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Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2018 02:33 am Title: Chapter 4. Beauty from Within...

This was such a cute chapter that I really enjoyed. When I say that Michael is completely smitten kitten with Kat i’m so serious lol. I think the chapter was very good and I enjoyed rereading and then catching up to this. I’m rooting for their relationship!

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2018 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 1. Prologue...

Never knew that you were continuing on with this story. Now I have something to look forward to when I get home. Glad you’re going to keep writing it. 



Author's Response:

Lol yes i am continuing the story just had writers block and been very busy with life (work and school). Its been very hected for me for the past part year and last. But im glad ypur still a reader of the story. More is in store girl 😊

Reviewer: neptuneblue23 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2018 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 5. Beauty from Within...

Very cute chapter, can’t wait for the next!!

Author's Response:

Aww thank you so much. Im glad you’re enjoying it!!

Reviewer: Whitney98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2018 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 1. Prologue...

Omg you need to update soon!!!!!! This story is already considered one of my favorite stories on here :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I’ve been hella busy and also had writers block for most of my stories but im grafually getting the groove back. But im back. 

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2017 11:41 am Title: Chapter 4. Beauty from Within...

I lovve thiss glad to see you updated wish the chapter was a bit longer! 



Author's Response:

Awww thanks it felt good to be back. And the next chapter will be a bit longer for you.

Reviewer: Aranya Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2017 12:44 am Title: Chapter 1. Prologue...

I think this is a great start for a story. (On a side note, Anybody would faint if MJ proposed them, lol.) I'm wondering if you wrote Michael a bit AU, seeing his way of speaking seems a bit different.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much i appreciate the love. And i kind of did actually . Someone pointed it out. Lol

Reviewer: peaceloveme Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2017 12:00 am Title: Chapter 1. Prologue...

Here for Mike and the BBWs β€β€β€β€πŸ˜‚. So far I like it ☺



Author's Response:

Lol yassss and thanks so much πŸ’•πŸ˜©

Reviewer: peaceloveme Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2017 12:00 am Title: Chapter 1. Prologue...

Here for Mike and the BBWs β€β€β€β€πŸ˜‚. So far I like it ☺

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2017 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 4. Beauty from Within...

Ooh its good to see your back! Also why you making this story so short for me! Why! Lol. I demand at least loong chapters at least. *cough* back to the story. Well they've only known each other a day and it doesn't feel like it one bit. I love the way Mike tries to encourage her even if the gym I don't think should have been the greatest place to take her to lol. But they will only get closer and maybe you'll give me a wedding for them in later future lol. But more is to come during their dinner outing I can't wait to see what goes down!. I hope you had a great Christmas filled with food! 



Author's Response:

Aww it feels great to be back in such a long time. Lmboooo don't kill me. Sorry Lorry! It was a sudden idea one day to write a short story but it's going to be so worth it. 

Our baby Mike. He's the created, isn't he? I love the way he encourages Kat too that's why I wrote this. It's so empowering to me. The gym situation, yes it wasn't the right place buuutttt, he had air and he meant any harm by it. A wedding will most definitely be in the picture trust me. I have to do one. And thanks I hope your Christmas and New Year's was amazing as well. 

Reviewer: neptuneblue23 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2017 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 4. Beauty from Within...

Great chapter, they got along very well!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much and they really did :)

Reviewer: Sunsetbabe221 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2017 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 3. Beauty from Within...

Love this ! Hope you update soon

Author's Response:

Thank you so much hun !

Reviewer: neptuneblue23 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2017 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 3. Beauty from Within...

Damn, I think Michael is falling for her very fast!! Very funny and good chapter!!

Author's Response:

Chile that's not even half of it lol. And thanks for the love :)

Reviewer: neptuneblue23 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2017 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 2. Beauty from Within...

Ooo, looks like Michael is already falling for Kat!! Good story so far!!

Reviewer: neptuneblue23 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2017 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 1. Prologue...

OMG!! Great prologue!! Can't wait to see what happens once we get to her birthday!!

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 05:00 am Title: Chapter 3. Beauty from Within...

Ooh I love how bold mj is getting what he wants! The girl is mine~  minus Paul lol. She's a beautiful girl and I know mj will help her see her beauty inwardly and outwardly she reminds me of myself a little (insecurity issues). Lovely chapter <3



Author's Response:

Don't we all love the bold MJ :))) Kat is very beautiful point blank just wishes she could see it but that's what our baby Michael is for. 

And I struggled with insecurity myself back in middle school and a still sorta do now at the age of 20 so I can relate to you and Kat. Insecurity issues are a pain and can take a toll on ya. But I'm more than positive that you're very stunning Lorry no doubts :) thanks for reviewing.



Author's Response:

Don't we all love the bold MJ :))) Kat is very beautiful point blank just wishes she could see it but that's what our baby Michael is for. 

And I struggled with insecurity myself back in middle school and a still sorta do now at the age of 20 so I can relate to you and Kat. Insecurity issues are a pain and can take a toll on ya. But I'm more than positive that you're very stunning Lorry no doubts :) thanks for reviewing.

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