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Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2018 01:22 am Title: XXIII

Daadi neers to learn its ok to marry the love of your life, so what hes not the same race? This woman smh 

 

 

Vik no words for this cheating, controlling, abusive and arrogant individual I don't yet his side chicks either they know he's to marry someone else yet they keep dating him smh not feel sorry for them at all 

 

 

 

And Riya with her insults towards Eva smh it's still her granddaughter not a stranger 

 

 

 

Can't wait to see the plans Michael, Paul and the twins have to stop the wedding from happening 



Author's Response:

the ole bat is stuck in her old ways and won't listen to anyone but the sound of her own voice and it just shows how much disdain she has for the girl. it is not her fualt she was born into this sheesh. Vikram does not care because he knows this will not affect him in the long run and his side chicks? ain't it sad how there are woman like that in society who act just like that? tsk tsk. at this point we are all waiting thanks Eve <3

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2018 08:48 pm Title: XXIII

Well, let's see...Vik is a controlling, abusive, arrogant, womanizer...yep, Daadi's blind as an old bat if she can't see those things...smh...Just makes you want to ask "C'mon Daadi, was what Eva's parents did REALLY so bad to want her married to that...ahem...man

Love the interactions of Eva and her cousins

Crossing fingers that the cousins, Michael and Paul will be able to stop Vik and Daadi's absurd plan...

Look forward as always to more :)

Author's Response:

you and eve have the same mindset when it comes to Vikram lool and well Daadi clearly wants control over everything not caring if her grandchild is left in the fire smh and she will never forgive her own daughter over what she did which is almost decades gone my word smh. gotta love the trio of cousins relationship lets just hope something is done about it soon! thanks mary <3 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2018 07:26 pm Title: XXII

I love your gif of Michael and Quincy btw :)

Ooo...Vikram...that's all I'm gonna allow myself to say...smh. Hopefully Paul and Michael will be able to get Eva away from that...man (smh)

Paul truly is "Mr. Charming"...lol...and Eva's cousins...I didn't even know they were good at cooking :)

Look forward to more...as always :)

Author's Response:

Well vikram is a special case with his crazy ways smh hopefully something will be done and soon but time can only tell πŸ€”. Yep Paul is truly a gentleman lool and the twins I wanted to give them more elements to their characters leading to them become cooks lol. I'm glad you like the gif i wanted to pick one that was linked to happier times for him. Thanks Mary 😁 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2018 01:35 pm Title: XXII

Lol gotta love the twins 

 

Why the old woman always has to be negative towards Eva? Smh at her 

 

 

Lol Paul and his son story can't believe daadi bought it 

 

 

Aww they're just too cute Michael and Eva 

 

 

 

Poor Eva she worked so hard on her beautiful drawing 



Author's Response:

ah the twins are extradionary aren't they pea? shaking my head at the ole bat she will never change but she is always gullible when it comes to sob stories well maybe just to Paul's elegant charm that never be beat lool and yes the pair are so cute yet Virkam had to come in and run the hard work she had planned smh, thanks pea <3 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2018 05:55 am Title: XXII

Their lil lunchtime in the treehouse was sweet...til Eva freaked. I get she’s worried but she’s not really hurting Vikram by hanging out with Michael...at most, Vik will be jealous but doesn’t genuinely care about/love his bride-to-be. But I agree with Mike that they should just continue spending time and having fun because really, what Vik doesn’t know won’t hurt him. Also he sucks ass for destroying Eva’s beautiful hard work. Great as always tomato!



Author's Response:

I agree I don't think Vikram will care for her to be with michael because he has clearly shown his feelings towards this marriage and the way he treats her love of art smh. Yes I agree too that Eva should enjoy the moment she has with mike now because mike will find a way to get her out of this mess. ah don't ya just love a jackass that we all face in different ways in our lives? smh lol. thanks onion <3

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2018 05:29 pm Title: XXI

Good to see Eva has Michael and Paul on her side.

