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Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2018 06:20 pm Title: XVII

Uh oh...Michael and Paul coming dangerously close to Vikram at the party...

Paul's sister...omj...lol...

And them wanting to use Michael for the photoshoot...poor Eva, what a delima that is for her...

Look forward to seeing how this all plays out...

Author's Response:

Let's be glad they were not caught out phew! And there is just no word for Paul's sister and her love for black men but hey she admitted it lool. Welp I can't give away what might happen you'll just have to see what happens Mary 👀. Thanks As alwaysl

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2018 11:36 am Title: XVII

Aw so cute they admitted they'll miss each-other. It's interesting how relationships across race barriers are somewhat "forbidden" in this story and everyone's secretive af, and then you got Marissa who just don't give a fuuuuckk lol. People should be more like Marissa. Paul and Michael's plan was genius, the scene was really funny and ironic too but I love that it worked. I feel really bad for Michael but he had to find out sooner or later. Yikes Daadi steady pressuring poor Eva :( idk how much longer she can hide it, either. We'll see I guess. Great chapterrrr 



Author's Response:

yes I agree 'be like marissa' who is blunt with no cares lmao and it is sad that relationships are forbidden when you can bring two worlds together and live together but some people refuse to want that smh lol. the pair of friends when it comes to their plans sometimes works luckily this time nothing failed thank goodness if imagine Virkram had found em? yea the poor guy had to find out eventually at least it was in a better enviornment than in a public place. Daadi needs to leave poor Eva alone we shall how it goes! thanks onion! <3

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2018 06:56 am Title: XVII

Oh Paul smh learn ur girls names lol 
At least Adil got 2 numbers that's something right? 

Michael and Eva are just too cute :) 


Oh Michael u whish that was true that Eva is your girl so it's not entirely a lie from Paul and hey it'll keep Marissa away from u too so be glad lol 

Ugh Vik makes my blood boil talking like that about Eva smh 

 LMAO Paul would've really married for bussiness? Smh 

Poor waiter lol 

Gremlin lol I love those nicknames the siblings have for each other lol 


Lol Michael I can't blame u for not wanting your bones jumped lol 

Paul and Marissa are too funny lol 




The old woman smh 



Author's Response:

Paul as you can see doesn't care to learn any of his girls names and of course all for business surely once he gets he wants he is done lool. Riya annoys all and she doesn't realise what she is doing is hurting poor Eva meh. That is the type of sibling Paul and Marissa have going on lol but Mike  I agree should be glad for his friends input smh tsk Tsk better than getting jumped by Marissa lol. Thanks Pea! 

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