Date: Feb 20, 2018 07:20 am Title: Chapter 19- Don't Be Jealous
Dam girl why the cliffhanger lol Michael finna be petty asf I’m already knowing lol
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2018 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 19- Don't Be Jealous
Ah hell.... Michael gonna either be real toward bout what he wanna day to Shawn Orr he’s either gonna be quiet bout it and Shawn gonna confront him... But whateva is bout to go down in this next chapter I got my popcorn and hot piping tea ready cuz Semaj is really gonna be in for it, especially when she know Michael has a hard time when it comes to other men and them being around her.
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2018 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 19- Don't Be Jealous
I know you didn't stop there! Now I'm mad lol. I'd be jealous too though but still Michael should trust her not to cheat.
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2018 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 18- Sweet Caress
Ok first of all .......YYYYYYAAAAASSSSSSS!!!!! Girl!! I just got my whole entire life and a half!!!! Listen!!! These two chapters was exactly the fix I needed. I swear this literally my fav story! From Semaj getting herself worked up enough to go to the club to her not being able to handle the Hen-dog to her becoming a stripper to Michael SCALPING Nicole (I liveee!!!!) to Semaj JUST ABOUT to finally throw the neck (Michael just hadddd to stop her) to some fire sex!!! MY LIFE! MY WIG!!!You really did that, like....... wow. These my whole babies. I love this story girl you dont even understand!!
Author's Response:
Well I am so glad you got your life lmao. Girl you knew good and well Michael was going to stop here before she got down to the nitty gritty, but the future might entail something different... you never know lol. Thanks so much for keeping up with this story and enjoying it so much. It means a lot to me that people love Michael and Semaj as much as I do.
Date: Feb 08, 2018 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 1- New Beginning from an End
Ok so im just seeing that you updated. My phone is still broken but I LUH DIS STORY so im reading it on my laptop! Stay tuned for my review lol
Date: Feb 07, 2018 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 18- Sweet Caress
Such a great chapter, girl! You write phenomenally and I enjoy this story so much. The sex scene wa snt too raunchy or anything. You did a great job and even tho you don't do them often, you put them in amazingly and perfect timing. Keep up the awesome work! Love Michael and Semaj!
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks so much! I really appreciate you saying that and thanks for reading.
Date: Feb 07, 2018 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 18- Sweet Caress
Girl! That sexy scene was poppin!!!! Lol great job . Bravo bravo! Lol
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2018 08:12 am Title: Chapter 18- Sweet Caress
Mike told that bitch OFF! I am more proud than the last chapter. Gosh. And the love scene was perfect I almost died when Semaj almost went down on Mike. It's gonna happen Mike...its gonna happen. I have been loving the updates but I miss the drama. I know you got something planned and I can't wait.
Author's Response:
Yes, yes, I'm sure everyone is missing the sting of drama. It's slowly building and we'll get there I promise. Just keep reading along!
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2018 05:52 am Title: Chapter 18- Sweet Caress
Good on Michael for telling that bitch off. It was a long time coming. I hope she finally feels some shame after being chewed out in front of everyone. She needs a reality check. Although she didn't force Semaj to have those drinks, she had a terrible attitude all night towards someone (Semaj) who is nothing but kind and most certainly doesn't deserve it.
I don't know what universe Nicole lives in but just because a guy is friendly to you does not mean he's coming on to you. Michael has been pretty clear he isn't interested even before this chapter. He was prickly to her at best after she kissed him. Bitch needs to get over it and herself. The girl is standing on the border of creepy stalker territory.
I love Michael's protectiveness over Semaj it's adorable.
Author's Response:
Nicole was just completely out of it. I agree to the point where she was going too far. Her infatuation with Michael seriously clouded her judgement.
Michael loves protecting her lol.
Thanks a lot for still reading!
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2018 08:38 am Title: Chapter 17- Eyes For You Only
Time for Nicole to get hit by a bus. The project is over so she should be too. Bye bye bitch. Take a hike with your desperate ass.
Good on Semaj for Marling her territory but seriously though Mike needs to stop hanging out with her completely. Who even invited her in the first place?
Mike's other friends seem nice though.
Author's Response:
LOL i'm weak.
I think Mike was only around her because he has mutual friends, Cam and the others.
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2018 05:43 am Title: Chapter 17- Eyes For You Only
Get yo man girl!!!!! Semaj made me proud in this chapter. Don't let that bitch Nicole show you out. Nicole is getting thirsty as hell. Is that project done so Michael can dismiss her ass? Im so done with this broad. Like seriously, let semaj unleash the beast she unleashed on Lonnie. I hate thirsty bitches, give her a coke and call it a day.
Author's Response:
A coke a day will keep the thirsty hoes away.
I'm glad Semaj showed Nicole too. She needed it lol.
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2018 07:46 am Title: Chapter 16- Because of You
Girl you did it again! This chapter was good. Michael was definitely on one and ready to go. But I’m glad he calmed down because it would’ve been so much trouble if he retaliated the way he really wanted to. Why did he scare that lady out of the bathroom like that 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 he gets on my nerves😂. But Semaj’s fear is definitely valid. It’s understandable why she’s afraid. I’d like to think that Michael can protect her and/or Marco will stay awayyyy but knowing him there’s a 50/50 chance for that. I’m excited to see what happens next and I’m definitely ready for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your help last time! And i agree. Michael was going to risk it all, but luckily he did calm down and didn't do anything stupid. He's so mean lol poor lady ain't do shit to him and he want to be rude, but you know that's just how he is LOL. Thanks so much for reading and I hope you enjoy the new chapter!
Date: Jan 16, 2018 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 16- Because of You
Hey your back! Good ass comeback girl!!!!! I love these two 😠but when are they gonna do the horizontal again? Lol
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! And I don't know... maybe the next chapter? Or two chapters from now? You'll have to read in order to find out. Thanks for the support!
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2018 05:40 am Title: Chapter 16- Because of You
I'm so happy you updated. I was like, damn how long is Brandy gonna make Semaj stay in that bathroom lol. I'm glad she is ok though but now I know she won't be the same. She will constantly be looking over her shoulder. I'm gonna love this. You said that im gonna love chapter 17.....can't wait.
Author's Response:
Lol sorry! I hope it wasn't too long of a wait this time. But sorry initially the events of chapter 15 was going to be 17, but i switched it around. But you loved 15 which I knew you would. Ch. 17 is now something different because I had to switch some things up. Nonetheless I hope you still like, or love, chapter 17. I enjoyed writing it!
Date: Dec 16, 2017 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1- New Beginning from an End
I know it’s finals time but sis I’m having withdrawals 😩😩😩