Date: Dec 18, 2018 11:59 am Title: Chapter 60
Oh my god. First lemme say this - I can’t believe that this is the actual final chapter of this story. I honestly still remember when we were discussing ideas for this way before you got to writing and it just amazes me how fast time has gone by and now it’s actually finished like damn. I’m shooketh!
Onto the chapter: it’s like they are one big happy family. Feel like it’s going to tie up fuckinggg beautifully because I see that Maria and nikita are finally having a very important conversation. Wowwww Nikita is really outchea throwing knives! YOU GO GIRL- I mean, THAT IS very BAD. Should not happen. Yes it is indeed Michael’s fault that she is pregnant with a foetus. Gee I wonder how it happened. Oh yes he (censored) and then he (censored) before (censored) and that’s how it happened! Well I was right about that beautiful ending. I love that they’re naming their second child Patricia. Phew no more maria = no more negativity.
This chapter did feel more summary towards the end but then again it is the ending so it’s totally cool. Looking back I wish I could have read the story weekly as you posted the chapters but life got in the way, I took a long long break from this website, and stuff and so I’ve had to do lots of catching up and remind myself of certain plot details, but through and through, this was a good story. A great read too. There were things I agreed with, things I didn’t agree with, but overall I think the characters defo deserve their happy ending. I’m sad it’s over! But knowing you, when one story ends, another begins. Sorry my reviews have been late for so long but remember that I am on Xmas break for another 3 and bit weeks so i’ll catch up on FBOFW at some point too. Also idk why I’m saying his here when I could say it in the group chat but yes I hope you enjoyed my wild sporadic reviews and melting over Miguel, who I’m gonna miss so fucking much LOL. TIL NEXT TIME PEA!!!
I hear u I'm still shocked too
Lol yeah it's bad but deserved in a way
Yes lots of censored happened ;)
Exactly no more negativity
Look at the bright sight you didn't have to wait for the cliffs you could read the next chapter right away
Yes I'm all for happy endings (for characters who deserve it lol)
Domt apologize for being late with reviews it's ok
About a new story, I'm kinda trying to find a idea that fits (you prob hear me in chat about it in the 3 weeks you're home)
I miss the little guy too lol
See ya later onion
Date: Dec 18, 2018 11:39 am Title: Chapter 59
Paulo is like the polar opposite of Maria. He even has a nickname for Nikita see that’s how you know he is the good parent! Whoaaaaa. Now that is some tea right there, I can’t believe Paulo cheated because from what I read of him, he didn’t seem like the type of man to do something like that; he seemed way too sweet and caring. But it completely explains why Maria acts that way towards Nikita. Sad to hear about Patricia but that whole thing is messed up. They should take that shit to Dr Phil LOL
LOL MIGUEL FFS, “I know your mommy” ðŸ˜‚
WHAT IS CUTE
YOU, MIGUEL, YOU.
Never change, Miguel :’)
Lol take it to Dr Phil
Lol can't blame the little man to call him that since he didn't say his real name lol
Date: Dec 18, 2018 11:28 am Title: Chapter 58
Okay it’s official. Miguel is the cutest little child baby small person thing that I’ve ever come across in any fanfiction. Ever. He’s cuter and even more adorable than the toddler in my fic, I don’t know what it is about Miguel, his language just makes me smile but I def know I can’t get enough of his character. Mrs Ramirez may be shaking her head but guess whatvfam. SO AM I. Why can’t she accept that Nikita has, I quote from the 6 god drake, “started from the bottom” and now she’s here? Where is that you might ask? Living a wonderful life with an amazing husband and beautiful child. She needs to be happier for her daughter too. I’m glad Michael has Nikita’s back as always. But I find it so just wrong that she’s talking to her daughter like that, it ain’t right fam. Ain’t right at all. She’s likely just jealous that her daughter is living the life she always wanted.
No Joy is a total cutie too I miss her
Mrs Ramirez is stubborn
You'll find her reason soon ;)
Date: Dec 18, 2018 11:20 am Title: Chapter 57
OMG. A YEAR has gone by already?! Oh mannnn!! Not gonna lie I wish I could’ve seen a little bit more of baby Miguel during his first few months of being in this world but in a way I’m glad I don’t have to wait so long to see him at one years, because this is a milestone. Also I’m surprised you didn’t add an image of Miguel like you have done with all the other cast! But I can picture him and he is adorrrrable!
IM DYING SO CUTE
AW omfg he’s already speaking Spanish!!!! OKAY I need to calm TF down right now.
GOD DAMMNIT PEA YOU ARE KILLING ME THIS IS CUTENESS OVERLOAD.
