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Reviewer: yourburgersarethebest Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2019 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 1: Chance Meeting

Nice start! I enjoyed the part where Michael is being chased. It's a perfect spot to add humor.

Reviewer: yourburgersarethebest Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2019 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 1: Chance Meeting

Nice start! I enjoyed the part where Michael is being chased. It's a perfect spot to add humor.

Reviewer: Erinspiration_xo Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2019 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1: Chance Meeting

Haha, oh my goodness! I feel so sorry for poor Michael's body guards. I laughed at loud at "he can't tell me what to do, I pay him". I also enjoy how flirtatious he was, especially since there are a lot of stories from people he knew about him being that way. And the baby is too cute. Can't wait to read on, keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Just stay tuned the next chapter will blow your mind. You're going to see a different side of Michael. 

Reviewer: wendymj0307 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2018 02:45 am Title: Chapter 3: Go For Rounds

Hot!Hot!Hot!(fans herself)

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2018 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 3: Go For Rounds

Zaaammmnnnn Mike. ๐Ÿ‘€

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2018 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 2: Birthday Girl

Im really feeling this story. Michael is so bold and openly flirtatious. Me likey๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜ˆ. I will definitely check out your YouTube channel and subscribe to it. I have one with my boyfriend called Stroke and Bre and we do Challenges, vlogs, mortorbike vids and more . Hope you sub to us and check out our videos. Great story tho.



Author's Response:

I subbed too you and turned on notifications. If you guys are not too far we should defintely collab. I also have a channel with my best friend which I'm going to sub to you guys on there too. Thank you for subbing back and thank you for enjoying this story. A new chapter is coming soon and I promise it will be even better than this one. 

Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2018 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 2: Birthday Girl

I am loving this story and it my first time  reading it so keep it coming๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

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