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Reviewer: The man with no name Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2016 08:51 am Title: Part I, Lazarus; Chapter 3: Blood Is Thicker Than Water

It was so nice to see you'd updated. Your story gives me pretty much heavy and dismall feelings. But I am still looking forward to reading more :). I am so curious to see how Michael is gonna be and find out who that 'friend' is. Thank you.

Author's Response:

I admit that I'm not all that crazy myself about the depressing mood the story has developed. Part 2 should be a bit lighter in tone.

Reviewer: waterlily91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2016 05:32 pm Title: Part I, Lazarus; Chapter 3: Blood Is Thicker Than Water

Poor boys! Never can have a normal life. I understand he was upset but Toby shouldn't have blamed his cousin for anything. Exciting drama! Keep it up!

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