[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2019 10:34 pm Title: Prologue
Hey girl, just finished reading chapter two on your latest story. I miss Audrey and Michael, though- a whole lot. And Michael’s feisty assistant arguing with ol Frank. Any chances that you will update that story?
Author's Response: Hey~ I know it's been a while. I got swamped by school work and I'm so close to graduating so its gotta be priority right now. I have been writing and editing as much as possible so no worries, I haven't stopped sorry its taking a little longer than anticipated. I was always going to update this story first but the chapter from the other story got done prior and was just sitting there. Rest assured, girl! I am writing and will update :)
Date: Feb 19, 2019 01:30 pm Title: Setting Boundaries
I’m loving the chemistry between Michael and Audrey right now. They are so cute, I can’t wait to read more of your story
Date: Feb 01, 2019 06:57 am Title: Setting Boundaries
I love this story!!! I hope you’re able to update soon😊😊😊
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2019 12:12 am Title: The Spoiled Brat
Very nice chapter. That smack she gave Michael was too funny. Michael has no idea what he's in for with this one.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the reviews!
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2019 11:44 pm Title: A Different Side
I love the bond between Audrey and Allison. And I was so happy when Michael told Tatum to get off him. I couldn't stand her. Yay, Michael found Audrey again. Can't wait to see how this plays out!
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2019 12:39 pm Title: Prologue
I'm really enjoying this so far! So intriguing. I love Michael under the infulence of anesthesia. He just doesn't care what he's saying and it's so amusing. I also like how he was well enough to catch himself when he was being too forward. I think this is going to be a very amusing story. And for some reason, I get the vibe that Michael is going to be very persistent about that date.
Nice job so far.
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2019 08:23 am Title: Setting Boundaries
And don’t even get me started on their chemistry . They have the greatest chemistry! They are so hot and have it so bad for each other. Frankly I don’t think they will be able to contain themselves 😉🥰but it is like Audrey said: It would definitely be too early. They should take it slow. But the desire is so high already, Jehova’s witness or not, I believe that Michael will become a sweet sinner in the very near future- but since he is so very much sure about his feelings and about Audrey being the one, I am sure he won’t have any regrets. Who knows, he might as well be asking for her hand some time down the road when they have developed a solid foundation. And once she will be able to help him with his health issues and show him that she is reliable and caring and trustworthy, he won’t ever want to live a day without her. Again, your story is great and has enormous potential. Loved the fact that he stunnned her with his revelations! Her reaction: Priceless 😉🥰🙃🤪💋 This is so funny. But like I said. They’ve got it bad for each other, so it is only a matter of time. It’s a pleasure to read. But he is such a sweetheart and perfect gentleman. Please don’t ever let anything come between them. I would like to see them sticking together like glue and being each other’s security blanket and rock , you know.
Author's Response: As always, thank you so much for the reviews! I appreciate this very much. We'll just have to see if either of them gives in lol. I really was going to go further with this chapter but I did remember that Michael mentioned he was celibate in an earlier chapter. That would've been a major flaw in the plot so I decided to keep this no matter how much they like each other so far.
Just letting you know, update will be delayed to this weekend. I have finals and a paper due this week so I really gotta grind. Didn't want you to be left wondering. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2019 05:49 am Title: Setting Boundaries
Girl, as much as I am thankful that you resumed writing and updating, I am always saddened because the chapters are wayyy toooo short. But it was an extremely good chapter. I loved that you included the letter from her boss in it, too. These two are so cute. I am so happy that they are finally heading in the same direction. I only hope that Steve will keep his mouth shut, because Audrey told him things she might not have before talking about how to go about things before with Mike. Looooooved it. So thank you ðŸ™ðŸ¿. And also thank you for your reply and for doing what and how you are doing it â¤ï¸â¤ï¸â¤ï¸ðŸ˜˜ Much love. I am addicted to this and definitely need more and fast
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2019 02:09 pm Title: Prologue
I just remembered one of my very first reviews when I expressed why I love your storyline so much. It’s because if has do much potential with Audrey being a doctor and in love with Michael. She can help find a cure for his multiple health issues - at least in fiction it is possible for him to get cured and to keep his wonderful chocolate brown skin color. This is what fictional stories can do right. One can dare to dream . Since you have not been writing anything about the outcome of Audrey ‘a research from the earlier chapters, I would like to remind you and politely ask you to please follow that path on her helping him. Being his salvation. Please don’t be mad at me for reminding you. If I was able to create such wonderful stories I would do it myself, but this simply is none of my talents . So, since you came up with that great storyline about a female doctor and Mike I am suggesting it to you. That would be fantastic â¤ï¸ðŸ˜˜
Author's Response: Hey girl! I just read your review and I just updated lol. I had to develop trust between the two before they deal with the heavy stuff so it's taking a while. Or it may seem that way because I've been slow at updating lol but it will be addressed soon!
Date: Jan 18, 2019 01:50 pm Title: Prologue
Aww he’s so cute!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2019 12:46 pm Title: The Heart Wants What It Wants (Part II)
Omg they finally kissed yesss I'm so excited! They're so cute together. Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: Jan 14, 2019 07:14 am Title: Prologue
Just read your reply. Well, since you asked for my opinion, I must say that the chemistry was not as strong at times throughout the chapter as it used to, so you telling me that you had difficulties writing and maintaining it while doing so, made perfect sense to me. But regardless. I think you are just a little rusty. I am sure the more frequently you work on it, the more magic you will be able to create. Because Michael is magical😘
Take care
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the critique! It helps me gauge where I'm at as a writer. I know I'm rusty for sure. Writing monotone research papers have definitely affected the creative process. I've been reading books to get inspired and hopefully it'll help. Again, thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2019 07:10 am Title: The Heart Wants What It Wants (Part II)
Yes! They finally kissed. OMG! Thank you. This chapter did not disappoint. It was an extremely long wait, though. I love the first person narration especially if it’s done from both perspectives like you did, or didn’t you? I don’t remember. I was so absorbed with the story. Anyhow, keep doing what you are doing because it is great. Please keep on with it. I loved it. I wonder what happens next. Can’t wait to read the next chapter. Hopefully you will write and upload it soon.
😘😘😘ðŸ˜
Date: Jan 14, 2019 04:49 am Title: Prologue
OH MY GOD! YOU UPDATED! I Haven’t read it, yet but am about to. But before I do, I just wanted to thank you soooo sincerely for doing so, because after all this time, I was not so sure you would ever continue. So thank you. This is fantastic and a happy and healthy new year to you with lots of joy, success—- and last but not least- great ideas for your story 😘
Author's Response: Thank you! Happy new year to you too! Thanks for patiently waiting. Inspiration comes and goes. I'm not gonna lie, this is the 5th revision. I've been trying so hard to capture and maintain the chemistry in their relationship. There were hiccups while I was posting so I hope there weren't any issues. Let me know your thoughts!
Date: Jan 09, 2019 10:19 pm Title: Prologue
Happy New Year to you. I hope the exam went well and for my own sake I am still hoping that you will continue with this story in time. Have a wonderful day 🎆😘