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Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2017 11:44 pm Title: Welcome To My World~Just Good Friends (cont)

I'm glad they all love Jess

 
I'm glad she is hired at the university 

Yes Rebecca gave Jess some good advice 


Wow Joseph what the wow you don't say about your own son, wow

 

 

 

Can't wait for more <3 

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2017 03:05 pm Title: Welcome To My World~Just Good Friends (cont)

oh for goodness sake when the chapter was going nicely Joseph has to end the chapter with that kind of talk like michael is still a ten year old kid!. like I said in comments ago michael is goin to have to stand up to joseph's foolish mindset of him and realise he is no longer the ten year old kid. Michael is pratically grown up and he needs to understand that sheesh no wonder mike wanted freedom to do his own thing around towards the -off-the-wall era. but I can't wait to see how mike confronts his father about his own life and relationships. Lovely to see another chapter! also wishing you a merry christmas in advance Mary <3



Author's Response: I agree...Michael is definitely reaching his breaking point...I sense a confrontation happening very soon Spoiler alert...the next chapter will be 'the calm before the storm'. Thanks Lorry..and a Merry Christmas to you as well <3

Reviewer: Pannech Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2017 06:05 am Title: Senior Class of 1975 (cont.)

AHH... stories won't be complete without KFC. :D

It's understandable why he wouldn't want to go to prom. Although I feel like he is missing out by not going.

Author's Response: ikr...lol :) Yeah...I think so too...

Reviewer: Pannech Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2017 05:45 am Title: Senior Class of 1975 (cont.)

Ah... I, myself have always been interested in Wiccans. I read a book about it once. I love the concept of it. I really like it that you're including that faith in your story.

Can you imagine what it would have been like if Michael really went to school? He said once that he attended but he had to be taken out by his parents because of the fans and I think I read that teacher where making him sing or he had to be told to keep quite because he kept singing.

Author's Response: Thank you :). I created Jessica as a Wiccan to demonstrate the open mindedness Michael demonstrated toward people of different cultures and religions. I once had a co-worker who was a Wiccan priestess, and who had performed 'hand fastings' (one of which I will include later in my story...spoiler alert! :).) Oh I imagine the other students would have had a hard time controlling themselves knowing they had a celebrity for a classmate...I also imagine it would have been a challenge for Michael to focus on his schoolwork...wow...smh...lol :)

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2017 10:06 am Title: Welcome To My World~Just Good Friends (cont)

I didn't know Jess had siblings 

 

 

Shit, 'Toya!...What's with the 20 questions?", a response which led Katherine to respond:

"Michael...language!...    😂😂😂😂 that was funny lol 

 

Old bear lol 

 

 

I'm glad they're happy for them 

 

 

Hmm what's up with Joseph? And I'm sure he won't be so thrilled with Michael and Jess dating  



Author's Response: No body knew...not even me...and I'm the author...LOL XD Yes, that was funny XD Lol I am too :) I think Joseph is just making sure all the aspects of the business are in order...including the finances. Oh I'm sure he won't be...That's why Michael and Jessica don't want him to know.

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2017 02:45 am Title: Welcome To My World~Just Good Friends (cont)

 Well I was right they'd take it well. His sisters and mother are nice people. Beside some of them have already seen them together a few times. I'm glad they were accepting and able to bond over the lost of siblings. I didn't even know she had any siblings you kinda made her sound to me an only child lol. Knowing Joseph he won't be happy about relationship heck he might surprise me by accepting it! But I have high doubts but we can only tell from here and see what happens. Hopefully if other jackson brothers are around they can defend her against any objections Joseph makes. We can only tell. Great to see another chapter from you Mary! 

 



Author's Response: Ik...I thought Jessica was an only child myself... The idea for siblings came when I thought of the answers to questions people ask when they're getting acquainted. As for Joseph...He's a tough one to read. We'll just have to wait and see whether he accepts Michael and Jessica's relationship...you're right...only time will tell. Yes, it would be nice if Michael's brothers could come to Jessica's defense against Joseph's objections if the need arises. Thank you :)...More chapters are on the way :)...

