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Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2017 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 2. Meeting Again

Im just really curious but does your story take place in NOLA because the gumbo part and the dancing dolls are all assets of Louisiana. I assumed she meant southerner university dancing dolls but she’s on a high school dance team. 

Overall your story is amazing so far and i cant wait to read more and whats to come of evie and michael. 

Reviewer: waterlily91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2017 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 2. Meeting Again

Oh I love this story so far! You definitely need to continue this soon!!

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2017 02:56 am Title: Chapter 2. Meeting Again

This is cute

Reviewer: big fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2017 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 2. Meeting Again

I don't think it will take long at all,they really have crazy chemistry.And all that flirting there's no question where this is headed.Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: big fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2017 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 1: Dinner Invitation

I really enjoyed the first chapter looking forward to more !!!

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