Date: Nov 27, 2017 08:21 am Title: Chapter 3: A woman of humanity
Oh my god! So good to actually have you back at continuing the stars. I had already given up on it done time ago. Wow!
Now you are back but with this disturbing new but extremely short chapter.... was she really raped at the age of fifteen or is the Monroe’s boy her boyfriend? But a torn dress? Sounds more like being violated. Gee what happened. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Please don’t keep us readers waiting too long. Your writing is really good. I am very glad you resumed it.
By the way: I really like the way you are describing Michael and how you have portrayed him so far. It is very gullible . Keep it up 😘
Date: Feb 23, 2017 12:29 am Title: Chapter 2: The St. Claires
Interesting plot, so far. I hope Michael won't allow his new manager to manipulate him. M is boss and he has to put his foot down. Especially in the " Madonna case" ! Let Michael be Georgina's salvation
Author's Response: Thanks for the feed back, MJ is too boss to let anyone push him around.
Date: Feb 22, 2017 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 2: The St. Claires
I'm still very much loving your story. I really enjoy the fact that we can "hear" both Georgie's and Michael's thoughts. We can also very well feel their sadness, especially Michael. The truth is he probably did have to go through moments like this with the people around him. That Heath man sounds like trouble, but it does seem like he will be the connection btw Michael and Georgie since he works for pepsi.. =)
Please update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're still enjoying it, I hope you stick around for more. Heath is a piece of work, but you'll find out why soon :)
Date: Feb 11, 2017 11:18 am Title: Chapter 1: The Wild, Wild West
Love love love it. I'm barely on here now due to the severe injuries of my fingers and therapy but I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks I really appreciate you reviewing and reading. I hope you get well soon though :(
Date: Feb 11, 2017 09:38 am Title: Chapter 1: The Wild, Wild West
I really enjoyed this first chapter, you are an awesome writer, i love the amount of detail you put in. Loving the story so far, looking forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you I will, I'm glad you liked the details :)
Date: Feb 11, 2017 09:06 am Title: Chapter 1: The Wild, Wild West
I absolutely love it! Way to start a story! It is elaborate, funny and well written. I love your style of writing! Love it!!! Really , well done. Love that part, where Michael verbalizes how he feels about The Madonna!! Hilarious! Please update fast. For your first try at writing a novel: congrats 🎈 🍾 Way to go!! Please write more, more more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks I appreciate the long review. lol I wasn't sure if anyone would think it was funny or too serious so I'm glad you saw the humor. I will be updating soon.
Date: Feb 10, 2017 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Wild, Wild West
Very well done. I encourage you to keep going. I like the way you portrayed the humanity of both characters.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! And thank you for the review its really nice