Date: Feb 24, 2018 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 8: This Damn Pride
Happy to see you update. The story is really great. As for your health, I hope you get well soon. I have diabetics in my family, so I know the toll it can take on you. Just keep your head up, and do what you can to keep yourself healthy. Much LOVE. ❤️
You are lovely my dear, thank you so much. And yes, we have too thrive, hopefully things get back to normal again. Kisses ♥️
Date: Feb 23, 2018 05:05 am Title: Chapter 8: This Damn Pride
Hope you feel Better soon
Poor Allison you just want to hold him till all his broken pieces melt back together again
Hopefully with Michaels help Allison will finally heal from his terrible past and horrible parents and hopefully Sarah won't be too much trouble in the future
Thank you so much, darling... Umm, that Sarah girl, she won't let go that easily. And Allison's parents are not out of his life just yet, especially his father. He planed this wedding since Allison was born, his main purpose is the inheritance Allison will receive and he's willing to do anything just to get his hands on that money. However, Allison will not be alone this time. This time Allison has Michael. Oh, god, I will need to come back to this feedback to refresh my inspiration... Baby thank you once again and kisses...
Date: Feb 23, 2018 04:47 am Title: Chapter 8: This Damn Pride
I understand Mystica and I’m very sorry you are going through a rough time. I was the one who deleted the reviews because once I saw them, I didn’t need to see them anymore and that wasn’t a real review to begin with. I want you to have real reviews that talk about the story, not reviews asking when the next update will be. Again, I’m sorry you are going through a rough time. This chapter was really sweet and great. I’m glad they finally realize their love for each other. I know Allison will tell Michael about the baby and his horrible past sometime. Can’t wait for the next update!
Oh, I am having it rough and I'm really stressed. I can't focus on my stories while I'm going through this... It's not only my health, it's my husband as well, he's losing his job after working for this company for twenty years. I have to be there for him help him up dealing with his stress. We are losing the medical insurance and I need medicine for life. I tell him that there are other ways to get insurance and not to worry about me, but he does... anyhow, darling thank you for caring and I'm so glad to know your interest in my stories... all my kisses to you my dear and hopefully I can regain my inspiration and get back to my writing. :-(
Date: Jan 27, 2018 05:29 am Title: Chapter 7: Run Away
Oh that bitch!! I can’t believe she did that! I hope Michael will find Allison and explain everything! I’m so happy that Michael has finally realized that Allison is Dove! Also, does Allison have an Adam’s apple or not? Great chapter! Also, when will you locate the billionaire’s pet?
Allison does not have an Adam's Apple so as Dove. Michael have remembered those little things about Allison... and baby, I will update the BILLIONAIRE'S PET just for you. I need to find my inspiration back for this story, thank you for support my dear... kisses!
Date: Jan 27, 2018 01:22 am Title: Chapter 7: Run Away
Smh Michael just tell Sarah you want a break before it's too late
Michael and Allison they need to talk and he needs to explain why 'Dove' stopped have contact with him Michael will understand I'm sure
Oh. Yes they need to have that conversation, but Allison ran away. Will he find him? Thank you so much darling... kisses!!
Date: Jan 20, 2018 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 6: Loves Me Or Loves Me Not?
OMG !! XDXDD COULD IT BE THAT MICHEAL KNOWS ALLISON IS REALLY DOVE ??! HE'S BEING PATIENT, I THINK THAT'S VERY SEXY. XDXDXD MICHAEL IS SUPER SEXY IN ANY ROLE HE PLAYS. ALTHOUGH I STILL PREFER HIM AS A SUBMISSIVE. I WONDER WHAT SECRET MICHAEL IS HIDING? I KNOW IT WILL BE INTERESTING. HE'S SEXY HERE, BUT I THOUGHT THE BAD ERA MICHAEL IN THE BLACK SUIT WAS PERFECT FOR THIS STORY. XD THAT'S THE WAY I STILL SEE HIM. I CAN'T GET IT OUT OF MY HEAD I GUESS, LOL LOL XD. I REALLY LOVE THE OFF THE WALL, BAD, CAPTAIN EO, & THRILLER ERAS. I THINK YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER MY FRIEND, PLEASE CONTINUE. XD I'M GIVING THIS AMAZING CHAPTER 10 !!! XDXDXD
Yo are right my dear, Michael is sexy in any era. I just got a little more inspired seeing him in Strenger in Moscow video, haha! And yeah, I do miss the submissive Michael, I'm working on my other story, you will see it soon. Thank you baby for your support...kisses!!❤
Date: Jan 16, 2018 05:04 am Title: Chapter 6: Loves Me Or Loves Me Not?
HIStory era is more hot! That kiss was hot as well! Looks like they are getting closer! Hope he tells his secret soon. Great chapter!
Oh, yeah, to me, he looked sexier, that is why I've decided to change the era so that it can help me visualize my character as the top dominating male over what it is Allison's character, fragile, beautiful and sensitive... boy I never thought that I could write about Michael being the male dominant, and look at me now? I'm enjoying this, it's sweet and sexy at the same time. I truly believed that I was going to end up hating this story, and honestly, I really love it... thank your support dear. it means a lot to me.
Date: Jan 16, 2018 02:18 am Title: Chapter 6: Loves Me Or Loves Me Not?
This was so sweet
I think Michael will understand when Allison tells him he's Dove, he might be hurt but when Allison explains everything I'm sure Michael will understand
And Allison is so in love, and also so traumatized by unfair punishment, he will have to get to know Michael a lot more, and see that Michael is not like his father... we'll see what happens my dear, so glad you keep coming back... thank you so much.
Date: Jan 11, 2018 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 5: Breakfast In The Kitchen
THAT WAS GREAT !! XD I LOVED IT. MICHAEL & ALLISON ARE DEVELOPING A STRONG CHEMISTRY BETWEEN THEM. MICHAEL CLEARLY STILL MISSES DOVE. PLUS I LIKE THE WAY ALLISON STAYS ON HIS MIND WHEN HE'S WITH SARAH. MAYBE MICHAEL;S STARTING TO FALL FOR ALLISON. XDXD PLEASE CONTINUE THIS BEAUTIFUL STORY. I WANT TO HEAR WHAT HAPPENS NEXT !!!! I'M GIVING THIS CHAPTER A 10 !!!! BTW I HOPE YOU ARE FEELING A LOT BETTER NOW, HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU ALSO MY FRIEND. XDXDXD
I'm feeling much better, thank you so much... and yeah, the chemistry is there it's happening, but Sarah will not step aside that easily. She'll fight hard to keep her man, Allison is into a lot of trouble with Sarah.
Date: Jan 03, 2018 05:53 am Title: Chapter 5: Breakfast In The Kitchen
Oh boy, Michael is starting to realize that Allison looks a lot like Dove! Allison needs to him sometime, hopefully Michael will understand why he left. Great chapter!
Happy New Year, darling! Thank you so much for reviewing and stay tuned... kisses!
Date: Jan 03, 2018 02:51 am Title: Chapter 5: Breakfast In The Kitchen
Hope you're feeling better soon, happy new year to you too
Poor Allison he suffered so much at his parents house
I'm glad Michael is being nicer to him now I'm sure he will get feelings for his husband too one day, specially when he finds out Dove is Allison and when Allison explains everything to him I'm sure Michael can understand and keep Allison's parents away from him
I'm starting to feel better after voting stomach aches, nausea, the doctor said I catch a virus. I'm glad I'm feeling better. Anyhow darling we'll be hearing more about Allison's parents, boy they are monsters. Thank you dear...