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Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2018 10:48 pm Title: XIII

Well, Paul is quite the ladies man isn't he?

Interesting to see he (like Eva) has a young relative who annoys him at

Look forward to more :)

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Date: May 15, 2018 06:35 pm Title: XII

So, Sophia is secretly dating Eva's younger relative, maybe Sophia and Eva will become ally's if Daadii finds out about the relationships...

Good old Marcus...smh, clearly his ego has taken a beating...we'll just see if he learns his lesson, and doesn't offend Michael again...

Author's Response:

That could work but time will only tell and ah its wonderful to see the egoistic get thrown down to earth to see reality lool. Let's hope he doesn't annoy Mike again. Thanks As alawys! 

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Date: Apr 30, 2018 09:06 pm Title: XI

Wow...and I thought the only drama at the cook out would be Eva and her

Marcus sure has lousy timing, and yes he was way out of line with his comments about Michael's parents...and he got JUST what was coming to him as far as Michael's decking him is concerned.

I love to see Michael's aunt and sister welcoming Eva into the family :)

Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response:

Thankfully none of it involved her and adil lol. Marcus needs to sit his ass down. He loves creating drama when it is not needed and well you break the camels back and in this case Michael's temper. He got what he deserved lol. The jackson ladies are so welcoming poor Eva. Thanks Mary! 

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Date: Apr 22, 2018 03:32 pm Title: X

I like snakes too...Eva and I would be good friends, lol.

Always look forward to reading your updates.

Especially enjoyed the image of Michael photographing Eva with Muscles...:)

Author's Response:

Well you and Eva are braver than me when it comes to animals heck snakes lol. I had fun writing that once I researched about snakes even tho I have a fear of them lol. Thanks Mary! 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 11, 2018 08:19 am Title: XVI

Lol I love Paul and Michael's 'brotherly' bond they're hilarious together  

Lmao Paul his always flirting self to the horse lady lol 

Glad he goes for Georgie he met his match there lol 

Lmao his horse didn't like him ignoring her lol that's too funny 

Can't Aadesh stfu hes dating a non Indian girl himself smdh at him 

Wait what did the old woman book a date for the wedding? Damn

Author's Response:

Paul flirts with anyone he can sigh lol. Aadesh is such a hyperitocte knowing he's doing the same thing that he thinks his cousin is going to end up doing smh. Daadi plans secretly so much foreshadowing hm..thanks pea! 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2018 04:08 pm Title: XVI

Wow Paul must be working magic or something the way he can flirt with just about any female. Like that’s talent, fam😂. He may be aware of the power he has but I’m glad he will keep his eyes on the gorgeous Georgie bc I SHIP IT. Looks like they had a great time at the farm with all of the horses! I can totally relate what with the childhood nostalgia/memories aspect of it because me and my siblings would regularly go visit our aunt on Sundays and whenever we do this in the present day it DOES still feel nostalgic to me, revisiting places where we grew up. Anyway I kinda missed Eva in this chapter but she made an appearance towards the end so i’ll let you off, Lorry‘. Haha OMG AADESH IS A TOTAL FANGIRL. Love it. And omg typical for them troublemakers to be fighting all the damn time lmao. You can’t leave them alone for more than two secs legit. But you know how aadesh has his hopes up about the prospect of a relationship between Michael and Eva? Yeah he might not want to get ahead of himself because it seems as if Rita is working hard to make sure this wedding will go ahead ☹️ Fr she’s planning Eva’s future for her which sucks, but that’s the reality of arranged marriages. Great chapter tomato!

Author's Response:

just one of his great talents that he is slowly pushing away for his girl lmao. Mike and Paul had fun indeed going back to their memories and being able to relive em as adults and I agree its great to go and back feel that nostagalia feeling again. the troublemakers are always fighting sadly enough smh and yikes Daadi is planning behind the shadows poor Eva. hopefully something will happen to intervene to stop the wedding from happening! time will only tell! thanks onion! <3

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Date: Mar 23, 2018 08:43 pm Title: IX

Good thing Michael was able to get out of the house before Daadi found him in Eva's bedroom...

Seems Eva's timing is better than the boys'

Author's Response:

thank goodness for a woman's intitutation that saves lives and boys they deserve it for disobeying her lol. thanks mary!

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2018 04:24 pm Title: XV

so cutee he offered her a place to stay if she doesnt feel safe and the super soaker fight hahaa

Author's Response:

at a jackson home it is always lit indeed lmao and isn't he sweet? lol. thanks panda!

