[Report This]Date: Sep 06, 2016 06:04 pm Title: The Date
Yeah OK Michael you sleep with like a dozen hoes while she lives in your house and then Chanel goes on one date and suddenly you want to commit? And on top of it you can't even say I Love You? Nuh uh don't buy it. It's possible he's being sincere but she gave in way too easy. She should keep dating Davon until Mike proves he can keep it in his pants longer than a week. And she should make Michael get tested for STDs.
Date: Sep 04, 2016 06:48 am Title: CHERing Feelings
Good job! Please keep writing more chapters!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! A chapter is coming tonight!
Date: Sep 03, 2016 08:25 pm Title: CHERing Feelings
I'm glad Chanel confessed her love for Michael to her friends. Glad she wanted Michael to celebrate with them on halloween. Glad she put her feelings aside for him. Michael deserves to feel the energy Chanel is giving him. He shouldn't have been such a douche. I'm mad he has a fucking harem of women he takes into his basement. How come he always get caught with some girl riding him lol. Hum maybe he is trying to capture what he had with Chanel apparently she makes him scream louder than ahe does with him. I'm glad Chris talked to him because he needed to think about his feelings for Chanel. Trying to be in denial talking about he don't know. Boy bye, his narrow behind knows he loves her. Chanel can't be giving him such bad vibes that he never wanted to take their relationship to the next level. Michael better get his act together real quick before someone else snatches up his chocolate goddess. He better watch out cuz I think Davon has a thing for her and if he could he may persue her if they run into each other again. Michael is too funny while he is drunk. I thought he was gonna make a move but he had too much or is just a light weight.
Btw I had to look up the girl that you choose for Chanel and she is gorgeous. I forgot her name though. I follow too many people on instagram to remember.
Author's Response:
Yes that was awfully nice what Chanel did to cheer Michael up. All Michael needs to do is get rid of his hoes. That's all he needs to do and he's making it harder than it needs to be. He's so immature! And if he don't confess to her then maybe someone else will?????? Who knows. Lmaooo yaaaas girl somebody might take his chocolate goddess. Michael being drunk just ruins everything lmaoo silly ass.
And the girl I have for Chanel is very pretty, right? Sira Kante is her name.
Thanks for reviewing:)))
Date: Sep 02, 2016 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh my! First the old bully get her down. Then to see Michael gettin it on with another girl! Even though he wouldn't kiss her!
Men always think with their middle leg! So I guess he wasn't getting any from Chanel, he needed it from some skank!
its going to be a long time before Chanel will get with Michael! Yeah they aren't dating. But they had something and it coulee been again had Mike been able to keep it in his pants!
Me thinkith that all hell is going to break lose
Date: Sep 02, 2016 07:21 pm Title: CHERing Feelings
Oh, Cher's body suit or jumpsuit is cute
Author's Response:
It's very cute. Thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Sep 02, 2016 07:53 am Title: CHERing Feelings
Michael needs to grow the fuck up. He's 35 in this story?!!!! He acts like he's 18.
Chanel should fuck Davon in the house and make sure MICHAEL sees them.
Author's Response:
Lmaooo I love how surprised you are ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ but yup Michael's big ass is 35. More like 35 pushing 18. And omggggg Chanel fuckin Davon would be something wild! I can't wait until y'all see the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 01, 2016 05:44 pm Title: CHERing Feelings
Lol Welp, his true feelings come out tonight.
Author's Response:
Finally he's owning up to it! :))) thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 01, 2016 05:41 pm Title: CHERing Feelings
O.K normally I would be rooting for them like fuck it yall been through some shit yall got a kid together and whatnot.But Michael getting on my damn nerves lol like he so freakin immmature and dumb as turd bricks,not to see that Chanel has feelins for his ass.And when Chris asks him ''Do you love her''? he's all ''Um I don't know'' lord give me a big rock to throw at his head.You don't know cause you keep fuckin them 10 cent hoes while she's living in your house with your baby fool.Ooh my pressure up and Chanel always seem to be doing the heavy lifting watching over his drunk ass making sure he ok he need to grow up and get his shit together or he gonna really lose a good woman and by the looks of it she ain't going nowhere cause her lovesss him lol.
Author's Response:
You are so right. Chanel might walk out that door.....or is she :P ??????? Lmaooo and I love how you all are mad at Michael. But he is being a total douche. He's being indecisive for no reason at all. Either you wanna be with a good woman or you just wanna fuck your hoes. It shouldn't be that hard to answer. He is so immature ugh! Can't wait until you all see the next chapter! Which is tonighhhhhhhht! Thanks for reviewing girl!
