[Report This]Date: Jun 14, 2017 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 3
I don't think they should be begging to meet Michael this is her job. However knowing Michael at some point he will meet them. I definitely think she will meet Michael.
[Report This]Date: Jun 14, 2017 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
I think she will do well on her interview and she is the right person. Michael will like that she doesn't get starstruck.
[Report This]Date: Jun 14, 2017 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
I remember this story from another MJ fan fic board and I never got to read the whole story so now i am starting over and I am going to finish it. This poor girl with so much tragedy.
I remember you is it Nancy? :)
Author's Response:
Yes it is posted on MJJU, And MjjLegion. I have changed it a bit since posting on mjju.
It is Nancy...your username is familiar. What forum do I know you from?
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Jun 14, 2017 08:07 am Title: Chapter 11
I just read all 11 chapters and I LOVE this story. They are both so sweet and perfect for each other. I laughed so hard when he fell on the floor because he was staring at her ass. He comes off as perverted and innocent at the same time which is adorable.
I also like the pace....it is better to build a bit of suspense rather than have them get together immediately.
Now this Suzanne b&$#@, we all know she is going to try something. Michael seems REALLY uninterested so I don't think she will succeed in seducing him, but I wouldn't be surprised if she tries to get revenge on Twinkle some other way. She strikes me as a "if I can't have him, nobody will" type of psycho.
Author's Response:
Thank-you so much for the lovely comment! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. I'm glad you like the pace of the story. I often think that I should move it along faster, but when I go to write it just seems right to build on their attraction. Let's hope Suzanne doesn't spoil this for them!
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2017 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 11
*sigh* these two when will they stop playing around their attraction for each other? I want them to just expose themselves and be together! Man if I could just throw in a room together and they confess somehow! Lol. Also it's always the nice sweet ones in the story who go from 0 to 100 quickly smh. She better back off mj is not interested. What will it take for her to see that? Rejection? I can't wait for her to meet Elizabeth. This is going to be good.
Author's Response:
I hope they both will give into there emotions! But we so have Suzanne lurking in the background will she ruin their chance at love?
Date: Jun 13, 2017 10:07 am Title: Chapter 11
These two...they just need to act on their feelings.
Author's Response:
They do and will eventually if Suzanne doesn't get in the way!
Date: May 18, 2017 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
things are progressing abit too slow. one of them needs to push the envelope and move it along. they obviously have feelings for each other. now its time to act out on them and spice things up.
Author's Response:
I wonder which one will it be??? Yes they obviously have feelings for each other! Let's see what happens!
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2017 08:07 am Title: Chapter 10
It's so obvious she and mj have mutual feelings it's just they both need a push to see it. Suzanne needs to back off thinking she can get mj when he isn't interested in her. She needs to have several seats smh. But overall She will get over her fear of flying, another thing they have in common lol. Great Chapter <3
Author's Response:
Hi Lorry,
Suzanne is a trip! Yes they both have mutual feelings but will they act on it? Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2017 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 9
First off, Suzanne i feel is going to be trouble, especially as Michael and Twinkle get closer, watch out Twinkle!! I think Michael has probably spoken to Miko and Bill about Twinkle, i certainly think he has a wee crush on her. I think Gina will continue to hound Twinkle about meeting Michael and i'm sure that chrystal will get to chat to Michael on the phone, whoo hoo!!! awesome chapter, let the games begin xoxox
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! Yes, Suzanne is trouble lets hope she can be contained! Do you think Michael has a crush? How do you think Twinkle feels? I am certain the feeling is mutual! I agree her sister and Gina will hound her until they get the chance to meet her illustrious boss! Look for an update soon!
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2017 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 8
awesome as always dirty diana xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: Apr 26, 2017 05:51 am Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens, especially now that they also have to deal with an angry, jealous woman, too!
Author's Response:
I guess you will find out in upcoming chapters! Thanks for taking the time to review! It means alot! Look for an update in the next few days!
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2017 04:07 am Title: Chapter 9
Glad to see the update I enjoy this story a lot =) Dangit Stella get your nose outta there.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! I am glad you are enjoying Blessings an update will be up soon! Talk about Stella showing up at the wrong time!
Date: Apr 20, 2017 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 9
Suzanne is a snake not to be trusted. I'm so happy you didn't give up and finally update.
Author's Response:
You are right Suzanne should not be trusted! Thanks for the vote of confidence and not letting me give up! I will be posting an update soon!
Date: Mar 16, 2017 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 8
Would really love to see this continued
Author's Response:
Thanks for stopping by and reading! I have been MIA for a little while as life gets in the way! I have vowed to myself that I will finish this story as I know how it is to read a story that leaves you hanging! It may take awhile but it will be completed! I am working on the next chapter and hope to have it up within the next few days.
Date: Dec 10, 2016 08:17 am Title: Chapter 8
Here comes the definite yelling
Author's Response:
Sorry I have taken so long to thank-you for taking the time to read and review! I have been MIA... but I promise that I will update soon don't give up on me!
I am working on the next chapter as we speak... I have vowed to myself to finish this story.