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Reviewer: MyraJ25 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2018 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 8

This chapter shocked me to the core..... THEY HAVE A SON TOGETHER?!?!? I’m upset that she got away. Only if if tiny didn’t stopped Michael, he could have gotten to her 😭😭😭😭😭 please let him find her and talk to her. 

Reviewer: misskish Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2018 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 8

Wow didnt see that coming. If that was his best friend that kind of news is really going to rock his world.



Author's Response:

it certainly will rock his world and they will have an interesting futre sorting it out.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: alexandrita Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2018 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 8

Wow i can't believe it! 



Author's Response:

is that good or bad?  Good I hope.  I tried toshock you guys and think I succeeded.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: misskish Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2018 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 7

Like what's going on Michael as a priest that's going to be a challenge because he is in love. Becca is getting big now her journey is just starting.



Author's Response:

They are two people in love but have never been able to admit it.  Will they ever get the chance?  Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2018 01:45 am Title: Chapter 7

She's so not over him, if she was she wouldn't have written the song 

 

I've never understood the whole thing why priests can't have a family of their own Makes no sense to me 

 

 

Hope they can somehow be together  

 

 

 



Author's Response:

time will tell but hopefully its not too late.  thank you so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 14, 2018 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 7

Thank you for that awfully great chapter. I also liked to read Michael’s POV.
And I believe that Becca is stalling and just pretends that she is over him. I am hoping for a happy ending.

Author's Response:

thank you for reading and especially for reviewing.  I was hoping the story would have been more well received so every reader and reviewer is important to me.

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 14, 2018 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 6

They finally confess their feelings for one another and make love!  So sweet and sad. Mike leaves his Becca to follow his calling. Will Becca be able to forget her one And only love.  

 

Great story. I’m very much enjoying it.

Reviewer: alexandrita Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2018 07:40 am Title: Chapter 6

I read all the chapters in a day! I couldn't stop reading haha i can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

thanks for giving it a chance.  im glad you liked it and I'm thrilled you reviewed

Reviewer: MyraJ25 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2018 10:21 am Title: Chapter 6

They finally did it. Their moment was so special. I wonder what will happen now. I really want them together. They’re meant to be a couple. Great chapter 



Author's Response:

thanks i told you to keep waiting =.  I'm glad you liked it.  

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2018 06:58 am Title: Chapter 6

If helping people is your calling become a doctor, male nurse or even make a charity or create a home for the homeless thing there's a zillion other things than being a priest,  why waste your life like that when you found your soulmate, true Love, some people search for them their whole life and still don't find that one special person, shouldn't that mean more than being part of the church (where btw some of those 'good doers' are more selfish than the people donating to charity) I hope he'll change his mind before it's too late 



Author's Response:

The thing is when some people feel a calling thats all they focus on.  In real life, I had a friend who was a priest and before he went to seminary he loved a woman and she let him go telling him he was destined to be a priest.  So it really does happen when someones faith is that deep.  we shall see what happens.

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2018 04:18 am Title: Chapter 6

Oh my god what a sob chapter. It was so emotional and hot and sad and romantic ..... what a waste. Michael should have second thoughts and cone back....😔

Author's Response:

its a mixed bag of emotions..the way I like to keep you guys wondering.  Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2018 10:15 am Title: Chapter 5

Mike and Becca have a special bond.  Becca is afraid to tell Mike her true feelings, where if she did I think that the two would make a wonderful couple.  BUT  she knows what Mike wants in his future and doesn't want to stand in his way..Now thats LOVE..

 

Great update looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2018 08:29 am Title: Chapter 5

How sweet. It is nice to even read a considerably uneventful chapter, but it helps to develop the characters and therefore is essential. Thank you for writing 😘

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2018 01:30 am Title: Chapter 5

Oh Michael there's so many more things in life you can do to help others instead of becoming a priest 

 

Some day Becca and Michael have to admit their feelings to each other 

 

In a way Rick's right he's no priest yet so take advanatage of the freedom of it and maybe change your mind about about being priest too 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2018 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 4

This is so sweet but I am afraid that I can already feel the misunderstandings piling up. I am very sure that Mike likes Becca just as much as she likes him but is afraid to act upon his feelings because she is his best friend and like a sister to him- in away, plus he probably is afraid to upset his friend Rick, so I guess that this might be a reason ( in addition to his convictions and believes) that he wants to become a priest to cope with all of the hardships in his young life.
I would really like for them to end up together. I wonder what comes next. I really wish they both will be courageous enough to tell eachother how they feel about eachother, as I believe it is a mutual feeling of love.❤️

Author's Response:

You are correct but they are both either stubborn or respect each others convictions to give in.  But stick with it...more to come soon.  thanks for reviewing.

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