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Reviewer: Whitney98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2018 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 4

Update soon!!

Reviewer: wordonthestreets32 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2018 12:19 am Title: Chapter 4

Yay an update! This is great so far. For some reason, I see them exchanging letters rather than texts but I think it's just more convenient to use the phone. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I actually had wanted it to be them exchanging letters, but it would take so long between them and Michael's taking off for Japan so texting just ended up making more sense. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2018 12:44 am Title: Chapter 3

I like your writing style and the way you are taking your time to work out the characters and the plot. Great English, so I presume you are a native speaker. It is essential for a good story to use proper English and your story seems to build up just fine. Like the calm and quite moments where you are describing Michael’s solitude and his desperation and exhaustion. It is sad but then again makes your story all so much more interesting and believable as it is close to the truth. I am looking forward to the next chapter 👍💕

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2018 09:18 am Title: Chapter 3

This is fantastic woman. This story reminds me of the essay Constance Pierce wrote of MJ and JD Salinger called 'Privacy'. Your art is a truly tribute to MJ and literature. Lovely!



Author's Response: Oh, wow. Thank you! I will have to look up that essay and give it a read. :-)

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2018 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 3

lovee this update. like the friendship dynamics you went into more. contrasting doug and ivys buisness yet friends relationship with michael and rods and franks. lol the cat. sounds like ivys got anxiety ;/ sucks me too.  love how you described at the end how exhausting it is for him to make friends really cuz he has to do a complete background check on em and find out what they really want etc. 

 



Author's Response: Thank you :) Yes, Ivy is definitely suffering from anxiety, and it will be addressed further down the line a little more. Not knowing who he could trust seems to me to be one of the most heartbreaking things. Hopefully here he makes a new acquaintance very soon...

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2018 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 3

I am still very much enjoying this so far, Ivy is so sweet I really like her personality. I can identify with her a lot seeing as I’m a literature addict 😂 and I really love this whole concept; haven’t come across anything like it before. At this moment it’s clear that Ivy has no intention of getting involved with her muse Michael Jackson, if you will, but little does she know he’s going to go see her...! Well that’s what I’m predicting anyway👀. I’m looking forward to the next update! 



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm also a literature addict and after reading how Michael Jackson was a big reader I couldn't help myself. It won't be too long now until they're interacting here. :)

Reviewer: wordonthestreets32 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2018 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 3

Yay awesome chapter! I can't wait until they meet. Hopefully soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm drawing it out a little so I can build Ivy and her friends (and Michael's OC friends) up as characters. It won't be too long now, though. :)

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2018 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hi! I saw your review on my story earlier and also realised you have a story too so I thought I’d give it a try. Well, I’m glad I did! I think this is an interesting beginning - love how they are inspired by each-other’s art. I’m here for this!



Author's Response: Thank you! I love your story! It's so great:D Thank you for stopping by to read mine! I hope you like where this one goes.

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 2

OMG i just decided to click on this and wow this is so well written and beautiful cant wait to see more. love Ivy's backstory and context as an author. love colin and michales dynamic. 



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will be updating very soon! :-D

Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2018 05:46 am Title: Chapter 2

I'm glad you're showing us something different. We know Michael is a bookworm and I love the fact there's a writer in this story. Thank you!



Author's Response: XD I'm glad you are enjoying it! Books and music just seem to go together. :-)

Reviewer: waterlily91 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2018 07:47 am Title: Chapter 1

This is very good so far. It's weird having young Jacksons in modern time but hey, what ever works for you.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I like to play a little fast and loose with time. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: wordonthestreets32 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2018 01:32 am Title: Chapter 2

Great writing! I enjoyed reading it. I like the intelligent and mature side to him. Although you'd consider this an OOC Michael, I can actually picture him being like this. Kinda reminds me of the Brett Ratner interview that he did.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I went ahead and tweaked the info so it says he's probably OOC. The idea for this story came after I read Moonwalk and he mentioned that he always loved reading and always traveled with a book. My brain took off from there. :D

Reviewer: lovinthethrill04 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2018 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like it! Continue with more soon please.. 



Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 2 will be up soon.

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