[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2016 04:26 am Title: Part II, Phoenix; Chapter 2: The Sensualist
This is amazing! Love the way you've been developing characters. Michael keeps remaining a mistery.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. <3
Date: Dec 04, 2016 04:11 pm Title: Part II, Phoenix; Chapter 2: The Sensualist
Oh my God! That woman is such a bitch! She used Michael's son to try to get close to him! She's such a cold hearted bitch! I hope when Michael comes back and hears of this he sues her or something and Arthur needs to have full custody of his child because apparently the mother was using her too!
Author's Response:
You could make the same argument that Arthur was using her for sex, so suing her would probably just cause more problems. But yeah... Morgan is one of the most despicable characters I've ever created. lol
[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2016 09:58 am Title: Part II, Phoenix; Chapter 2: The Sensualist
Your story is really really interesting with so many unique ideas and incidents. However, I have to be honest that I would like to see more of Michael than the others. There is so little of Michael :(.
Anyway, thank you for having uploaded. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
I find it interesting that you would say that, since Michael has been at least mentioned in every chapter, if he wasn't the main focus. But, I get what you mean. There's one more chapter left of Part 2, and Part 3 will feature a lot of Michael (as well as answering a lot of questions).