Reviews For If You Love Me
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Susie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2018 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 24- Jumping to Conclusions Pt. 1

Yooooooooooooooo i didnt even realize the title... pt 1? so you bout to have us on this emotional rollercoaster for a few more chapters? my heart cant take this. first of all, michael just out here livin his best liiife while my bby semaj is in her room suffering? and nicole? does she want to fight? she has issues like seriously. he doesnt want you girl! ugh and then shawn showing up ? what does he wanttt? see I rly wanted to believe he was innocent but he making me wonder now. now if michael show up while he's there im really gon be stressed out. LORDT brandy you wasnt playing when you said you was bringing the drama! update soon so my blood pressure can go down!!

Reviewer: willyoubethere_mj Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2018 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 24- Jumping to Conclusions Pt. 1

Shawn and Nicole need to go ahead and get together because they both tryna break up Michael and Semaj’s relationship. But Semaj don’t let Shawn fool you into inviting him in to “talk” and Michael shows up to apologize... Let’s hope her day of graduation isn’t ruined from shenanigans.

Reviewer: mickey Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2018 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 1- New Beginning from an End

Please don't tell me that Michael is going to show up while Shawn is there.  Girl, you have got me on pins and needles over here.  I need for Semaj to punch Nicole in the throat just one good time.

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2018 04:22 am Title: Chapter 24- Jumping to Conclusions Pt. 1

Oh no don tell me semaj is gonna invite him in. Hadn't shawn done enough. Ugh, his grave should be beside Nicole's. I'm tempted to write myself in this story as a random character and kill her, then write myself out. I'll pay you to do that lol. Just a short 2 paragraph detailed part about how I ran her over with a 18 wheeler. Anywho, michael was a little harsh to her. Even though what she did was wrong, he should know she would never cheat on him. Semaj loves michael and the only reason she agreed to be friends with shawn was for michael. He should take that into consideration. They just need to talk, get married or have a baby lol. This couple is just too cute and I needs for one of these things to happen.

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2018 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 24- Jumping to Conclusions Pt. 1

My blood pressure is through the roof with Nicole. That heffer is crazy. Mike needs a restraining order. Bitch he don't want you get it through your head you fake ass desperate ho. 

And whatS is Semaj going to do that will piss everyone off? Ugh I was feeling better until I read that. Mike shouldn't have let Semaj sit all night thinking he broke up with her....I get needing some time to cool off but he should have reaolves things before going to sleep. Especially since its her graduation day. If he don't watch himself, Semaj is going to break up with him. 

These two are my favorite couple. I hope they stay together. 

Shawn needs to fuck off. 

Reviewer: Susie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2018 09:42 am Title: Chapter 23- When Tensions Are High...

BRANDY!!!!! I AMSPEECHLESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!! BECAUSE THATS THE ONLY REVIEW I CAN MUSTER RIGHT NOW LMAO!!! IM STRESSED AND PRESSED OMFG!!!



Author's Response:

So speechless and excited that your words are jumbled, Lol. 

Thanks so much for reading and sorry I had you stressin' & pressin'. Maybe the new update will create a lighter load. 

As always thanks for your support Susie and for reading. 

Reviewer: sec1978 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2018 10:43 am Title: Chapter 23- When Tensions Are High...

I get why Michael is pissed. She missed his presentation. And even though it was an innocent mistake, he is always there to support her at her events. She should not have fallen asleep and trusted someone else to wake he up in time. That said, Michael needs to calm down. Semaj is always understanding with him when he fucks up and she forgives him immediately. He’s a hot head. I just hope he doesn’t do something he can’t take back.

Author's Response:

Michael has been a very good support system for Semaj but it goes both ways. 

Very true. She always forgives him no matter what regardless of what it was/is. 

Reviewer: sec1978 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2018 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 11- Let's Make a Deal

I wish she’d move in with michael. She’s 18 and they’re grounding her? Hell no!

Reviewer: sec1978 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2018 09:14 am Title: Chapter 7- The Truth May Set U Free Pt. I

I think she’s going to be pissed that he didn’t tell her sooner. But she’s usually pretty easy going so I’m sure she’ll get over it. He should have told Nicole he had a girlfriend when it happened and straightened her ass out so she wouldn’t think she had a chance. She’s gonna cause drama between Mike and Semaj and try to break them up.

