Date: Oct 19, 2017 10:41 am Title: Chapter 3: Lesson One
Yummy Yummy ;) ;) loved it!!
Your reviews really encourage me to keep going my dear... you been with me the longest, and even though you sometimes disappear you always come back... I'm proud of you and your school studies... keep it up baby... and thanks once more for your lovely time... kisses!!
Date: Oct 10, 2017 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 4: Baby I'm Amaze (chapter rewritten)
OMG !! POOR MICHAEL,. ALEX SEEMS VERY VERY PISSED. I'M VERY SURE HE'S LOOKING TO START TROUBLE NOW WITH POOR MICHAEL. MICHEAL HAS HARDLY ANY FAMILY OR FRIENDS. HE WOULD BE ALONE & HOMELESS WITHOUT IVAN. I HOPE IVAN STICKS UP FOR MICHAEL, GREAT STORY MY FRIEND. XD PLEASE CONTINUE. I'M LOVING IT !! XDXD:):) I'M GIVING THIS CHAPTER A 10, XD
Oh, Ivan is in love, yet he still want's to have his dominion over Michael... Thank you, darling and kisses!
Date: Oct 02, 2017 04:10 am Title: Chapter 3: Lesson One
OH MY GOD THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOT !!!!!!!!!! XD I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT !!!! XD I WAS LITERALLY IMAGINING MICHAEL BEING THERE, THE JUICY DETAILS WERE SO HOT, SEDUCTIVE, & VIVID. THANKS SO MUCH FOR UPDATING THIS GREAT STORY. I CAN ONLY IMAGINE HOW GOOD THE NEXT CHAPTER IS GOING TO BE. I THINK I'M GOING TO READ THIS CHAPTER AT LEAST TWICE. LOL.XD PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE. XDXD I'M GIVING THIS SUPER HOT CHAPTER A PERFECT 10 !! XDXDXDXD AWESOME JOB MY FRIEND. XD:)
Thank you my dear, I'm so glad you liked the chapter! 😘 kisses!!!
Date: Sep 28, 2017 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 3: Lesson One
No Puedo esperar para la segunda leccon. No puedo esperar a que comience el capitulo
cuatro, porque estaba en los alfileres y las agujas para actualizar esto. Tu trabajo es
Muchas gracias Amor! Besos!!!
Date: Sep 26, 2017 11:36 am Title: Chapter 2: The Contract And Its Rules
What has Michael gotten himself into he is very much naive but it can't be helped poor baby.Although Ivan is very sexy this is going to be some situation I'm sure.I am so looking forwad to what's next.
Yes, it is quite a situation here, this is a love story dear, they are gonna go through trouble and heartache, but they are going to make it through cause they really going to be deeply in love... I'm really glad you liked the story dear, 😘 thank you so much!
Date: Sep 26, 2017 01:42 am Title: Chapter 2: The Contract And Its Rules
THAT WAS GREAT !! I LOVE THE STORYLINE. XDXDXD IVAN IS RIGHT POOR MICHAEL, HE SO INNOCENT THAT HE SIGNED THE CONTRACT WITHOUT EVEN A GLIMSP. I GUESS HE FELT HE REALLY NEEDED AN IMMEDIATE PLACE TO STAY & AN INCOME. I REALLY HOPE YOU UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER OF THIS STORY VERY SOON MY FRIEND. I CAN'T WAIT. I'M LOVING IT. XDXDXD I GAVE THIS CHAPTER A 10 ALSO !!! XD:):) I THINK I'LL READ IT TWICE. XD
Oh, yes, he needed a place to stay more than anything and someone who can take care of him too. Imagine, your 18 and you're alone in the world? He didn't want to sleep in the streets, he rather sleep with this rich hot guy, haha! Anyhow, baby... Always glad to receive your wonderful reviews... 😘
Date: Sep 26, 2017 12:59 am Title: Chapter 1: An Angel With Broken Wings
WOW YOU ARE SO GIFTED & TALENTED !! XD JUST LIKE YOUR OTHER STORIES, I FELL IN LOVE IMMEFIATELY WITH THIS STORY, I REALLY LOVE THE FACT THAT IT'S MICHAEL FROM BAD ERA, HEEHEE, LOL LOL SUPER SEXY!! CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER. I'M GIVING THIS CHAPTER A MAGNIFICENT 10 !! XDXDXD
Thank you so much darling... kisses 😘
Date: Sep 24, 2017 08:33 am Title: Chapter 2: The Contract And Its Rules
I'm really sorry for not remark on your wonderful updates each time.But I'm here to say ，I will always support you， you are my favourite author，I really enjoy reading your creations. I'm sorry that i can't express exactly what i thought for the comment. （I'm not a ENglish speaker，I'm still learning.）
You Are Not Alone
I'll Be There
Lots of love
Thank you so much, my darling, I'm very glad to hear from you, all my kisses for you!
Date: Sep 23, 2017 01:17 am Title: Chapter 1: An Angel With Broken Wings
I feel like this story is going to get more wicked chapter after chapter.
I am very engrossed with this because, I feel like Michael isn't going to stay
innocent forever as he seems. That's like the only thing that is having my hairs on
end, because I love when it's a story of a gay relationship. Then one of them takes
the others innocence away, kind of like a bad boy meets good boy type plot. I don't
know if you're going to write your story like that. I am not a critic, i'm just making
up fangirl theories. Anyways, awesome first two chapters. I hope you keep going
Hi, thank you for your review darling... Yeah, it is what you expect, bad boy meets good boy... I'll keep going dear, but it all depends on my reviewers. I need the readers support, I hope you keep coming back dear and that your once again.
Date: Sep 21, 2017 02:16 am Title: Chapter 2: The Contract And Its Rules
I think Michael is in "good hands". At least, Ivan seems to be honest with his words.
Michael will do everything to do what his master says, but will Ivan respect the contract as well?
I can't wait for more!!!
Ivan has fallen in love at first sight with our beautiful Michael, but still hehas the need to have control over him cause he doesn't know any better. Ivan has a past and there's is an explanation to his conduct. We will learn more about him in future chapters my dear. Oh how I love your reviews, thank you so much baby, what would I do without you? Kisses!!