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Reviewer: BeChristine990 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2017 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aww :( this made me so sad, his heartbreak is captured beautifully, however. Thanks for posting.

Reviewer: KNM Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2016 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

I feel like this really puts a visual out for how Michael was feeling!

Reviewer: Thatkliqkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2016 12:39 am Title: Chapter 1

Poor Michael, you expressed his missed childhood and the fear of his father really well.

Reviewer: MJThrillerRockerChick Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2016 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great start

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