happen.

Reviewer: wings919 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2021 07:43 am Title: Chapter 68: Gun Down

Oh my gosh of course Ivan will survive! My heart was bleeding.Was Damian dead?Ivan was a delicate human being too and sometimes I almost forgot about it . I love this guy so much! I just wonder how long it will take for him to recover? I just can’t wait for more.

Author's Response:

Damien is done, Alek killed him when he got there just in time, along with his men. And yes, Ivan is a very delicate soul and Michael should've taken him for granted, but now he will suffer. You will see my dear... thank you.

Reviewer: Felicia11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2021 04:34 am Title: Chapter 68: Gun Down

Pobre Iván ojalá esté bien y pobre Michael será duro para el que lío esto cada vez se pone bueno excelente capítulo ojalá todo mejore para ellos dos

Author's Response:

A si es, esto se ponde cada bes mas duro, y lo que biene aun mas. lla veras, my dear; thank you so much as always.

Reviewer: eVa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2021 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 67: After A Passionate Night

Gosh, Michael better watch out for Viktor, I don't have a good feeling about him and what he did to his wife.  Thank you for keeping your stories going, it's very much appreciated.  I really love reading them! 



Author's Response:

Yes, he better watch out for him, you will see who Viktor turns out to be. Thank's to all of you who come back to review my dear. Kisses! 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2021 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 67: After A Passionate Night

Poor Ivan, he's clearly Inlove and wants to do everything he can to help and protect Michael who's being stubborn but maybe it's the possible pregnancy that makes him moody and mean towards Ivan

 

 



Author's Response:

Ah... perhaps, but it's to early, well, I shall tell you anyway, that night they conceived. A lot of things will haven before they find out, that will come in future chapters. Thank you my darling... kisses! 

Reviewer: Hienle21202 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2021 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 67: After A Passionate Night

Well I guess we are going to have another Damien..or even worse

Author's Response:

Indeed my friend, just wait and see. Nice to see your review, thank you.

Reviewer: wings919 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2021 09:51 am Title: Chapter 67: After A Passionate Night

Oh poor Ivan I want him to go mess up with Andrew or anybody else.Just let Michael cry!But maybe Michael would have got pregnant by that time. Michael needs pain to grow up.But I doubt Ivan would give Michael the chance to learn a lesson.
This is a great story and perhaps the only slash MJfic Updating on line darling.Thank you so much for bringing this to us.

Author's Response:

Umm, maybe he will have a fling with Andrew, who knows. Michael have to suffer, you will see darling. And thank you so much. Kisses!

Reviewer: Felicia11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2021 05:05 am Title: Chapter 67: After A Passionate Night

Hay Michael cada día se le complica más las cosas con Iván pobres los dos creo que está es la prueba de fuego para Mike no rendirse ante los deseos y serle fiel a Iván. Me dejaste con ganas de más buena historia chica.

Author's Response:

Si, cada dia se le complica mas todo. lla veras lo que biene. Thank you so much darling.

Reviewer: Strawberry01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2021 08:01 am Title: Chapter 66: Confronting a Furious Wife

How did i miss this update??😓😆 Great chapter once again

Author's Response:

Thank you, darling. I'm glad you saw it.

Reviewer: wings919 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2021 08:57 am Title: Chapter 7: A Kiss At The Cafe'

I didn’t notice that Michael was so flirtatious at the beginning..well now I know he didn’t change one bit.Every time he was serious though

Author's Response:

Haha, yes he is flirty little devil. I'm glad you liked the changes. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: eVa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2021 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 66: Confronting a Furious Wife

Oh boy the drama!  Well Michael made a decision and now he's facing the consequences.  I'm very curious to know Victors true intentions, I don't trust that guy at all.  Thank goodness Michael has Ivan at his side looking out for him.  



Author's Response:

Ah! You will see, darling, you will see. Also check out chapters,1 through 6. I have done modifications to those chapters and chapters 7 is almost done probably tonight. I will do this to most of the chapters. You don't have to leave a review, just check it out and let me know what you think in a new chapter review. Thank you 🙏 for your lovely reviews, darling.

Reviewer: wings919 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2021 09:24 am Title: Chapter 6: Colliding With Damien

Appreciate your work darling! I am so happy for the new edition!And you rewrote The Male Escort too. I got to read several chapters continuously .Thank you so much!

Author's Response:

Thank you 🙏 darling, and about the THE MALE ESCORT, I have not done any modifications, I will do The time traveler first.

Reviewer: staciethehedghog Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2021 01:02 am Title: Chapter 66: Confronting a Furious Wife

Something tells me that Viktor will do more to "quiet" his wife down...

Mike, Ivan is only trying to protect you no matter what the cause is ❤❤❤



Author's Response:

Ah!... yes, you got it... just wait and see, my dear. :-) thank you...

Reviewer: wings919 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2021 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 66: Confronting a Furious Wife

I’ve read the first four chapters and wow I love the details especially those about Ivan and Michael’ s first meeting.And Damien...I remember him clearly. I think I should go through the whole chapters again.And when Michael and Victor were on the phone , I could feel the embarrassment and depression of Ivan for that was a moment he himself became a total stranger.He didn’t even have the time to put up with his own bad emotions. I feel sorry for him so much. Michael messed up with others for years which had kept bringing troubles.Yes he realized that he had taken Ivan for granted but I don’t think he realized how much he depended on him.

Author's Response:

Exactly my friend, what more can I say. About the past chapters, I have made changes up to chapter 5. Tonight, I will up load chapter 6 and so, I am going through one by one. Darling, thank you so much and I will also be working on my other story, THE MALE ESCORT. Bear with me. ;-)

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