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Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2018 01:09 pm Title: One: An Incredible Inconvinience

Wow it's really amazing so far with the whole legal court thing you've done well. I'm no expert in civics but I knew a few little legal things in this chapter. Can't wait to read more soon. 



Author's Response:

I’m glad and relieved to know I must be doing it right! Thank you so much for giving me a heads up there because the legal part of this story is what really came between myself and actually writing it, but if you say I’ve done it well then I take your word for it. I appreciate the reassurance and also you giving the story a shot, it means a lot to me Zendaya!

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2018 12:20 pm Title: One: An Incredible Inconvinience

im THRILLED YOU FINALLY DECIDED TO DO THIS MON. U BETTER CONTINUE THIS MON OR UR PAL BURT WILL SLAP U INTO THE SUN

i still love you but I cant. PAL you make it work if YOU DO. its like the saying if you actually care you wont make an excuse yall finddd a way. 

Toronto isn't a small snowy town its a decent sized city lol in Ontario Canada lol

omfg that's exactly what id say i lovvee ittt "Yea i know who you are" lmao

you betcha oMG THATS SUCH AN MN THING TO SAY

i love how quonches ass is like BIH I MADE BOTH OF YOU NOW IMMA PLAY CUPID

and that he calls her skittles loll

i get that hes charming LMAO

DAMN that was deep quonch good and deep. Quonch has some awesome insight here.

that's why a certain nymph wooing chaos creating glitter sockin mykeroo takes a millenium to finish anything

lol anyone who disagrees can clean their ears HAHAA

exactllly good thingss cant be rusheeddddd

oo that last sentence. didnt know that about pieces

 

gurl this was amazing i love it so much. i legit wanna hear something she sings now i lovee that kinda music. 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

COME ON Burtina. You don’t even know what the deal was in the first flashback and there really might not be a way! What happened is pretty serious! I said a small town IN TORONTO, where I think it snows like a lot. Haha every time I tried to write Quincy’s name it legit kept auto correcting to Quonch and I cried every time because our jokes are just too intrusive, even in daily life, like I can’t NOT laugh when someone mentions Harry Potter. 

A total coincidence is that I actually share the same birthday as the faceclaim for this story LOL, and I don’t believe in horoscopes but as a Pisces myself, I do believe that creativity and talents in the arts is a part of our personality. But miss me with the ‘mercury in retrograde’ shit lmao 

I’m really not sure if I’ll continue this tbh...I’ll see. I’d love to finish it. Thank you as always for your incredible support and bomb af reviews, you know I LOVE THEM. Til next time, Cristina! <3

Reviewer: CircusGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2018 11:01 am Title: One: An Incredible Inconvinience

This story is off to an amazing start!! I love it!

Author's Response:

I’m super glad you like it! Thank you!

Reviewer: Klovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2018 11:08 pm Title: One: An Incredible Inconvinience

I think that this is the most original plot I’ve ever seen!! You’re great 

Reviewer: Klovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2018 11:07 pm Title: One: An Incredible Inconvinience

I think that this is the most original plot I’ve ever seen!! You’re great 



Author's Response:

Aw I was definitely trying to go for something that hasn’t been done yet, even though it was a real challenge for me, so thank you for your supportive comment! 

Reviewer: wordonthestreets32 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2018 05:41 pm Title: One: An Incredible Inconvinience

Reading about his death saddens me but I powered through. I’m curious as to what happened between them. I can’t wait to read for more!

Author's Response:

Writing about his death is really difficult to do too, and I know it’s a sensitive area for us fans, so it’s not going to be discussed much in the story. Ooohhhhh well what happened...that’s to come at a later stage! Thank you SO much for your support!

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2018 05:10 pm Title: One: An Incredible Inconvinience

well I like the start of this new story hm onion~. even we got a small taste of what angela and michael were like it was so cute! I'm glad Angela was able to treat him normal (and breathe) makes me wonder how their relationship will evolve down the line even with Quincy teasing and giving good life advice. I agree along with him that she will make it! it takes time to break in that business all she gotta do is be patient and keep working on her craft. I want you to continue this story onion. A great start <3



Author's Response:

This is definitely just a preview. The relationship that I got planned for them is crazy crazy crazy shit. At this point Angela has little recognition but she’s getting there and she will blow up in the industry. Quincy had some good advice but he doesn’t want her getting distracted since it’s a crucial af time in her career to get her debut album done. Thank you so much for your encouragement tomato <3

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2018 04:38 pm Title: One: An Incredible Inconvinience

Why oh why did he hung up in the beginning?  

 


That whole scene in the court room, that feels so real 😱


I love the 'can I have my hand back' part that's so cute 


It's already addicting so please do continue     



Author's Response:

What you read in the start is a whole different story that’s yet to come! All I can say is that Michael has his reasoning. Aw thank you pea I really did try my best with the court scene, that means a lot to me! I might continue, I shall see! 

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