Reviewer: rolemodelish Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2018 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 1- New Beginning from an End

Semaj is too old to be this naive she had to know staying over Shawn’s House was crossing the line especially knowing how Michael doesn’t trust him already. When Shawn starting inserting himself in her and Michael’s conversation being that he’s her friend she should’ve checked him. Also he knew exactly what he was doing by not waking her up on time and bringing her, her jacket in front of Michael I knew he was going to be nothing but bad news hopefully Michael and Semaj can get past this Semaj just needs to stop being so naive 

Reviewer: mickey Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2018 09:19 am Title: Chapter 23- When Tensions Are High...

I don't trust Shawn's behind either.  If all he really wanted to be to Semaj is a friend he should not have kept egging michael on and not giving Semaj a chance to fix things with Michael.  Of course in Michael's mind Semaj is taking up for Shawn and making him priority over Michael.  I am really looking forward to seeing where this goes.  Got my good eye on Shawn.



Author's Response:

In Michael's eyes it does look like Semaj is defending Shawn when that isn't the case. Things will heat up...or cool down.. honestly i'm not sure. 

Thanks for reading <3

Reviewer: mickey Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2018 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 23- When Tensions Are High...

Brandy,

Thank you for continuing to write this story.  I hope that things in your life settle down soon.  I know how life can come at you sometimes.  I know it may take a while in between updates but know that it always makes my day to get one.

 



Author's Response:

This was very sweet. Thanks so much Mickey. I appreciate it. I'm definitely striving to keep writing. 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2018 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 23- When Tensions Are High...

Them cousins gotta go. Im sorry but that gotta gtfo somewhere. Then dropped Semaj phone in the damn water yea I’ll be angry alright. iPhones ain’t cheap. And how sweet of simone and jan to make up. Jan learned her lesson about friends. 

Abd lord have mercy Shawn and Mike are at it but i wish he believed Maj when she said they didn’t do anything. Ik that feeling of a bf (now my ex thank god) to be insecure . He didn’t have to do her like that when he knows better than to think she’d do something like thst but Shawn kept pressing the issue tho no lie.



Author's Response:

Cousins are irritating as hell. 

Michael was definitely wrong, but let's hope he decides to right that wrong and soon. 

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2018 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 23- When Tensions Are High...

Shawn has no right to be arguing with Michael and inserting himself into their conversations. He is out of line. And Semaj should not have fallen asleep at Shawns house. If the shoe was on the other foot she would be pissed at Mike. That being said Mike over reacted. He should know how innocent Semaj's mindset is, and to give Semaj the benefit of the doubt. Shawn was right that Mike was treating her like  some hoe. She aint Lonnie. Mike is stressed about his home life and taking it out on her which isn't right. And he is playing right into Shawn's hands. I hope he doesn't do anything stupid in anger like fool around with Nicole. Cause we all know that bitch is laying in wait, ready to pounce. Please don't do that to them. I don't want this to be another story where I have to permanently write off Mike for cheating. 

I actually feel tense in the pit of my stomach over these two. I hope they work it out soon.  



Author's Response:

Shawn doesn't have a place in their arguments, I agree. 

Michael did overreact and is slightly taking his frustrations out on Semaj which he shouldn't have done and not believing her about cheating was very wrong. Mike isn't going to do anything with Nicole. I assure you.

 

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2018 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 23- When Tensions Are High...

I...oh my gosh...i don't know what to say. For the first time I'm actually mad at semaj. She should have never went with him. She should understand his part. What if he missed her graduation cause he fell asleep at Nicole's......dont make that happen cause my heart can't take it....but yeah semaj should understand. Ugh my little heart can't take this.....this is my favorite couple.......nicole should still die.



Author's Response:

Very true... she shouldn't have went to his nor think it was okay to fall asleep. 

Lol I can assure you I won't let him oversleep at Nicole's. 

Thanks for reading girl. 

You must login (register) to review.