Reviews For As We Lay
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Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2017 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1

Wowwww so intense and beautifull

Reviewer: MjjPYT Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2017 10:13 am Title: Chapter 1

Okay THIS was great. I neeeeeed more. I neeed backstories and drama. You just did something.

Reviewer: live_laughxx Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2017 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

Triflan.

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2017 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Sister?! Holy smokes! I like the way it ended!

Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2017 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

Jesus Christmas! I truly enjoyed the story!. Looking forward to read more of you. You're exceptional.

Reviewer: Susie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2017 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nigga I’m still shook and I still would like to fight ajcjsjcjsj

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2017 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Funny and swift ending for sure.

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2017 11:15 am Title: Chapter 1

This was really good and wrapped up nicely. Wasn’t expecting that twist at the end! 



Author's Response: I wasn't expecting that either, but it just came out. Thank you so much for your feedback. I really appreciate and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: ddstephens9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2017 05:20 am Title: Chapter 1

I want more..this is getting good.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for your response! I was thinking about making this a three part one shot, but I wasn't sure. But I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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