Date: Aug 30, 2016 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
Michael wrong for that :( a sweet moment of him defending Chanel, turn so sour...
Author's Response:
you are so right! His ass couldve atleast watched the movie with her.
Date: Aug 30, 2016 04:47 pm Title: Intro
Oh and I forgot to add they aren't dating or friends with benefits but Michael could have some respect. He could have sex with that trick elsewhere on another day when Chanel and Mickey isn't there. Then again Michael wants them to stay with him. Homie can't have his cake and eat it too. I guess in his mind he's gonna fuck random girls with or without Chanel there until she comes around and gives into him. He's so damn disrespectful. I guess he didn't think Chanel would come downstairs and look for him. He was gone too long though.
Now onto Robert homeboy is stupid. He ain't loyal at all. First you always go to your employer and ask for a pay increase whether you work at McDonalds Wally World or for Michael Jackson. You can't be that desperate. Well he deserved to get fired for what he did. Then again eventually people were going to find out who the mother of Michael's kid was anyway.
Author's Response:
Right again girl! he was just being plain disrespectful acting like some teenage boy. He couldve atleast went to their damn houses! Robert was so trifiling it was soooo messy. Michael wasnt for that shit.
Date: Aug 30, 2016 04:40 pm Title: Intro
So Chanel is letting her feelings for Michael surface a little bit. I thought that was a good thing but now I guess I'm wrong. Ummm homie has me like 50 levels fucked up. I know his little boney tail ain't just leave Chanel during their time together with their son to fuck some random ass bimbo. Chanel is really getting soft all of a sudden with her feelings for Michael resurfacing. Home girl didn't even snatch the bitch off him. Smh poor girl. See if I was Chanel like about 3 years ago when I was her age and in college man I'd be a straight up savage. I'd be like Michael who and would have found like 3 guys to rotate with. Sorry but not sorry. Chanel needs to seriously divert her attention elsewhere because 2 can play the game. Man after I got my little cry out I'd be plotting against Michael. If only she could get him back the same way. Maybe if she tells him how she feels he would straighten up.
Author's Response:
Girl yes. his boney ass done fucked everybodys feelings. lmaoooo Michael is acting like a damn horny animal! and finally when Chanel's feelings finally began to show he goes and does something like that! How dare he! And you are exactly right! She needs to have her attention on something else. we'll seeeeeeeeee.
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2016 10:45 am Title: Chapter 9
Lol where on earth did this woman come from? And why the hell would Michael fuck her when they are about to watch a movie and Chanel is all upset? Is he that much of a sex addict he just couldn't make it through the night without dialing a ho? When his baby and baby momma are in the other room waiting for him? Lol! It almost doesn't seem real, like Chanel is dreaming. Makes no sense. If it's real Michael is just nasty and has major problems.
Author's Response:
Lmaooooo Im going to answer your questions.
1. Some type of hoe
2. Why would he do that to her?! How dare he?!
3. .... Okay i can't answer all of them lmaooo cauuuuuuuse i rather show yall. Next chapter is a must read ;)
Date: Aug 30, 2016 07:40 am Title: Chapter 9
I swear Michael's thing is going to rot off some day LOL always f...ing them nasty hoes.I feel sorry for Chanel although they are not in a relationship he should have more respect for his baby-momma.He should have taken his latest hoe deluxe to a hotel room or something,I'm sorry but he just nasty.Seems to me Chanel's feelings for Michael are coming to the forefront she seemed to be on her way to falling in love with him.And that was just foul what Robert did selling out just to make a quick buck,like Michael said he could have come to him if it was that dire of a situation.I tell you this chapter got me feeling all kinds of things man I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
What the hell is wrong with Michael?! Things were so great until he decided to act like a hoe again! And you're right he should have respect for his baby mama and son too! And hmmmmmm are feelings being shown???????? They do need to talk and i'm putting the next chapter up today :))))
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2016 04:00 am Title: Chapter 9
Omg that all of to say
Author's Response:
Girl yes and it gets even better ;)
Date: Aug 28, 2016 06:33 pm Title: Mahogany
Wow...Chanel been thru some shit but she is one tough cookie l. Mad props and if Michael don't take his drunk ass on lol! Love it!