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Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2017 03:38 pm Title: You Oughta Be In Pictures

You made a time skip. It was a little confusing but I got it towards the end lol. Poor Jess I'm glad she didn't listen to that wanker of a teacher! Mj shouldn't listen to those nasty teasing from his family or that ignorant who clearly should know he wouldn't stay an adorable child forever. She needed her head examined smh. 



Author's Response: Yeah, I thought the time skip was a little confusing...my bad lol. Ikr, that teacher...smh :(...lol. And MJ's family and that so called fan... What a stupid, looks conscious industry Michael grew up in...smh.

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2017 02:36 pm Title: You Oughta Be In Pictures

Glad Jess' father is still ok (all those years later) and the donor heart is accepted 

 

 

Why are some people so mean? I'm glad Michael has Jessica by his side 



Author's Response: Yes...Donovan is one of the lucky ones... Ikr? I am too... :)

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Date: May 16, 2017 03:33 pm Title: The Opportunity of a Lifetime (concl.)

Woah what an opportunity for Jess to get a job and have a chance to be with mj at the same time lol. I hope they will be careful to not get themselves exposed or become too lost in each other. Hopefully Joesph won't be too suspicious but knowing him he will be. Working the kids like damn slaves with all that recording I understand hard work but at same time they need a break. Oh well lol.



Author's Response: Ikr...Seems Jessica is in the right place at the right time as they say. They seem to be using discretion but we'll see... Oh I know... with Joseph it's all work and no play...one gets the feeling Joseph sees his boys as his meal ticket... Yes, oh well...lol

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2017 04:23 am Title: The Opportunity of a Lifetime (concl.)

Smh at Joseph and his thinking of money and calling names, no words for that man smh

 

 

On the other side I'm happy Jessica will join them and stay longer in the States :) 



Author's Response: Ikr?...smh Oh I am too :)...

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 11:44 am Title: The Opportunity of a Lifetime (cont.)

Yay they moved in together :) hopefully with the money she saved she can use that money for her education and stay with Michael permanently instead of needing to go back to the Uk for a longer period of time like last time 



Author's Response: Ikr :D... That would be good, and she wouldn't have to stay at the dorms, lol :)

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2017 02:00 pm Title: The Opportunity of a Lifetime (cont.)

I'm glad Jessica's father is ok 

 

smh at Joseph does that man think of something else than money? 

 



Author's Response: I am too Oh I know... smh

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2017 02:24 am Title: The Opportunity of a Lifetime (cont.)

Florence is such a fake I don't like her. Jess's dad sent her away for a reason holiday to enjoy herself with mj and take her mind off his health. Joseph needs to shut up one of these days. Mj can't visit a friend?? He should be kept in a bottle and work is that his good for? Ugh the man irks me smh. 



Author's Response: I'm with you... Florence seems to be overstepping the boundaries of her relationship with Jessica's dad Oh I agree... Ikr?... Perhaps someone else will stand up to Joseph as Katherine has been brave enough to do...

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2017 03:29 am Title: The Opportunity of a Lifetime (cont.)

Hope Jessica will stay in California for her education so she's close to her beloved boyfriend 

 

Hopefully the press won't find out about Jessica just yet, they deserve some more private time 

 

Or Joseph since I'm sure he won't aprroaprrove 'distractions' for Michael and his brothers while they working on their next album 



Author's Response: I hope so too...I think she's a girl who values relationship over vocation... we'll see :) Ikr? Double where Joseph is concerned :(...with him its all BUSINESS smh :(

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 06:40 pm Title: The Opportunity of a Lifetime (cont.)

Good luck to Jess finding her way about I hear subway is completely different from the UK trains lol and I'm glad they are reunited again but I'm surprised the sisters don't know just yet about their hidden relationship I thought it would be obvious oh well that will make it more fun when they do find out lol 



Author's Response: Ikr...? I'm glad they are too... I agree, that will make it more fun when their relationship is revealed :D...

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 02:59 pm Title: The Opportunity of a Lifetime (cont.)

Smh at Joseph everything always about the money smh can't even call for a few minutes or he's interrupting with bussiness  

 

 

Hope the cute couple will able to talk more the next time 



Author's Response: ikr...smh I hope so too... :)

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2017 02:52 am Title: The Opportunity of a Lifetime (cont.)

Yay for the young lovers they got so each other briefly but it's sad it was so short but at least they have each other phone numbers now and they can talk hopefully more often  

 

Glad to see clarissa had a wonderful birthday too, who doesn't want to spend their birthday like that?  



Author's Response: Yes, I agree their reunion was short (no thanks to Joseph who is all business...boo lol) but I think their exchanging phone numbers will help them communicate more frequently...we'll see Ikr? Hope Clarissa saved us some birthday cake...lol :D

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2017 11:30 am Title: The Opportunity of a Lifetime (cont.)

Aw I'm glad they reunited on a bittersweet note. Still sweet of Jess to do that for her friend and still get to see mj for a while at least hopefully this distance this won't be too bad. I just wonder when they will make their relationship public and what will Joseph or the whole family will say? I'll find out soon enough lol.



Author's Response: I'm not sure, but I think Michael and Jessica will try to keep their relationship a secret for as long as possible...we'll see... Yes, it was nice of Jessica to treat her friend to the concert, and that she and Michael got to see one another for a little while after the concert...

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2017 06:58 pm Title: The Opportunity of a Lifetime (cont.)

I can't wait to read them being united once more! It's going to be so precious! 



Author's Response: Neither can I...I agree :)

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2017 01:24 am Title: The Opportunity of a Lifetime (cont.)

So happy Jessica won :)



Author's Response: So am I :)

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2017 03:14 am Title: The Opportunity of a Lifetime (cont.)

Looks like the young lovers will see each other again soon?



Author's Response: It's very possible... if Jessica submits the winning letter to the contest... ;)

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