Date: Aug 29, 2016 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 6: Mall of meeting
Oh My God this chapter was the sweetest I swear they are simply made for eachother,the chemistry they have,the sweet shy glances they're giving one another.I mean they are even defending one another,and the necklace was a smooth move on Michaels part oops I mean Mikel LOL.Probably won't be long before they're a couple I hope and the part where he calls Janet the demon spawn herself now that was funny.
Date: Aug 28, 2016 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 4: Circus of life...
If ever there was two unlikely souls wandering the earth Michael and Ayanna are most definatly soulmates they just don't know it yet.The thoughts that war racing around intheir heads sre so similar its amazing they most assuredly need to meet.And poor Yanni her dad is just so distant with her no wonder she has so much self-doubt.
Date: Aug 28, 2016 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 5: Candace Ayana and Michael meet
UmmmHmmmm!!!! The sparks have definatly struck their target lol,boy meets girl,boy thinks girl isbeautiful,girl swoons over boy.That was beyond cute they are going to be so good together I can just picture it.
Date: Aug 25, 2016 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 2: Introduction continues...
YESSSS so interesting how their lives are sorta parralel they are struggling with sef-doubt,not being good enough wanting to be accepted and having an exceptional talent.Two lonely souls so obviously seeking each other but at the moment doesn't know the other exsists.I can't wait for their two worlds to collide with eachother its going to be something for sure, you really have something here girly this story has so much depth to it so far.Really haven't read anything like it good job.Oh annd one more thing lol I love how you interwove Michael's real superstardom life into a totally different life with some of the same perspectives and similarities if that makes sense lol.
Awwwwwww, thank you so much 🙂😀 I really appreciate it :) yes, thank you for noticing the similarities to Michael and Candace-Ayana. Thank you again, yes, I know what you're saying..makes great sense 😄 I wanted to intermingle Mike's celebrity and real life to the circus world :) :)
Date: Aug 25, 2016 10:48 am Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Wow the introduction to this story is captivating it makes me want to read more the way Michael described himself,sounds so eerily how he would of said of himself forreal.And quite honestly I think once upon a time the world did think of him in that manner.
Aww, thank you 😀 Yeah, I wanted the story to still capture Mike's actual life. I hope I can write it like I see it :) I agreed. I do think the world saw Michael as a "clown" too, only to entertain....thank you...