Just when I thought it couldn’t get any sweeter ðŸ˜ Carlos and Sophia! I rate all this happiness that’s going around, happy couples left right and centre. It’s so nice to see after all the drama that’s happened. Super glad the Rameriz family aren’t total fans because they can wholesomely accept Michael for who he is, and treat him like a family member.
Couldn't find a picture the way I wanted him to look like
Ikr? He's adorable
Yes can they accept him for who he is :)
Date: Dec 18, 2018 11:10 am Title: Chapter 56
Some of Carmen’s questions were RIDICULOUS. Talmbout abortion man shut yo bitchass up! That being said I salute Nikita for her answers she handled the whole thing really well. I wonder what else Carmen had planned to ask Michael and Nikita but whatever they were, I’m sure they were as bad as Oprah asking Michael if he’s a virgin on LIVE TV, and therefore I’m glad she didn’t get to ask them what she really wanted. Side note I’m positive that Miguel is one beautiful baby boy. Half black and half Latino? Gotta be cute as hell.
Carmen is the Spanish version 0f Oprah with her questions smh
Yes half black half Latino aka eye candy
Date: Dec 18, 2018 11:05 am Title: Chapter 55
WHAT UP FAM. I is here to finish this story off!!!
OKAY super exciting the birth!! OMG she said “just take it out” I am dead. ðŸ’€
Ive been waiting a long time for this moment and I’m glad to be continuing reading the story from this point onwards. It was a little frightening when the docs said she wasn’t fully dilated and stuff but in the end I’m really relieved that the baby was born just fine. Phew! You did it fam YAS. Miguel Javier sounds fucking sexy. It’s like the Spanish version of Michael Jackson! Hopefully Nikita teaches him Spanish as well as English. I’m so happy!!!!
Hope ya like the whole thing :)
Can you blame her? Lol
Well with Michael being his father he has no choice than to be the Spanish version lol
I'm sure she will :)
Date: Dec 08, 2018 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 37
WOW!!! LOL!!!! I was already to say "Way to go Joseph" for defending Nikita...but then he starts hitting on her...omg!
And Jermaine! Way to go Nikita for standing up to him!!!! Sometimes I think he and Joseph are alike in more ways than one...and not because they're related...smh
Yeah smh at the man for flirting with his son's girl
Yes I agree they're alike alot those two
Date: Dec 02, 2018 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 36
Wow...what's the matter Amparo...jealous?...Her attitude...smh...
Amparo and the others need to just get over it, and let Nikita see her neices and nephews...smh
Glad to see Michael showing up, and the two of them spending the rest of the evening together... :)
Yes Emillio has the right to see his auntie
Date: Nov 30, 2018 05:58 am Title: Chapter 58
Ah what a beautiful day to be ruined by nikki's mum. She sounds so bitter and it's sad because there are mothers who are just like her in this day and age smh. She needs to let her bitterness go and leave nikki alone sheesh.
Yes some woman aren't meant to be mother's smh
Yea but I'm afraid she's too bitter to let it go
Date: Nov 28, 2018 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 35
San Diego...one of my favorite places...love Sea World :D...
Poor Michael, lol...I'm imagining him hanging on for dear life as Nikita goes zooming along...I can see Michael's face...lol.
Hm...she's lucky to get off with just a warning...AND an autograph from Michael for the officer...lol
Sounds like it was an exciting day for everyone...lol :D
Look forward to more :D
I want to go there too someday
Yes lucky officer Lol
Yes it was a exciting day lol
Date: Nov 20, 2018 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 34
Sounds like Nikita may finally be moving on from Andrew...and allowing herself to love someone else... :)
Sounds like Nikita and Michael had a good day together...;)
Yes hopefully she will allow herself to love someone else
Hopefully many more of those good days will follow ;)
Date: Nov 13, 2018 06:41 am Title: Chapter 57
aww sweet that the whole clan is back together and what a nice surpise that Nikki is having another kid alongside her sister which it looks like the two have patched up their sister relationship.
Yes it was a surprise lol
Yes they grew closer and have a normal sibling relationship now
Date: Nov 11, 2018 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 33
Oooo...their spa day plans sound good ;).
Hope Sophia won't interrupt them...I question her timing sometimes...smh lol.
Look forward to more :)
Yes it sounds good
Lol yes her timing is all over lol
Date: Nov 02, 2018 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 32
Well, it's good to see Michael taking Katherine's advice, and agreeing to talk things over with Nikita
The descriptions of the chocolate recipes made me think of the movie "Chocolat", with Johnny Depp where the characters believed eating chocolate was an aphrodesiac ;)
Look forward to more :)
They had to :)
I think I seen that movie too, it sounds familiar