Date: Apr 17, 2017 11:59 pm Title: 2.That jawline though
You've got me hooked once again!! If you don't mind me asking, but what do the numbers at the end of some sentences represent?
Oh I just took a look at them.Don't worry,they mean nothing,it might be writing errors :)
And thanks for reading!!I remember you from In the Woods tho :D
Date: Apr 16, 2017 09:00 pm Title: 2.That jawline though
The main girl is so crazy (and she is strangely strong may I add) so are her friends. I had a good laugh whlie reading this chapter. Thank you.
No problem.I tried to add as much humor as I could.So I hope you'll enjoy this till the end!
Date: Apr 16, 2017 06:24 pm Title: 2.That jawline though
Michael is acting like a total bad guy! He's really really bad...nevermind. Anyway, I like how tough you make the main character. Her friends are funny too, I like how Bernie was describing Michael's eyes. Very funny. Please continue the story!
XD..Thank you for your lovely comments.Next update maybe tomorrow or the day after!!
Date: Apr 16, 2017 06:21 pm Title: 1.You killed him with your bible
Very interesting ending to the first chapter. I love how you have Michael listening to Miley Cyrus haha. I hope this continues!
Thank you for such lovely remarks!!The readers' support is the only thing that encourages me to write more!!
Date: Apr 14, 2017 10:46 am Title: 1.You killed him with your bible
What I've just read is pretty unordinary but also very interesting. The main girl is one of a kind so I'm curious to see how you construct the Michael character. I am looking forward to reading more :). Thank you.
Thank you for reading!!