Date: May 18, 2017 11:57 am Title: Chapter 9
Woah you skipped over a lot since the last chapter lol. And why wouldn't the Jackson 5 not know when their tour ends? I know that brothers were unaware that Michael would announce that the Victory tour would be the last tour with his brothers, but you'd think they'd know when the last date of their tour would be. Sorry, I was just confused.
Anyway, Alicia is low-key kind of sensitive. She lets things get to her easily for example what Tito said. Like girl don't take him seriously. Tito was just mad that Michael announced his departure from his brothers for good and Alicia was the easiet target to take it out on.
Alicia is also a lot perkier about the whole PR relationship between her and Michael now. LOL. Alicia reveals she had been singing on the tour and Joseph see's dollar signs... typical. Alicia should be laying low now though. The tour is over and I'm sure if she gets bigger as a celebrity (other than being famous by association) people will start digging and things won't add up. Be careful Licia or saving Michael will be the least of your worries. The 80's and 90's is when people really started questioning stuff lol.
And byeeee Alicia. You know you're feeling Michael girl. Touring and pretending to be someone's girlfriend for four or so months isn't easy nor is it taken lightly. Feelings between these two are bound to happen and I'm sure it comes with consequences.
I hope you slow the story down a little though. I'd like to Alicia and Mike grow a little more before my own eyes instead of just reading about it... if that makes sense. I want to see them develop as characters basically. Overall I like the story!
Author's Response: The Jackson 5 knew that Michael would not continue the tour in Europe, but they had no idea he was going to end the tour on that very day. There was a time skip between the last chapter and this! It would be hard for Alicia to keep under the radar even if she wasn't a celebrity - she is already famous by association as you said. But you're right, she'll have to be very careful about her story if she gets any bigger. I'll keep your advice in mind. Thanks for the review!
Date: May 17, 2017 03:58 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh please girl you felt those damn butterflies and I'm praying you fall for mj. It doesn't matter the girls personality is the key and she's got it. I hope they do fall for each other. Tito is just a tool and should mind his damn business smh. The wheels in Joseph's head is working over time and that isn't good at all. At least mama Katherine and the girls like her at least. I just hope Alicia does something for herself as the years go by.
Date: May 16, 2017 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 9
No, no, that's where she should be wrong. She could save him from these unhappy marriages if she falls in love with him and him with her. Then, he can spare LMP and the nurse and rather live happily ever after with one good woman and have children with her
Date: May 11, 2017 12:57 am Title: Chapter 8
This sounds all so messy geez mj and his brothers can't even get along for the damn tour! When mj is only doing this to get his brothers out of his hair for them to earn some cash..mj needs to rest properly and fainting won't work out.his health is risk. Hopefully something gets sorted out before the brothers turn to physical blows.
Author's Response: MJ and his brothers are problematic af. It doesn't have a good effect on Michael, who's keeping this tour afloat, and Alicia, who's trying to protect Michael but is getting hit in all directions. Let's see how things will work out in the end. Thanks for the review!
Date: May 10, 2017 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 8
I think the Victory tour did take a toll on Michael because I believe he wanted to go off and do his own thing. The Jackson 5 had their run and his brothers needed to understand that but I don't think they did. Anyhoo, I hope there is more interaction between Michael and Alicia on their "relationship". I'd like to see more dialogue between them than the occassional banter that they have with one another.
I wonder if events will still lead Michael to lean on drugs even though the pepsi accident didn't happen. Will the stress between his brother and him and Alicia drive him to it? Or will something else happen that kicks in the drugs? I'm curious if that's going to happen or not.
The story is very interesting, and I hope you continue soon.
Author's Response: Right now Michael is safe from the drugs because he has Alicia as a support system, someone for him to lean on, which he mostly didn't have in the original timeline. That doesn't guarantee he'll be off drugs permanently though. We'll have to wait and see what the future holds in store. Thanks for the reviews!
Date: May 10, 2017 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 7
I don't think this is a very good idea, but it does seem like the only logical way to get out of the sticky situation without revealing Alicia's true identity. Although they should be much more careful even though they believed they weren't being watched. I honestly think it was a bad idea to allow Alicia to be the opening act on the tour just because of her status. I hope this plan is foolproof, but I highly doubt it will be. Somebody is either going to catch feelings or something else... I'm here for it though!
Date: May 10, 2017 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 6
Alicia did a very dangerous move by singing a song from the future. She needs to be careful about what she does in the future because we don't want anything good to change or come too soon where it might change Michael's entire timeline. Hopefully Licia can prevent that dreadful day, but as time goes on then we'll see.
Date: May 10, 2017 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh I loved that chapter. It was wonderful. They are like an old couple. They are constantly bickering but they care for each other a big deal. I am sure Alicia already cares so much more about Michael than she is willing to admit... please keep on with it. This is such a pleasure to read. I need more updates. Thanks 😘😘
Author's Response: They do act like an old couple now that I think about it! Perhaps their relationship won't be for pretend after all. ;) I'm glad you enjoy the story. Thanks for the review!
Date: Apr 18, 2017 11:40 am Title: Chapter 1
I had to get out of my silent cave and express how I feel I've been reading this story on the down low and Alicia has made me drop my phone more times than I count! Lol. I just hope she doesn't blame any more secrets it's getting the point where everyone is going to eventually find out drama I tell you! Lool. I bet mj and her are going to become closer but I hope she just doesn't break under the pressure of being a star cause she didn't think about the media who will try to get more information on her when there isn't much about her. She needs to think about that too...hopefully. lol. I'll be commenting more 😏