Date: Mar 12, 2018 04:21 pm Title: XIV
love that they went ice skatingg and just had funn
now it gets intensee. so creepy and gross not only that vikrams in the picture but hes stalking here ugh
its like happiness is strong in the moment and then vik comes to ruin it with his stalking ass tsk tsk. we can only wait and see what he has in store! thanks panda!
Date: Mar 11, 2018 04:41 am Title: XV
This act that Eva and Vikram both have to keep up around Riya wow. Weird af...! Aw she feels like is the end for her and Michael already and although it seems impossible at the moment LOVE will find a way! Michael’s already a lot more optimistic than she is. So glad to see Adil has had a change of heart too - Eva doesn’t need any more ops in her life lol. Haha why does Roy swear so unneccesarily? Anyway I like how no matter what the occasion or what they do, it’s always a real fun time whenever Eva and Mike link up. They’re so comfortable with each-other by now but I can’t help but feel like trouble is brewing at the mere mention of Vikram. 😫 please let this last. Don’t want my two babies to be separated.
the whole act is just cringy ew. i agree LOVE will previal and find a way to get them out of this mess. Its good to see at least one twin agrees but we can only hope and pray Aadesh has a change of heart too and soon! Poor Eva lool. Uncle Roy will swear to his heart's content without a care given lmao. I'm so glad too whereever they go they have fun nonethless but Vik is always watching in the shadows and can only get worse from here! I will never keep them seperated -evil smirk- cough never. Thanks onion!
Date: Mar 10, 2018 03:29 pm Title: XV
Sounds like Riya loves her soon to be married to her granddaughter creep more than her own granddaughter, smh
Poor Eva loosing sleep over that creep
(My dislike to vik is obvious isn't It? Lol)
Adil is team Michael I see, take that Riya lol
I love auntie Jay and uncle Roy lol they're so funny but sweet too
Lol "Sure you don't bro" Janet knows her brother so well lol
Lol Janet is too funny
I'm glad Eva had a nice day after that creep calling earlier
she indeed does with her shady ole ass smh. the man is vile poor thing can;'t catch a break with such a two faced devil tsk tsk and yes is my obvious along with yours? loool. Janet is the sister we all love but gets on our last nerves at the same time lmao. the favourite older couples for sho lol. at least this is the happiness before the storm files off the handles? thanks Pea!
Date: Mar 03, 2018 02:02 pm Title: VIII
I'm with Eva regarding the drugs. Her reaction was definitely justified. I know Paul was the host, and he was aware of the people using, but I wonder if I would have been as polite as Eva was being.
Even though she didn't recognize him (at first) I'm glad Eva ran into Michael at the party...especially after Paul left her alone with his other guests...
I can't blame her either it's not right to have those type of drugs on hand and Paul well might be used to having the drugs in his home and not truly caring perhaps he doesn't clean the home smh lol. At least she had someone she knew there or she'd be lost in a sea of people. At least she got the chance to experience a teenage party lol. Thanks Mary!
Date: Feb 16, 2018 04:55 pm Title: VII
Hmmm...Paul is quite the gentleman isn't he?...lol
It was nice of him to come pick Eva up since she didn't know where he lived :).
Just wonder what buddy Michael thinks of Paul and his sauve, debonair behaviour :D...
Paul indeed is a gentleman who cares for woman in distress doesn't he? smh lol. Michael just lets his friend be as long he isn't involved lmao. thanks mary!
Date: Feb 12, 2018 06:48 pm Title: VI
That one interaction where Paul said he would never steal Eva from Michael made me think of 'The Girl Is Mine' lol :)
Poor Paul, the brunt of Michael and Roy's teasing...lol
It seems Eva is sheltered and that's why she's never heard of those shows and movies Paul and Michael told her about.
Great song comparison and Paul would never go near her lol. His confidence for winning didn't go his way this time lol. It seems she is sheltered but she will get the latest news with a friend like Paul. Thanks Mary!
Date: Jan 28, 2018 02:14 pm Title: V
Wow...I don't envy Eva having to put up with her Daadi's strictness...and the attitudes of the people in the Indian store
The behavior of that one man...smh...
Hopefully the people in Eva's culture will change their minds for the better about Michael.
Look forward to reading more :)
Neither do I. Some people can be so darn annoying and her future husband to be can disappear we'd all have glad lol. Hopefully something changes but we can only tell as time goes along. Thanks Mary!
