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Reviewer: lovinthethrill04 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2018 06:27 pm Title: 3. back down memory lane.

Wow michael needs to get it together and realize he has a good, suppo rting, and loving woman infront of him and three kids who need his support as a father smh..

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2018 01:20 am Title: 2. misunderstanding.

My thoughts on Michael..... hmmm.... skin him alive. I just hope a REAL GROWN ASS MAN come into the picture and do what Michael didnt bet he'd try to do right but it'll be too late to play "good father". Demetrius needs a real man and father on her life and the kids. They deserve that happiness. I hope it happens for them.

Reviewer: Michaelsbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2018 12:13 pm Title: 2. misunderstanding.


Reviewer: Thrillmegirl008 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2018 04:05 am Title: 1. prologue.

This caught my eye. Plz continue

Author's Response: I most definitely will, and thank you! ❤️ I'm so glad you're enjoying this story thus far.

Reviewer: lovinthethrill04 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2018 10:09 pm Title: 1. prologue.

Ooh nice intro to demi and michael. Its interesting how you made his character not as boyish with a kind personality as this would be a usual mj fanfic. But I look forward to read more!😊

Author's Response: with this story, my goal was to portray Michael in a much different light than the average MJ fanfic. thank you so much for your feedback! I greatly appreciate it! 😁😁❤️

Reviewer: live_laughxx Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2018 09:20 pm Title: 1. prologue.

I like it. 

Author's Response: thank you! ❤️❤️

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