Vikram and Daadi...there are no words...smh... perhaps karma will pay those two a visit...especially Vikram...

India is a beautiful country...too bad the men are chauvenists living in the dark ages where women are concerned...smh

look forward to reading how Michael and Paul (and Eva's cousins) help Eva out of this situation...

Author's Response:

at least the poor girl has some good people on her side including the jackson clan too. those two are consumed by their own self credit and control over everything that karma will be sweet when it happens tsk don't worry it's coming eventually lol. Yes  I agree India is gorgeous but how men treat their wives in the 21st country is sad and digusting tsk. Thanks Mary <3

Reviewer: Imogenmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2018 05:49 pm Title: Introduction

Ah finally they kissed !!! Despite the holding back between the two  *because of vikram the c*ckblock*. We know he ain't disappearing anytime soon sadly. All i need now is for Michael to put him in his placeπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚



Author's Response:

Vikram the prick who we all hate but hey we got the kiss like you said πŸ˜‚. Unfortunately he isnt yet and that would be great to see Mike do that πŸ‘€. Time will only tell. Thanks Imo <3

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2018 10:16 am Title: XXI

Yikes I do feel bad for Eva. Paul and Michael found out about what's happening to her which is essentially a good thing because now they know that Vikram is a dangerous af man - not that kind of dangerous, which we like, the bad kind (and now I've unintentionally made a pun out of TWO MJ songs...or is it albums?) - anyway, they know so they won't let this wedding go ahead. No way. I know they will do what they can to save Eva. 

"I- I rather see you living because I care for you too much" Eva blurted out nervously staring into his russet coloured eyes.

"You care for me that much? Even with all the mean things you say?" Michael teased.

"Stop ruining the moment! I'm serious" Eva huffed to him with a roll of her eyes trying to get back to the topic. 

^ love love love

O M G. I can't believe Paul betted on when they'd kiss for the first time! LMAO. The kiss was soooo sweet, really well-written and I know you're a little shy when it comes to these things but it was great, Lorry! Aw I'm glad Eva was able to experience such a spcial and memorable moment amidst all of this marriage/Vikram bs. Legit. She deserves to be happy fam she's so young got a whole future which she could possibly spend with Michael. The ending was hard to read...Eva's like a puppet. I mean, being physically harmful is one thing, but being sexually abusive is another and I'm legit just fearing for her life at this point because it's so baddd and she's not even married to him yet man! Messy now but I'm sure it'll be cleaned up. Wonderful as always, Lorry! Update soon. <3



Author's Response:

I agree that its good Mike and Paul know now that Vikram is no good for her and is a dangerous man sigh you had to bring in the puns onion lmao and of course those two brilliant minded friends will find someway to get her out of this situation. Paul somehow is always loosing his cash either way he has enough to last him a long time so  a small dent in his bank account won't effect him lool. poor girl deserves to have a live without that pervert Vikram in her life and be with Michael who can show her a new whole world (Catch that refernce from one disney film hmm? lool). something will be done Onion! thank you for all the encouraging words as always <3

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2018 02:57 am Title: XXI

Gotta love Paul lol 

Poor Eva tho she deserves so much better than Vikram 


Yes auntie J is right Michael is smitten 


Lol Paul and auntie J are too funny 

Aww Michael and Eva are too cute and OMG finally they kissed 


They made bets really? Lol 


Smh Riya and Vikram are a perfect match for each other both of them are ugh 


Ugh I can't stand the creep aka Vikram 



Author's Response:

Paul never gets his way when it comes to the jackson clan when betting with money or not lool of course he and his favourite woman love to tease poor mike and eva about their feelings lol. Yay they finally kissed phew it took a while but we got there lool. Vik needs to jump on the sun train heading to the sun and daadi can get on too smh but we shall how things play out.

