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Reviewer: Sockmonkey Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2018 01:18 am Title: Prologue: Special Delivery and a Secret Handshake

I am hooked. I love it already and it’s just the prologue. I love stories about best friends and it’s makes it even better that they are kids who grow up together and are by each other sides. I hope you continue the story because it has so much wonderful aspects of friendship and love. Obsessed!! Great job and wonderful writing!

Reviewer: Thatkliqkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2018 11:52 am Title: Prologue: Special Delivery and a Secret Handshake

Aww, you write young Michael very cutely, and Vivi is a dear. One thing though, would Michael know what sweets were? He'd be more familiar with the term candy?

Reviewer: LunaTheAwesome Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2017 09:27 am Title: Prologue: Special Delivery and a Secret Handshake

Beautiful start to this story. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: NerdandMichaelJackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2017 04:25 pm Title: Prologue: Special Delivery and a Secret Handshake

Can't wait for more chapters~❤

Author's Response: Thank you! I can't wait to update! :)

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2017 03:23 am Title: Prologue: Special Delivery and a Secret Handshake

This sounds adorable so far! I wonder what it's going to be like as they grow and mj has to move away later years. 



Author's Response: Thank you! I can't wait to write their journey! And I've got a few ideas, but I'll keep it a surprise! :3

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2017 02:04 am Title: Prologue: Special Delivery and a Secret Handshake

Sounds wonderfully

Author's Response: Thanks! ^-^

Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 06:10 pm Title: Prologue: Special Delivery and a Secret Handshake

I love the way you start this story it make me want to read some more just keep it coming



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll be updating every few days I think! :)

Reviewer: waterlily91 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 06:08 pm Title: Prologue: Special Delivery and a Secret Handshake

I like your idea for this story. I can't wait to see how it develops!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm super glad you liked it! :D

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