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2017 07:30 am Title: Welcome To My World~Just Good Friends

I think the breakfast will be alright well I hope so. The sisters and Jessica get along decently when they are together and I'm glad they have finally let their relationship be out in the open at last! Lol. Michael could help her pay some of it but Jessica seems like the type to be independent so she will ask him when it's too much. An assistant?? Not to found of it but we'll that she wants lol 



Author's Response: I think you're right. I agree. So am I. Yes, Jessica is independent...and yes, I think she would ask him to help her if she felt she couldn't afford it. I think Jessica thinks having an assistant to help her will be an asset. Of course, we'll see what happens when the assistants discover they're helping file photos of the Jacksons.

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2017 06:08 am Title: Welcome To My World~Just Good Friends

 

Dr Doolittle lol that's too cute 

 

Michaels too sweet wanting to help his girl :)

 

Wonder how long it'll take for Joseph to find out, he'll probaby be against it and say she'll be a distraction to him, knowing that man that's what he will stick to smh  

 

I'm sure Katherine and the others will accept Jessica easily 



Author's Response: Dr. Doolittle...ikr? lol Yes, Michael is a sweetheart when it comes to helping the one he loves. I wonder that too. Joseph will probably have some objection to Michael's relationship with Jessica. We'll have wait and see what happens I'm sure they will.

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2017 03:17 pm Title: Welcome To My World~On The Road...AGAIN (concl)

Smh at Joseph that man has no chill has he? Don't he know life is more than work? Smh 

 

 

Looks like they need to keep their relationship a secret for a while or Joseph will sebd her back home 

 

 

Can't wait for more 



Author's Response: Ikr? With Joseph, everything is BUSINESS and money smh :( I agree :0 Hope you enjoy what comes next :)

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2017 07:22 am Title: Welcome To My World~On The Road...AGAIN (concl)

Jospeh needs to back. He can't have his almost grown children still under his controlling thumb. they are grown to know they want and clearly micheal wants out to do his own thing music and relationships. he is such a heavy burden of ice on poor michael's back. makes me wonder how long will they have to keep their relationship hidden till they can finally let the public know since the rest of the family is aware of it. would be funny I predict that joseph is the last to know out of all everyone lol.



Author's Response: I AGREE...omj! I think they'll have to keep their relationship hidden for quite a while...especially where Joseph is concerned...and yes that would be funny if Joseph were the last to find out. lol

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2017 04:17 am Title: Welcome To My World~On The Road...AGAIN (cont)

I knew they'd react nicely I'm glad it wasn't cold. I don't they love her just yet from Michael's words lol. You definitely captured the feeling Mary. 



Author's Response: Thank you :)...I was hoping I would. They may not love Jessica just yet, but I think they will in time...

Reviewer: Rell gargala Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2017 09:54 pm Title: Welcome To My World~On The Road...AGAIN (concl)

Joesph is Joseph. Waiting patiently for more!

Author's Response: Yes, that he is... smh lol :(. Hope you enjoy what comes next.

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2017 07:30 am Title: Welcome To My World~On The Road...AGAIN (cont)

Those paperazzi smh they need to get a life 

 

 

Lol I'd expected the brothers to already have figured out who she is to Michael lol 

 

 

 



Author's Response: I agree...smh :( Ikr? Talk about being 'slow'...lol...and their excuses "well, we've been busy"...smh lol

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2017 03:20 am Title: Welcome To My World~On The Road...AGAIN (cont)

Well they had an adventure! The paparazzi was definitely seeing things? Michael Jackson in a arcade place? Pfft no lol. Their reaction seemed alright teasing Michael. I think they will do the same thing as Michael never has a girl and besides they know by the look of love on their faces hopefully they accept lol



Author's Response: Ikr? The paparazzi and their conclusions...talk about obsessing, LOL. I agree, Michael's brothers reacted as expected. The vibe I get from Marlon, Randy, Tito, and Jackie is their response to Jessica will be a positive one... we'll see :).

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2017 07:55 am Title: Welcome To My World~On The Road...AGAIN (cont)

Hope Kelvin is to be trusted 

 

 

OH OH they've been spotted 



Author's Response: So do I Ikr?

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