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Reviewer: Whitney98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2018 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 1. Prologue...

Omg you need to update soon!!!!!! This story is already considered one of my favorite stories on here :)

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2017 11:41 am Title: Chapter 4. Beauty from Within...

I lovve thiss glad to see you updated wish the chapter was a bit longer! 



Author's Response:

Awww thanks it felt good to be back. And the next chapter will be a bit longer for you.

Reviewer: Aranya Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2017 12:44 am Title: Chapter 1. Prologue...

I think this is a great start for a story. (On a side note, Anybody would faint if MJ proposed them, lol.) I'm wondering if you wrote Michael a bit AU, seeing his way of speaking seems a bit different.

 

Reviewer: peaceloveme Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2017 12:00 am Title: Chapter 1. Prologue...

Here for Mike and the BBWs ❤❤❤❤😂. So far I like it ☺

Reviewer: peaceloveme Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2017 12:00 am Title: Chapter 1. Prologue...

Here for Mike and the BBWs ❤❤❤❤😂. So far I like it ☺

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2017 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 4. Beauty from Within...

Ooh its good to see your back! Also why you making this story so short for me! Why! Lol. I demand at least loong chapters at least. *cough* back to the story. Well they've only known each other a day and it doesn't feel like it one bit. I love the way Mike tries to encourage her even if the gym I don't think should have been the greatest place to take her to lol. But they will only get closer and maybe you'll give me a wedding for them in later future lol. But more is to come during their dinner outing I can't wait to see what goes down!. I hope you had a great Christmas filled with food! 



Author's Response:

Aww it feels great to be back in such a long time. Lmboooo don't kill me. Sorry Lorry! It was a sudden idea one day to write a short story but it's going to be so worth it. 

Our baby Mike. He's the created, isn't he? I love the way he encourages Kat too that's why I wrote this. It's so empowering to me. The gym situation, yes it wasn't the right place buuutttt, he had air and he meant any harm by it. A wedding will most definitely be in the picture trust me. I have to do one. And thanks I hope your Christmas and New Year's was amazing as well. 

Reviewer: neptuneblue23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2017 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 4. Beauty from Within...

Great chapter, they got along very well!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much and they really did :)

Reviewer: Sunsetbabe221 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2017 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 3. Beauty from Within...

Love this ! Hope you update soon

Author's Response:

Thank you so much hun !

Reviewer: neptuneblue23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2017 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 3. Beauty from Within...

Damn, I think Michael is falling for her very fast!! Very funny and good chapter!!

Author's Response:

Chile that's not even half of it lol. And thanks for the love :)

Reviewer: neptuneblue23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2017 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 2. Beauty from Within...

Ooo, looks like Michael is already falling for Kat!! Good story so far!!

Reviewer: neptuneblue23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2017 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 1. Prologue...

OMG!! Great prologue!! Can't wait to see what happens once we get to her birthday!!

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 05:00 am Title: Chapter 3. Beauty from Within...

Ooh I love how bold mj is getting what he wants! The girl is mine~  minus Paul lol. She's a beautiful girl and I know mj will help her see her beauty inwardly and outwardly she reminds me of myself a little (insecurity issues). Lovely chapter <3



Author's Response:

Don't we all love the bold MJ :))) Kat is very beautiful point blank just wishes she could see it but that's what our baby Michael is for. 

And I struggled with insecurity myself back in middle school and a still sorta do now at the age of 20 so I can relate to you and Kat. Insecurity issues are a pain and can take a toll on ya. But I'm more than positive that you're very stunning Lorry no doubts :) thanks for reviewing.



Author's Response:

Don't we all love the bold MJ :))) Kat is very beautiful point blank just wishes she could see it but that's what our baby Michael is for. 

And I struggled with insecurity myself back in middle school and a still sorta do now at the age of 20 so I can relate to you and Kat. Insecurity issues are a pain and can take a toll on ya. But I'm more than positive that you're very stunning Lorry no doubts :) thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 04:08 am Title: Chapter 3. Beauty from Within...

Sheesh, Michael was immediately smitten with Kat. Haha. I know she feels the same  but we'll see how this goes as the story develops. So far so good. 



Author's Response:

Ha, yes Michael was very smitten to the max. And it's very possible that she feels the same we'll see about that soon enough. And thanks for reading.

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 04:01 am Title: Chapter 2. Beauty from Within...

lol I'm shocked that Michael ordered a burger but then again everyone can have a cheat day. I hope as the story progresses Kat will grow in confidence. I'm looking forward to more. 

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 03:54 am Title: Chapter 1. Prologue...

Wrong time to faint Kat, wrong time lol. 



Author's Response:

Lol I probably would have fainted to if Mike asked me to marry him. 

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