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Reviewer: Thatkliqkid Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2018 07:14 am Title: CH 1: October 1973

I like how we're exploring Adrianna's and Michael's past. It's interesting and well written. One thing though, sometimes you slip from past tense into present tense.

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 01:30 am Title: CH 3: It's Not Over

Aww, that was so sweet. Their heated encounter. They are so lovely. Can’t wait for the next chapter 😘👍

Reviewer: indiaXO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2018 10:30 pm Title: CH 3: It's Not Over

the pace of this story is just right. it's so great so far! 😁❤️❤️

Reviewer: ccreid1987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2018 07:32 pm Title: CH 2: Ready For Love

Oh wow. Love this story so far.

Reviewer: CoveredInRust Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2018 08:29 pm Title: CH 2: Ready For Love

Ooooh, interesting. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Whitney98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2018 02:31 pm Title: CH 2: Ready For Love

Update soon!!

Reviewer: indiaXO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2018 12:03 pm Title: CH 2: Ready For Love

I am really liking this story so far. your writing is so amazing! ❤️ I can't wait to read more from you.

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2018 11:18 pm Title: CH 2: Ready For Love

Oh my gosh, what now? Is the his the end before it even started?

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2018 02:07 pm Title: CH 1: October 1973

Oh, I like it so far. Sounds realistic, nice setting. We‘ll see.
So far so good. Keep on with it. Thank you 😊

Reviewer: Whitney98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2018 08:58 am Title: CH 1: October 1973

I really like this idea, you’ll have to update soon plz!!

Reviewer: MjjPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2018 10:04 pm Title: CH 1: October 1973

I already know this is a story I will be invested in. It is very hard to pique my interests, but here I am! Love the set up of the plot with the star father. Plus, I like this era range too. I am excited for what's to come! Great job~

Reviewer: Jcayy21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2018 08:53 pm Title: CH 1: October 1973

I love the intro to this story. Great story so far- Can't wait for the next chapter

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