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Reviewer: Whitney98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2018 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 18 - “I’m gay, sis.”

Update soon!!!

 



Author's Response: I will! I'm working on the next installment now. Thanks for reading! :D

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2018 10:02 am Title: Chapter 17 - "She will bite harder than any damn rattlesnake"

I just finished reading all chapters and I wanted to say I love it.  Your writing is excellent and I love the pacing of the story.  Great job.



Author's Response: Thank you so much! That truly has touched my heart. I finished reading your story Secret Sessions as well and I am in love with your stories as well. CAnnot wait to read more of your updates. :D

Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2018 03:46 am Title: Chapter 17 - "She will bite harder than any damn rattlesnake"

Omg girl you need to stop you killing me lol l just in love with this story😄😄😄💟💟



Author's Response: Haha, girl you know I got to keep you on your toes! I'm so happy that you are enjoying the story. Stay tuned for more! :D

Reviewer: Whitney98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2018 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 17 - "She will bite harder than any damn rattlesnake"

Awwww please update soon!!! I love how you have Michael acting, it’s what imagine he was like. This is by far one of my favorite stories on here:)



Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Don't worry, I plan to update ASAP! And thank you so much for saying how that's how you imagine him to be, that is what I'm trying to do have him act as natural. I'm beyond happy that this is one of your favorites on here. You truly made my night! Stay tuned!!!! :D

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2018 08:18 am Title: Chapter 1 - Enter Holly Williams

Great start. On to the next chapter



Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2018 06:24 am Title: Chapter 16 - Lust equals guilt

Wow , that was close! But Holly is right, but she surely was very harsh and hurtful towards Michael.

Author's Response: Haha very close and such a missed opportunity! And I completely agree with you, she is right but was too harsh towards Michael. Holly seems to have the flaw of running her mouth too quickly before her brain does. Stay tuned for the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2018 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Meeting the family

What can l say love these two 💃💃😁😁😀😊💟💟💟💟



Author's Response: Yay! I'm so happy that you do! Stay tuned for the next chapter that is coming soon! :) Thank you for reading, rating, and reviewing!!! :DD

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2018 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 14 - "Fuck the hospital policy!"

Oh wow, what a swift and unexpected change of events . That was scary it fortunately goatee the end of the chapter it all got better. I really liked how human your Michael is in your story: He curses and gives her mother a piece of his mind. Great. I think I they make a lovely coffee upps. Can’t wait for Holly’s recovery and hospital release so that they can spend some quality time together as planned and hopefully visit her uncle and aunt before Michael has to resume his tour

Author's Response: Hi, Gigi! Thanks for the review! This made my evening! When you said you liked how human Michael is that made me smile because that is exactly what I'm going for!!! I'm striving for a healthy balance Michael's sweetness and him getting too it. LOL! Stay tuned for the upcoming chapters...currently writing the next one now!!!! Thanks so much!!! :)

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2018 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 13 - "…I love you."

Oh, I very much like this story of yours. Hopefully they will stay strong and build a solid relationship throughout their careers and lives. Nice work so far. Please keep it positive. I love positive stories with good vibes, humor and great emotions.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you are enjoying this story! Like most relationships, they will have their ups and downs, but with Michael and Holly, the ups will definitely outweigh the downs. ;) Stay tuned!

Reviewer: wordonthestreets32 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2018 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Enter Holly Williams

yaaas I see it lol! Holly actually looks really pretty and cute. Well let me know if you want one and I'll gladly make it :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll definitely think about it. FYI this is what I picture is Holly in the 80s ;)

Reviewer: wordonthestreets32 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2018 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Enter Holly Williams

I just noticed you said your e-mail doesn't work and i told you not to e-mail me lol. Anyway, I can make you one and just copy and past the link in here. I'll just upload it to my server and all you have to do is copy the code and past it to the summary part if it'd be easier for you.

Author's Response: Lol, Thank you so much! I just made a temporary one to make sure you or anyone else doesn't miss it. But I may take you up on your offer, mine did not turn out very well but its something for now. LOL!!!!

Reviewer: wordonthestreets32 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2018 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 13 - "…I love you."

I'm cheesing so hard lol. This is such a cute chapter. It's must be tough to be away from each other on the holidays. Hopefully, the next chapter will be about them reuniting. Awesome chapter as always!!

Btw, whatever happened to the banner that was made? I feel like people miss this story so easily and it's such a great story too! I know I'm late in reading sometimes because I've scrolled past the story by accident.

Author's Response: Aww, I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter! I felt bad it took forever but its a segway for the upcoming chapters. I had some email issues and was unable to access anything and I'm still not so that's why I haven't been able to have the banner done. But honestly, the views don't matter to me in the end. Having your feedback means the world to me and I appreciate it so much. Thanks and stay tuned for the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: wordonthestreets32 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2018 10:07 am Title: Chapter 12 - “I promise, I can handle this.”

It's interesting that Holly picked someone who was like her mother to manage her. The ending was a sweet moment. We need to see more of that lol. Great story so far, I can't wait to see where it goes from here.

Always going to review! As an author, myself, it takes a lot of time and effort to write. Reviews keep me going just to get a feel of what the audience wants. You're doing great! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much. I guess Holly is just so used to a specific type of managing that she cannot break free of it haha! I will definitely try to incorporate more sweet moments in the future for you guys. :) I'm so happy that you see the importance in it. As always, hugs to you and thank you for the rating and review! :)

Reviewer: wordonthestreets32 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2018 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 11 - No more hiding

This is so sweet! Of course Joe had to be in the way. Mike might want to change the locks from now on. I can’t wait to see how their music career will turn out from here on out. Great story so far! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know, Joe is always in the way when it comes to Michael. Stay tuned for lots more. Thank you so much for always commenting, you always give me the motivation to continue! :D Hugs to you!

Reviewer: wordonthestreets32 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2018 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 11 - No more hiding

This is so sweet! Of course Joe had to be in the way. Mike might want to change the locks from now on. I can’t wait to see how their music career will turn out from here on out. Great story so far! Keep it up!

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