[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2013 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 32: Chrystal's Date/Arriving to New York
Please continue!!! I want more!!
GO GO GO!!
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2013 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 32: Chrystal's Date/Arriving to New York
I like whats happening. I don't think like and Chrystal would have been good for each other after the shit they did wrong. It IS time to move on. Start over fresh.
Date: Feb 16, 2013 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 27: Why Are You Here?
GOOD.
"failing to do your duties as wife"
Then DIVORCE. don't CHEAT.
I hope Chrystal feels a lotta pain.
Stacey is psycho but she didn't start this.
Date: Feb 16, 2013 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 16: Oh, Shit
I know Stacey ain't the nicest woman in the world, but when your creation, your CHILD, does something like this...when your husband does a woody Allen on you like that...the emotions are too much to handle.
I have no sympathy for cheaters. Look at MJ ass telling her he wants a divorce now that she finds out? How about BEFORE you spread your legs for her fcking daughter?
And JAY. my lord Chrystal and Michael are selfish people. You let a fan crush cpme
Before family. I don't care how much I hate my Mom that is fucked up.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2013 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 32: Chrystal's Date/Arriving to New York
No. -_- MJ needs to get his act together and think about Chrystal. Or maybe...Chrystal will get jealous when she later learns MJ is with Maria or something...lol plz update ASAP!
[Report This]Date: Feb 01, 2013 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 31: That's What You Get
Noo, they're going separate ways.
That sucks so bad :(
Continue.
Date: Feb 01, 2013 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 31: That's What You Get
loving it so far :)
Date: Feb 01, 2013 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 31: That's What You Get
I hope Chrystal will get some happiness. She really was michael's ride or die and she sacrificed a lot for him. Her relationship with her mother, her reputation. Her unborn baby. All for him!!!!! Wow. Yeah I'm siding with her on this. If Michael ever tries to win her back, he needs to go all the way in. He needs to work hard. He deserves to suffer for a bit. Meanwhile can't wait to see her date with Mario. And what is Michael goin to New York for? Ugh. Anyway, he's gonna suffer now and he needs to. He fucked up.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2013 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 30: Over
:( poor Michael
I'm glad this story was updated.
It's awesome.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2013 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 30: Over
I think Michael & Chrystal should get back together. They are ment for each other. And i think Chrystal should let Michael explain what happened insted of her jumping the conclusion train. But anyways i hope Michael & Chrystal gets back together. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2013 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 30: Over
O-O that was harsh but what can I say he slept with his ex her mum! He deserved it bu at least let him know what's up face to face.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2013 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 30: Over
OMG!! I can't tell if they are done or not...I mean if I were Chrystal I would break up with him too. I think shes just upset. Maybe they need to go on the jerry springer show! lmfao
Author's Response:
Lmao! That's prolly what they need.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2013 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 1: Hint Of Jealousy
I soo Love ths story, I wish it was updated more but I completely understand when life catches up to you. I hope Both of them will get back together. But I was wondering has this girl you have being Chrystal, is she some sort of model or something? Or someone famous? Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
The girl I use to portray Chrystal is Zoe Saldana. She's an actress.
Date: Jan 04, 2013 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 30: Over
I can't blame Chrystal for being hurt. I would like to see them back together BUT not right now. That's was real messed up why Michael did so I think he needs to really probe himself to her in order to win her back. It was real messed up because he was supposed to be the exception to once a cheater always a cheater and he knows damn well Stacey was up to no good and his dumb ass fell for it. Chrystal needs to date someone else and Michael needs to work his ass off tryna get her back since he's the one who fucked it up.
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2012 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 29: Starting To Move On
Hi im a new reader and let me tell you this is a really great story. When i read the first few chapters i thought well maybe Stacie could change but she never did. I love Chrystal's personality she is WAY nicer and sweeter than her mom. Sorry but not sorry lol. But i want Michael and Chrystal to get back together. They make a great couple. Dont get me wrong Mario is really cuite. I dont like Stacie she is such a bitch. #TeamChrystal&Michael #Chrystal&Michael4Ever Sorry for the hashtags but i just had to do it. But please can you get Chrystal & Michael back together again. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Author's Response:
Awwwwwh. Thanks for taking the time to read and review my story (:
[Report This]Date: Dec 15, 2012 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 29: Starting To Move On
OMG I love this story...and GOT DAYUM I LOVE ME SOME CHRIS BROWN...good for Chrystal <3 I do think her and Michael still need to discuss tho.
Date: Dec 15, 2012 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 29: Starting To Move On
Oh snap!!!! Go Chrystal! Boo Michael. His ass needs to wallow in guilt for being so damn dumb. Whatever. Chrystal and this dude should hook up! She deserves a good man.
Date: Oct 20, 2012 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 28: Should've Known Better
Oh my gosh, Chrystal is in a lot of drama! update :)
Date: Oct 20, 2012 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 28: Should've Known Better
Yes Chrystal needs to give his adds a hard time. Maybe even see some other men too. And sadly, even though people can change.. It is a point that if a man will cheat with you, he can cheat on you too. Michael was 100% wrong for what he did and his ass needs to suffer. If he blows her phone up, she shouldn't answer none of his damn calls. Let his ass wallow for awhile. He should've known better.
Author's Response:
LOL ikr?
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2012 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 27: Why Are You Here?
I loveeeeee this story please continue!!!!!!! :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2012 02:09 am Title: Chapter 27: Why Are You Here?
oh god o cant believe this. fuck stacy i haaaate her oh no. why did she have to destory the lovely christmas feeling :-C
christal come back pleeeasss! !!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2012 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 27: Why Are You Here?
Stacey's so damn childish. That's something a pathetic little girl in high school would do.!!
Date: Jul 21, 2012 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 27: Why Are You Here?
Smh this shit just never ends. Michael should've known that bitch would try something. He should've pushed her ass off IMMEDIATELY and left the room. And thats the best explanation he could give? It's not what it looks like? Smh way to go Michael. You have royally fucked up. I have a feeling Chrys is going to retaliate. She's gonna go do something, and I can't say I'd blame her. This is the second time she's had to fight over Michael who is supposed to love her and be her man. Michael needs to fight for her for a change. I hope she bumps into somebody while she's out. Shes young and pretty.. Men will def want her. Young and older.
Date: Jul 20, 2012 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 26: Thanksgiving Disaster
Aww this was cute! Chrys needs some cooking lessons but bless her for trying. I'm glad Mike appreciated it, she loves him. And KFC again? Lmao that man loves his chicken! I love chicken too tho so I can't talk. Lol. Good to see another fun happy chapter with these two. They're so cute.
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2012 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 25: Breathe Easy
Aw, family tickle fights. <3