Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2016 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 7 - This Is A Dream, Right?

wow it actually sounds like he was using her to be perfectly honest. Like just strung her along as a friend and then she just decides to be a surrogate mom for his kids like what? That doesn't seem like at all where the nature of their relationship is and is going so what he friendzones he marries someone else than has her have his kids. that's not right.. What kind of an aspiration is that anyway? Like it sounded like they had an actual connection not just ending up in a buisness deal situation like with debbie and him.. Anyway sorry if that was harsh it's my opinion, i love your story i had higher hopes for them. 

Author's Response:

Don't forget, this chapter was a dream ;) 

 

we'll have to see how things change for them in the future!

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2016 07:57 am Title: Chapter 12 - Don't Walk Away

Damn that escalated quickly. Lol. I'm glad they both saw the light! I didn't realize they only knew each other 4 months. I thought that a year had passed already, everything makes more sense given the time frame. I wonder if he was seeing Lisa before he became close to Lara?

They are in for an interesting ride.....let's hope they can stick together and grow even closer. They really do have a strong, rare connection. 

Author's Response:

I guess you could kinda say that a year has passed since it moved from Dec 1993 where they first met - to 94 where the story is at now but yes, they've only known each other less then a year. What I imagine myself personally was that he had started things slowly with Lisa in Nov before he met Lara, then got serious with Lisa start of January, if that hopefully helps fill in some context. 

 

These two truly have something rare, we can only hope for the best! Thanks for the love! Xxx

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2016 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Don't Walk Away

Wonderful💋 Simple great

Author's Response:

Thanks for the love!! Xxx <3

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2016 08:28 am Title: Chapter 11 - Behind The Mask

There is nothing like a woman scorned...and boy does LISA feel scorned?  How could she go to the press.. She wine to the place she knew would hurt Michael the most!

Larwbis going to be his top lawyer..will this feed into the media frenzy?  Will they both come clean to their feelings for one another.

You left me thinking,  Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2016 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Behind The Mask

Wow Lisa is a psycho and fundamentally dishonest. I'm kind of surprised she didnt try to hang on to Michael longer, like a persistent infection that won't disappear. I guess she saw the writing on the wall and figured she would go out with a bang. Lol. Vengeful petty bitch. I'm sooooo glad he's done with her. 

I know Lara is worried about her career but there are worse things to be accused of than being in a relationship with Michael. Its not like Lisa's accusations are anything like what Michael went through with the Chandlers. Maybe once the shock wears off she will calm down. And realize that it would be great if it were true......

Reviewer: femalien Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2016 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Behind The Mask

What a lying,conniving bitch Lisa is! Well...not a far cry from real life. She is the sort of person who enjoys public revenges on people who never wronged her. Iam glad she's out of Michael's life.

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2016 11:08 am Title: Chapter 10 - Contemplations

Oh my do these two have it all wrong!  They both care for each other a lot more than they want the other too know, but neither of them are willing to admit the truth to each other!!!!

So Lara will put up the wall that having Michael as ONLY a FRIEND,  not let him know her true feelings, because she thinks he is dating Lisa and has stronger feelings....

And Michael, will put up the wall thinking that Lara only wants his friendship, or she would have let him know her true feelings!  But she led him to believe it was best that he continues his relationship with Lisa!  

But will those feelings if both followed through with them cause their friendship to suffer...That is the dilemma???

 

What a mess!  I am looking forward to seeing what happens to these two in the future!

 

Great update!

Reviewer: Badgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2016 03:07 am Title: Chapter 10 - Contemplations

Finalmente la fastidiosa Lisa se ne andrà. Era ora si rendesse conto di amare Lara dovrebbe trovare il modo per incontrarla per esprimere i suoi sentimenti