Date: Jan 18, 2019 10:29 am Title: The Beginning of Something New
Hey girl, since I have been cheering you on on your other story that I love soooo much, I am all for more stories from you, since you are doing a really great job at writing . But so far I like the story of Michael and Audrey more, but who knows. I am kindly asking you to please not neglect your other story in favor of your new story. For this story I would like to say that : It is an interesting start for sure. Let’s see how it goes.
Author's Response: I had a feeling you would say that lol. No worries, IWBWYA is my baby and will be my primary story so I will be updating it before I update this story. Thank you so much for all the support. I appreciate it!
Date: Jan 18, 2019 08:14 am Title: The Beginning of Something New
So glad you posted this, it’s a great concept and i love the chemistry between Jo and Michael already. Great dynamic. I also really like your writing, it has a film like pace and quality to it. I especially like the line about missing what’s in front of you when you hide behind the glasses, ugh its so damn clever for the context of the story and for the fact Michael is taken by her although he doesn’t know it 100% yet. Great job!
Author's Response: I'm flattered that you said my writing was like a film cause it's exactly how I pictured this story to be. It came to me like a movie. Thank you so much for the review!