 

thanks pea <3 

 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2018 02:25 pm Title: XX

Clearly Vikram is bad news. Hard to believe Daadi is blind to this dark side of her future son-in-law.

Vikram's attacking Eva clearly was a turning point in the story...I agree with that 100%. Hopefully, now that the twins have seen Vikram attacking their cousin they can get Michael and Paul to help get Eva out of harm's way without Vikram turning on them...

As always, looking forward to more :)

Author's Response:

the old woman is immune to her 'son-in-law' faults' it's sad she lets this happen and does nothing sigh. I agree Vik hurting Eva gets into the meat of the story now.at least the good thing that has happened in the chapter is that Aadesh is on their side now and something can be sorted out with mike/paul in due time. time will only tell Mary! thanks as always <3

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2018 04:08 pm Title: XIX

Good to see Michael and Eva made up...thanks, Paul for breaking the ice, and getting the conversation started :).

Wow...Vikram showing up...And Eva was having such a nice day too...smh. And Daadi's reason for insisting on the arranged marriage...smh. Eva shouldn't be being made to pay for her parents' perceived mistake...smh

Something/or someone should do something to change Daadi's mind...

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

Indeed thank goodness for the level headed Paul to break the ice and get them to talk and Yes with some history of where the marraige started to present day bought light to why Eva is being thrown in this crazy situation. I would highly doubt nothing will change that ole woman's mind but we shall as time goes along haha. thanks Mary!

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2018 02:27 pm Title: XX

Poor Eva she has to find a way to get out of it she derseves so much better 



Author's Response:

I agree there has to be some way out of this mess. time will only tell. Thanks Eva <3

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2018 09:22 pm Title: XVIII

Hm...a chance meeting with Eva outside of the hospital...could prove to be awkward, but we'll see...

I agree Lorry, Eva deserves a chance to explain herself. Hopefully Michael will follow his aunt's advice...

Author's Response:

Indeed it could end up becoming awakard and poor thing does need the chance to explain herself we can see how mike and Paul will recieve it in due time. thanks mary <3 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2018 12:59 pm Title: XX

I can’t read Eva being so terrified like I actually feel her fear. As for Vikram well he is just really good at doing what he does, putting up this lover-boy facade. Someone has got to make Daadi realise that this man is a monster and he doesn’t deserve Eva. Maybe if Riya caught Vikram being violent toward or mistreating Eva, she might change her mind about this marriage. And welp there’s that lamb curry again that I love so much jk. Me and Eva wouldn’t get along in terms of food preferencesπŸ˜‚. I thought the irony and tenseness of having none other than Michael as the photographer was cool af. If only Vikram knew muahaha. But I can tell he was uncomfortable the whole time...but he did his job like a pro and I’m proud of him for that.

SIS THE ENDING. I was so shook! Thank God for Adil but that was just...wow. Part of me wishes that it was Daadi who appeared instead of the twins but I’m glad it was the twins because they will actually do something about it. I know they won’t let Eva’s life be ruined and I can’t wait to see what their synced minds come up with. I need Michael and Eva to have their happy ending ok. Amazing (and kinda terrifying) update, tomato! <3



Author's Response:

I did not expect that I described her fear so well (after so much research) I highly doubt Riya will see any fault in her golden boy all she sees is good and nothing else. I had to add that lamb curry in it yet again lool. ah isn't irony fun hm? especially when it hits Vikram and he gets in his feelings which lead to him abusing poor Eva that was uncalled for thankfully the boys were there to help her but I do feel Riya will not do anything and just ignore whatever she might see. at least the poor girl has some people on her side to get out of this mess. thanks onion for the support as always <33

Reviewer: Imogenmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2018 05:36 am Title: XIX

I'm so happy your back I  was really enjoying this story!!!!! .Eva needs to marry Michael instead 😊



Author's Response:

Aw thank you im thrilled you are enjoying my story and who knows what will happen you'll just have wait and see πŸ‘€. 

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