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Date: Mar 12, 2018 04:21 pm Title: XIV

love that they went ice skatingg and just had funn

now it gets intensee. so creepy and gross not only that vikrams in the picture but hes stalking here ugh

Author's Response:

its like happiness is strong in the moment and then vik comes to ruin it with his stalking ass tsk tsk. we can only wait and see what he has in store! thanks panda!

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2018 04:41 am Title: XV

This act that Eva and Vikram both have to keep up around Riya wow. Weird af...! Aw she feels like is the end for her and Michael already and although it seems impossible at the moment LOVE will find a way! Michael’s already a lot more optimistic than she is. So glad to see Adil has had a change of heart too - Eva doesn’t need any more ops in her life lol. Haha why does Roy swear so unneccesarily? Anyway I like how no matter what the occasion or what they do, it’s always a real fun time whenever Eva and Mike link up. They’re so comfortable with each-other by now but I can’t help but feel like trouble is brewing at the mere mention of Vikram. 😫 please let this last. Don’t want my two babies to be separated. 

Author's Response:

the whole act is just cringy ew. i agree LOVE will previal and find a way to get them out of this mess. Its good to see at least one twin agrees but we can only hope and pray Aadesh has a change of heart too and soon! Poor Eva lool. Uncle Roy will swear to his heart's content without a care given lmao. I'm so glad too whereever they go they have fun nonethless but Vik is always watching in the shadows and can only get worse from here! I will never keep them seperated -evil smirk- cough never. Thanks onion!

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 03:29 pm Title: XV

Sounds like Riya loves her soon to be married to her granddaughter creep more than her own granddaughter, smh 

Poor Eva loosing sleep over that creep 

(My dislike to vik is obvious isn't It? Lol) 

Adil is team Michael I see, take that Riya lol 

I love auntie Jay and uncle Roy lol they're so funny but sweet too 

Lol "Sure you don't bro"  Janet knows her brother so well lol 

Lol Janet is too funny 

I'm glad Eva had a nice day after that creep calling earlier

Author's Response:

she indeed does with her shady ole ass smh. the man is vile poor thing can;'t catch a break with such a two faced devil tsk tsk and yes is my obvious along with yours? loool. Janet is the sister we all love but gets on our last nerves at the same time lmao. the favourite older couples for sho lol. at least this is the happiness before the storm files off the handles? thanks Pea!

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2018 02:02 pm Title: VIII

I'm with Eva regarding the drugs. Her reaction was definitely justified. I know Paul was the host, and he was aware of the people using, but I wonder if I would have been as polite as Eva was being.

Even though she didn't recognize him (at first) I'm glad Eva ran into Michael at the party...especially after Paul left her alone with his other guests...

Author's Response:

I can't blame her either it's not right to have those type of drugs on hand and Paul well might be used to having the drugs in his home and not truly caring perhaps he doesn't clean the home smh lol. At least she had someone she knew there or she'd be lost in a sea of people. At least she got the chance to experience a teenage party lol. Thanks Mary! 

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Date: Feb 16, 2018 04:55 pm Title: VII

Hmmm...Paul is quite the gentleman isn't he?

It was nice of him to come pick Eva up since she didn't know where he lived :).

Just wonder what buddy Michael thinks of Paul and his sauve, debonair behaviour :D...

Author's Response:

Paul indeed is a gentleman who cares for woman in distress doesn't he? smh lol.  Michael just lets his friend be as long he isn't involved lmao. thanks mary!

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Date: Feb 12, 2018 06:48 pm Title: VI

That one interaction where Paul said he would never steal Eva from Michael made me think of 'The Girl Is Mine' lol :)

Poor Paul, the brunt of Michael and Roy's

It seems Eva is sheltered and that's why she's never heard of those shows and movies Paul and Michael told her about.

Author's Response:

Great song comparison and Paul would never go near her lol. His confidence for winning didn't go his way this time lol. It seems she is sheltered but she will get the latest news with a friend like Paul. Thanks Mary! 

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Date: Jan 28, 2018 02:14 pm Title: V

Wow...I don't envy Eva having to put up with her Daadi's strictness...and the attitudes of the people in the Indian store

The behavior of that one man...smh...

Hopefully the people in Eva's culture will change their minds for the better about Michael.

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

Neither do I. Some people can be so darn annoying and her future husband to be can disappear we'd all have glad lol. Hopefully something changes but we can only tell as time goes along. Thanks Mary! 

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