Date: Jan 21, 2018 02:06 pm Title: XIV
What up. It’s ya girl. Here to read and review!
Ok 5th May yeah. CHRIS BROWN’S BIRTHDAY OMG LOL. Daadi’s obliviousness to Vikram’s true nature just makes this 10x more ironic and I love it. Nice that you added some visuals! Would be great to see more of these. It’s always tough, as writers, going into detail about what scenery/character appearances look like, but a picture can say more than words which is useful. McDonalds. Classy, Mike. Also spice isn’t unhealthy bye Michael. Aw cutest ‘friends’ ever! She’s taking care of him! And she held his hand! *screaming*
But all that sweetness is just ruined by Vik’s hitmen. Still not used to seeing my cousin’s name in there LOL but I’m honestly on the edge rn. “Nothing will harm you in my presence” THE IRONY. Well he was right. They were both ok...sounded like more of a warning. He should’ve told Eva what just happened instead of putting them both in danger.
BOY NAMED KENDRICK DOES HIS SECOND NAME HAPPEN TO BE LAMAR LOL 😁. I really liked the dynamics of this chapter, lots of diff settings and emotions going on. The ending was kinda grim fam. Vik clearly expected more and by the looks of it, he’s gonna get what he wants. Michael needs to be more careful and he needs to tell her what’s going on fam...this involves her too. Great update Lorry!
I DIDN'T KNOW IT WAS HIS BIRTHDAY CHILD. PURE CONDINENCE lool. Daadi needs a reality check but I dounbt she will with how brain washed she is smh. yeah i agree the part that stumps me most is trying to describe the place even with research. great time for a picture ha! lmao. oh come he is a teenager not a popstar *cough cough* sheesh let him live (cheaply bang bang). I see you clocked on their 'friendship status' and yass finally they are getting somewhere *squeals~*. sadly sweetness doesn't last long when vik isn't around he sucks all the life out of the ze room and i agree mike should have but he didn't which we will find out soon why he didn't hmm. shhhhhh his last name ISN'T Lamar gosh lmao. yes mike needs to be careful but we shall how it goes with the pair working together lol. THANKS MY PRECIOUS BABY <3
Date: Jan 20, 2018 07:53 am Title: XIV
Aggrrr Riya is so ugh lol
Aww their date is so sweet
Rohan and Sahil are pretty dangerous guys
Why didn't he tell her what they told him? Maybe she could've helped him figure out who they were
I love me some Janet lol
Oh oh Vik's in the country? 😱😱😱😱
she is surely a pain in the butt isn't she? smh. they are on a date and they don't know tsk tsk hasn't paul's teasing taught them anything?? the idiots are not that dangerous pfft they are kittens compared to vik. I don't know why he didn't maybe he wanted to keep it to himself? hm we will find out eventually. Janet gets u sighing when you know she's right lmao. Vik can seat in the sun train and stay there lmao. thanks pea <3
Date: Jan 13, 2018 05:57 pm Title: IV
Am imagining the photo session :D.
Hopefully Eva's family won't be too hard on her for spending time with someone who is not of their culture.
Look forward to reading more :)
well we can only hope and see what happens next ;).
Thanks Mary <3
Date: Jan 06, 2018 04:59 pm Title: III
I enjoyed their interaction. Just like in one of those 'boy meets girl' movies (I love those)
Just hope Eva's brothers don't spoil Eva and Michael's photo session...
Looking forward to more :)
I don't think I've watched those boy meet girls stoties lool. Here I thought I was being original with their interaction lol. Gosh let's hope her cousins don't ruin It but you'll just have to wait and see 😉. Thanks Mary!
Date: Dec 30, 2017 09:20 pm Title: XIII
All caught up! I see Michael and Eva getting closer. Paul is a hoot. Did he meet his match with Georgina?
Lmao paul sure is and hell yeah he has. He needs that inflated ego to be knocked a peg down or two lmao. Yas the pair are getting ever closer i cant wait till they date. Thanks hun!
Date: Dec 30, 2017 08:57 pm Title: XIII
Ok love Georgina , shes good for Paul lmao he needs his big ego knocked down and lmao he woke up with a few women hahahaa.
Yas someone haa to knock him down and she is the best woman to do it lol..Paul honestly needs to stop his harem one of these days lmao. Thanks Panda!