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Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2018 04:08 pm Title: XIX

Good to see Michael and Eva made up...thanks, Paul for breaking the ice, and getting the conversation started :).

Wow...Vikram showing up...And Eva was having such a nice day too...smh. And Daadi's reason for insisting on the arranged marriage...smh. Eva shouldn't be being made to pay for her parents' perceived mistake...smh

Something/or someone should do something to change Daadi's mind...

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

Indeed thank goodness for the level headed Paul to break the ice and get them to talk and Yes with some history of where the marraige started to present day bought light to why Eva is being thrown in this crazy situation. I would highly doubt nothing will change that ole woman's mind but we shall as time goes along haha. thanks Mary!

Reviewer: Imogenmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2018 05:36 am Title: XIX

I'm so happy your back I  was really enjoying this story!!!!! .Eva needs to marry Michael instead 😊



Author's Response:

Aw thank you im thrilled you are enjoying my story and who knows what will happen you'll just have wait and see 👀. 

Reviewer: soltashkina Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2018 11:00 am Title: XIX

I really liked your story) it is great

Author's Response:

Thank you! More to come soon 😊

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2018 04:26 am Title: XIX

I’m really happy Michael forgave Eva. His time to be upset was finished! Since everyone’s secrets are out, I feel like this is a turning point in the story; the chapter of revelations and I love that Michael and Eva got flashbacks. For Eva’s it’s honestly very real in the sense that arranged marriages do typically tend to happen between two people who know each-other somehow; either from childhood or family connections. And Michael’s was really profound. The way you described the car accident was really great I could picture the action in my head. 

Since everyone’s on good terms again, please tell me they’re not going to let this marriage go ahead. Vik is evil. They gotta come up with something! Can’t wait to see what happens next. Lovely as always tomato <3



Author's Response:

 

it is good to see that mike went against his heart and allowed Eva the situation but something has to get this chain of change to happen who knows what could happen! I am glad you liked how I described the car accident I found that to be the hardest to write about but now it gave michael a chance to grief and let that pain stay in the past!. who knows might happen onion! thanks as always <3 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2018 03:26 am Title: XIX

Ugh daadi Riya needs to accept you can't force love on people 


Poor Michael needs to stop blaming himself it's not his fault 


Poor Eva her cree- I mean husband to be arrived 



Roy and Jay deserve their lil baby they'd be great parents     



Author's Response:

well she is from the old generation and can't accept change sadly smh but I agree poor lad has to stop blaming himself because it wsa not his fault his parents died that day. I clocked the shade you threw hm pea? tsk and yas the pair will be great parents in due time! thanks pea <3 

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