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Reviewer: waterlily91 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 01, 2017 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 2: meeting Michael part 1

I hate guys that think they can just invade a woman's privacy like that. And he called her rude! Can wait to see what happens between Michael and Esmeralda.

Author's Response: Thank u for reading!

Reviewer: waterlily91 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2017 04:11 am Title: Chapter 1: the story of esmeralda (her firts years)

I am eager to see where this story is going to go. I love stories where Michael fell in love with someone with similar experiences!

Author's Response: thank you very much! i will do my best i promise

Reviewer: MJThrillerRockerChick Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2017 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: the story of esmeralda (her firts years)

Good start



Author's Response: thanks !

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