[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2018 10:37 am Title: Luck or Curse?
Jesus! There's so much drama! At least these two are on the same page now! I hate Tatum and William!
Author's Response: Next chapter will be calmer lol. Thanks for leaving a review!
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2018 06:20 pm Title: Luck or Curse?
Definitely a yay for me girl! My emotions were all over the place with this chapter. Anger came first when Michael and Audrey got into it after he let Tatum stay (though he should've just got her a different hotel room and called it a day). Then it was a bittersweet moment when Will and Audrey ran into each other. I was half-expecting that date to be the start of something between them and when Michael came to visit her that night after getting the pictures from Bill I thought she had slept with Will (back to anger again). And then I was shooketh when the girl in the pictures was Leslie. HA. With friends like that Audrey doesn't need enemies. Then I was ecstatic when Michael and Audrey rekindled and apologized.
Amada is fate I don't care what anyone says LOL.
And damn girl! Where's the kiss?!
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2018 06:05 pm Title: Amada
Here comes Tatum's seducing ass. No is no my friend, so what is she not understanding? And of course Audrey had to see the interaction between the two of them, but I hope she takes Michael's disgust and "get off me" into account. Ugh! Leave it to Tatum to start mucking stuff up.
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2018 05:53 pm Title: K.I.S.S.
That apology was much needed and the conversation between the two was smooth sailing. I enjoyed reading it. Now that they've buried the hatchet I'm excited to see the relationship bloom... or deteriorate... whichever comes first (hopefully the former).
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2018 05:44 pm Title: The Spoiled Brat
Girl some of these readers on this site, don't know 'ish about writing a quick review! Like three sentences a kill 'em. Anyway, no she did not smack him. But he was being rude considering she was trying to help him... talkin' 'bout some "are you enjoying yourself". Nigga... what? LOL.
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2018 05:34 pm Title: I Hate Him!
Audrey done 'bout had it and we only three chapters in. Doreen has me cracking up, man! Not that I disagree with what she said because hey Michael deserves some but his arrogance is making him ugly and only pushing Audrey away. Hyped to see where this will end up going!
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2018 05:25 pm Title: A Different Side
Of course he found her. The man had the world at his finger tips. Better than Big Brother who by the way is always watching LOL. Anyway, I'm curious to see how Audrey will react... she did think that all his advances were resultants from the medication. Now that she knows he was serious I wonder what's going to happen.
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2018 05:15 pm Title: Prologue
Chuckling up a storm on the other side of this computer at this interaction between Michael and Audrey. I agree with her though I don't think it's anatomically possible for an angel and a human to conceive and if it was I feel that there would be a lot of mutations involved LOL.
[Report This]Date: Jul 01, 2018 12:51 pm Title: Luck or Curse?
Giiirl, what a great thing you updated shortly after my impatience was seemingly getting the best of me😉😅. Thank you
And what an eventful chapter it turned out to be. Wow, thank god he straightened things out with her but I didn’t like how stubborn they were to begin with . I was also surprised that he was so straight forward when he said that there is an „ us“ when they had merely just become friends before Tatum showed up.
But I also loved the „ did it work, though „ scene“ . Great and comical. I like cocky Michael. Wonder how he gets drunken Audrey down from the rooftop. He will most definitely have to carry her to „ their“ shared suite. Funny! Sorry to say that but again, please hurry with the update, because your story is so much fun to read.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! The "us" that Michael was referring to were the sparks and chemistry they had. He was definitely flirty but had to take it 200 steps down lol. Audrey received his baby steps well. I usually put the date on top for readers but I failed to do that on the previous chapter. It had been a couple weeks since they first made up which is why the first scene on chapter 6 was the plane ride. Sorry for the confusion -_-;
Thanks for always reviewing! Lots of love!
[Report This]Date: Jul 01, 2018 12:24 am Title: Luck or Curse?
I’m not going to lie to you I laughed and did a fist pump when it was reveled that Leslie was seeing Will. I thought it was funny that she was seeing some secret man and wouldn’t tell Audrey. I was like um hum I know you messing around with your best friend crush heifer, smh.
On the up side I’m looking forward to seeing this relationship develops between Michael and Audrey.
Author's Response: Lol glad you caught that. I gave little hints here and there and I was hoping the readers would remember since it's been awhile since Leslie and Will were brought up. Thank you so much for the feedback!
Date: Jun 30, 2018 11:28 pm Title: Luck or Curse?
Hurry update!!! I want them to kiss!!!!
Author's Response: I will ;)
Date: Jun 30, 2018 08:21 am Title: Luck or Curse?
Couldn’t help but laugh at the ‘but did it work though’ part. So sassy haha.
Mom glad they worked out their little rift that was between them. I guess there is more to come the next day, since she was drunk at the end. Can’t wait for more ☺ï¸
Author's Response: Lol I'm glad you enjoyed that part. Apparently Michael was hilarious and I try to convey that as much as possible. Thank you for the feedback :D
Date: Jun 30, 2018 07:52 am Title: Luck or Curse?
I like long chapters. I’m glad he took care of the Tatum thing, and I hope Aubrey’s ok
Author's Response: I love them when I read but as an author, it’s quite a pain lol. Glad you’re enjoying the story so far ♥ï¸
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2018 06:22 am Title: Luck or Curse?
I enjoyed it. A little drama is always good to keep things exciting. I’m glad they made up though. Hopefully they can get some alone time soon without the interruptions that always seem to pop up and ruin the moment.
Author's Response: Oh yes definitely. Next chapter has no distractions for sure. I don’t tend to throw too much drama in my stories unless it is crucial to character growth â˜ºï¸ Thank you for the review!
Date: Jun 29, 2018 03:53 pm Title: Amada
Giiiirll, I am anxiously waiting for another update. It is so needed. Please don’t tell me that you are suffering from another „ writer’s block „ attack... 😩😳
Hope all is well😘
Author's Response: No writer's block, dear. The chapter needs more tweaking and will be posted in an hour or so. Promise!