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Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2017 03:47 am Title: Welcome To My World~Welcome Aboard

At least all is going well for Jess and she gets to be the photographer again for the Jackson's. It's going to be fun by the looks of it lol. 



Author's Response: Yes, it'll be fun...Michael has a plan to make it that way...keep reading and find out what that plan is...

Reviewer: waterlily91 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2017 01:59 pm Title: Welcome To My World~Welcome Aboard

Awesome story! Can't wait to see more!!!

Author's Response: Thank you :)...Hope you'll enjoy what's coming next :)

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2017 12:09 pm Title: Welcome To My World~Welcome Aboard

Michaels so cute:) they're adorable when they're together 



Author's Response: He is :). Yes, they are :).

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2017 12:02 pm Title: Welcome To My World

Hope Jessica will find a steady good paying job she deserves to work on her career in acting 



Author's Response: I hope so too... I agree :)

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2017 10:34 am Title: "Premiere Day"

Oh I can't wait for more, hopefully the press will be nice to both of them as couple  (But knowing the media they're probably not nice at all) 

 

 

Jessica and Michael are such a cute couple :)



Author's Response: We'll see...they may be nice to Michael and Jessica at first, but things may change if Jessica reveals her chosen religion (Wiccen) to the press... I agree... they really are :).

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2017 03:38 pm Title: "Premiere Day"

Aw I'm glad she found the dress and now the real juicy tale gets started! Lol. 



Author's Response: Oh yes... :D

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2017 03:15 pm Title: You Oughta Be in Pictures (concl.)

ah the time lapse is much more clearer for me now lol. I do believe only Layota knows and the rest of the family have an inking of what's going on between mj and jess but we shall see who finds out first amongst the men they are clueless for a reson lol. 



Author's Response: I agree with you since LaToya has seen Michael and Jessica together. Yes, we shall see... :) Ikr :D

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2017 03:38 pm Title: You Oughta Be In Pictures (cont.)

oh dear Jess should have not said that last part I just hope it doesn't back fire on her..being lost in the moment and blunting that out to the agent of all people! lol. But i can't blame her getting a chance to audition for 'the wiz' is a big deal!. I should take the chance if i were and somehow find a way to juggle both classes and this job this could be the big break she's wanted. we shall how it all turns out soon. 



Author's Response: Yes we shall see :)

Reviewer: jessy34 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2017 10:42 am Title: You Oughta Be In Pictures (cont.)

great chapter can't wait for more 😁

Author's Response: Ty, hope you'll enjoy what comes next :)

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2017 04:14 am Title: You Oughta Be In Pictures (cont.)

Oh Oh, they're no secret anymore or the agent doesn't believe her? I can't wait to read more 



Author's Response: They do seem to be breaking their cover as it were...Will have to see if the agent believes her or not. :).

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2017 02:50 am Title: You Oughta Be In Pictures (cont.)

Aw poor Jess trying to figure what she's going to do. She should try the play but go see the movie first. I hope she likes I've never seen the film lol. 



Author's Response: ikr...I've seen both, the play is actually better...impo :)

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2017 04:43 pm Title: You Oughta Be In Pictures (cont.)

The vibe I get from La Toya is she is easily influenced, and prone to believe whatever she hears, regardless of whether it's true or not.

Spoiler alert for my readers: Later in the story, Jessica will be accused of a crime, and La Toya will join the others who believe the worst about Jessica...

Author's Response: Last thing Michael needs is someone believing the worst about Jessica...smh. Let's hope La Toya will wise up.

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2017 05:16 am Title: You Oughta Be In Pictures (cont.)

Poor Jess trying to resist a flirting fool but somehow she gets a acting agency but who know if its real or fake? It was nice of her to surprise Michael and Latoya is nice? That's surprising lol. I'm glad they get along. I just hope she doesn't end up tricked but we shall see lol.



Author's Response: Yeah, Leroy is persistent alright. Jessica has her dad's flare for checking into things to make sure everything is on the level. Yes, that was nice of her to surprise her man :). And LaToya...ikr? Who knows with that girl...yes, we shall see. :)

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2017 12:58 pm Title: You Oughta Be In Pictures (cont.)

I'm glad Jess can spend time with Michael in New York 



Author's Response: I am too :)...

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2017 03:38 pm Title: You Oughta Be In Pictures

You made a time skip. It was a little confusing but I got it towards the end lol. Poor Jess I'm glad she didn't listen to that wanker of a teacher! Mj shouldn't listen to those nasty teasing from his family or that ignorant who clearly should know he wouldn't stay an adorable child forever. She needed her head examined smh. 



Author's Response: Yeah, I thought the time skip was a little confusing...my bad lol. Ikr, that teacher...smh :(...lol. And MJ's family and that so called fan... What a stupid, looks conscious industry Michael grew up in...smh.

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