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Reviewer: BlackMercury Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2017 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love the pov you have went with, I hope you continue.

Author's Response:

Thank ya!!

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2017 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 3

Loving it so far! It's really dramatic! Enjoying the great amount of internal monologues and the emotions, but I can't wait to see some dialogue, action and of course, MICHAEL! 😘

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 03, 2017 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 3

Please keep on with it. It is good. So full of emotion

Author's Response:

Wow thank u! Dont know where im going with it yet :)

Reviewer: Corybante Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 21, 2016 09:37 am Title: Chapter 2

I'm so happy that someone is writing a story from her pov! I think this is fascinating. I think a lot of fans (regardless of how they may feel about her) have wondered what her thought process was like. I love how you bring out her spunk and her 'bite me' attitude! Honestly that's what I liked best about her. And I think it said a lot about Michael that he wasn't threatened by a woman who was very much her own person. 

 

Awesome! Keep going :)



Author's Response:

Hey sorry for the late response. Miss seeing your stories. Wow thank you. I honestly thought i'd get shit or criticism for doing this. It was like a dare really and my own like what would i do if i was her. I feel like i relate to her in a lot of ways esp with the bite me or piss off attitude. Lmao yea i guess so i hadn't really thoight about what it would say about him. I still have no idea where im going with this. But thank you for the feedback. 

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2016 06:42 am Title: Chapter 2

Yasss! It just keeps on getting better and BETTER. It's definitely interesting and I'm honestly growing impatient! You gotta update more! Aw you really didn't have to mention me but thank you so much, you're so sweet! I'm always here to encourage you and help you out. Keep it coming! kisses xx

Reviewer: MJThrillerRockerChick Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2016 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 2

Interesting



Author's Response:

Lol thanks i try. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2016 05:27 am Title: Chapter 1

This is a fantastic start, I think you captured Lisa brilliantly and the imagery you used it really incredible. I'm personally so glad I pushed you to do this, cause - what's can I say? It's gonna be a masterpiece 😏 I'm really eager to meet Michael in the story and see how he interacts with Lisa, and of course, the kiss! You better come out with the next one soon!!

Author's Response:

Wow thank you!! I feel like i didn't enough of both of those like i was too much in her head. Lol. Gurll stop making me blush. OH YOURE GLAD YOU HARASSED ME INTO THIS i bet you're happy dancing as we speak. Oh godd  I don't know how I'm going to write him that's so hard. Hard for me to get into his head and figure him out. Won't do a POV from his side probably. The kiss LOL that was the year before. Seriously thank you for this I needed it! Love you.  K im working on it!

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