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Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 05:00 am Title: Chapter 3. Beauty from Within...

Ooh I love how bold mj is getting what he wants! The girl is mine~  minus Paul lol. She's a beautiful girl and I know mj will help her see her beauty inwardly and outwardly she reminds me of myself a little (insecurity issues). Lovely chapter <3



Author's Response:

Don't we all love the bold MJ :))) Kat is very beautiful point blank just wishes she could see it but that's what our baby Michael is for. 

And I struggled with insecurity myself back in middle school and a still sorta do now at the age of 20 so I can relate to you and Kat. Insecurity issues are a pain and can take a toll on ya. But I'm more than positive that you're very stunning Lorry no doubts :) thanks for reviewing.



Author's Response:

Don't we all love the bold MJ :))) Kat is very beautiful point blank just wishes she could see it but that's what our baby Michael is for. 

And I struggled with insecurity myself back in middle school and a still sorta do now at the age of 20 so I can relate to you and Kat. Insecurity issues are a pain and can take a toll on ya. But I'm more than positive that you're very stunning Lorry no doubts :) thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 04:08 am Title: Chapter 3. Beauty from Within...

Sheesh, Michael was immediately smitten with Kat. Haha. I know she feels the same  but we'll see how this goes as the story develops. So far so good. 



Author's Response:

Ha, yes Michael was very smitten to the max. And it's very possible that she feels the same we'll see about that soon enough. And thanks for reading.

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 04:01 am Title: Chapter 2. Beauty from Within...

lol I'm shocked that Michael ordered a burger but then again everyone can have a cheat day. I hope as the story progresses Kat will grow in confidence. I'm looking forward to more. 

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 03:54 am Title: Chapter 1. Prologue...

Wrong time to faint Kat, wrong time lol. 



Author's Response:

Lol I probably would have fainted to if Mike asked me to marry him. 

Reviewer: Clsflames Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2017 09:08 am Title: Chapter 1. Prologue...

wow! Your story definintly has a unique storyline. Love that chemistry in chapter 2. Can't wait to grirl!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much I appreciate the love. 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2017 06:36 am Title: Chapter 2. Beauty from Within...

Aw man girl hope whatever is going on will get better! :) the story is awesome girl! (And I never say awesome lol) great start!

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 1. Prologue...

Great job already girl! Can't wait to get into this story :)))



Author's Response:

Thanks so much girl. I'm so glad you're enjoying it thus far. Trust me it's gonna be worth a read :)

Reviewer: Rock2myRoll Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 04:35 am Title: Chapter 1. Prologue...

Ooooo this is awesome already lol!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. 

 

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 02:29 am Title: Chapter 2. Beauty from Within...

I was wondering how you were able to write again your injury must be getting better now! That's a relief. You go Mike calling her love already that chemistry is already popping and it's only just started. I can't wait to see their relationship grew and no drama but that's unlikely to happen lol.



Author's Response:

Lol, yes it's getting better but I still have a little trouble to get myfingers to bend on their own and straighten a little more but everything is good. 

As for the story, Mike is seriously into Kat and he only knows her name for right now. The chemistry was evident there and I'm sure their love story is going to be drama free or is it... But we'll see.

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 12:52 am Title: Chapter 2. Beauty from Within...

Yass u updated!! Lovve!



Author's Response:

Yayyy!!! It's been a while so I had to plus my injury has Improved some.

Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2017 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 2. Beauty from Within...

Very well done. Gosh! I loved the way you described the 'specimen'. Keep on with good work :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I did my very best to have it perfected. And yesss I had to describe Mike as one fine piece of specimen  ;) 

Reviewer: Thrillmegirl008 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2016 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 1. Prologue...

I love how Michaels occupation is a fitness trainer and I love Ashley Graham. Can't wait for the next part.

Author's Response:

I wanted to try something different for once and I really think Mike could have been one sexy fitness trainer in real life if he wanted to be. And I love love love Ashley myself. I idolize her. Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2016 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1. Prologue...

Lovveee this so cute



Author's Response:

Thanks hunn :)

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2016 03:06 am Title: Chapter 1. Prologue...

This is interesting so far! I'm not plus size but I've always felt self conscious of my petite frame..but I like this so far!



Author's Response:

You and me both, lol. I have a thin frame,and used to hate it and wanted to become "slim thick" with a nice butt to match but I accept my my body for the way God made me. Was thin all my life just ate like a hungry grown man. And I'm happy that you like it So far.

Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2016 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 1. Prologue...

Omg just  love this story  something different keep it coming 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I really appreciate it and I'm glad you're liking it So far.

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