Date: Aug 15, 2019 04:26 am Title: Chapter 3
Your story is interesting. I will follow it. Ian a little clueless about the Michael character, though. Wonder who he is...ðŸ¤”and what his connection is with her home. I guess it must be his childhood home. Does he have siblings, what does he do for a living??? He is very mysterious. You havenâ€™t let us in on many details about his life, so I guess we need more updates ðŸ˜‰
Date: Aug 13, 2019 09:33 am Title: Chapter 1
I enjoy reading your writing. I believe you have a very balanced approach to writing detail. Michael was introduced very slowly, and I can picture him saying some of the things he said in this chapter. Wonderful opening!