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Date: Mar 28, 2018 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 46

LOL...can just imagine Michael rushing around to get the muffins, and then Katie not wanting them anymore... XD!!!

And the exchange between Kim and Michael...lol XD

Author's Response:

Lol yes that was funny to write 

 

 

Lol I'm glad you like it :)

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Date: Mar 10, 2018 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 45

Sounds like Michael got everything he wanted for his birthday... ;) lol.

Isa and Jason sound like they're fairly level-headed kids :)

Author's Response:

Yes lol ;) 

 

Yes they are ;) 

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Date: Feb 19, 2018 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 44

Glad to see Michael and Katie have the support of his family, and her father :)...

Lol...Isa and Jason's responses the grownups description of sex. Perhaps its a sign Isa and Jason will wait awhile before engaging in it themselves...

Look forward to reading about the picnic in the park :)

Author's Response:

Yes her dad is on their side too :) 

 

Lol yes probably ;) 

 

 

 

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Date: Feb 01, 2018 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 43

Awww...a surprise party :).

Well, at least Mrs. Carter made an effort to apologize to Katie...I'll give her that.

Glad Michael and Katie had their 'place' to go to get away from the drama at the party

Author's Response:

:) isn't he sweet?

 

Yeah sort of 

 

 

Thankfully they have their peaceful place 

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Date: Jan 27, 2018 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 42

Was able to picture all the interactions :).

Jackie and Michael sound like people Isa and Kim can confide in about their mother/daughter differences :)

Author's Response:

Yes Michael and Jackie are the perfect listening ears ;)

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Date: Jan 20, 2018 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 41

Enjoyed the interactions

"Geez..too much testosterone...

"Keep your dog on a leash..."

LOL :D

Author's Response:

Lol yes Michael and Jake are no friends lol 

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Date: Jan 06, 2018 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 40

Yay! Isa got first prize :D...Way to go girl! :D

Sounds like it was a poignant moment for Katie remembering when she used to be able to dance...xxx

Author's Response:

Yes Isa did inhertiate her aunties talent 

 

Yes it remided her about her own daceing days xxx

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Date: Dec 22, 2017 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 39

Wow...no love lost between Katie and her mom...smh

Wonder what Mrs. Carter's reaction will be if she tests Michael, and he winds up suing her for continuing to criticize and put stress on Katie. Some people just don't realize when they are the source of the tension.

Mr. Carter and Michael are two of the good ones, Katie's lucky to have them in her life.

Author's Response:

She won't be that stupid to test Michael it's obvious he meant it 

 

 

Yes she is lucky to have them in her life 

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Date: Dec 16, 2017 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 38

Hmmm...Kim and Jackie's relationship is progressing nicely ;)...

Mr. Carter is a good man. Working with Michael to set up a surprise party for Katie :)

Mrs. Carter...Well...she is who she is smh...

Author's Response:

Yes Mr Carter is a good man 

 

 

Mrs Carter she's no words for her 

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Date: Nov 20, 2017 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 37

Can imagine Michael and Kim in their dance competition...lol :D

Sounds like the four had a fun double date... :)

Hm...and Kim and Jackie took their relationship to the next level, as it were ;)

Author's Response:

Lol yes it must've been fun 

 

Yes :)

 

Yes they did ;) 

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Date: Nov 12, 2017 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 36

Lol...love Katie coaxing Michael and Janet to make up...like a mom with two kids XD.

Will be interesting to see what happens if Janet takes Katie's advice and talks to Jake...

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

Lol yes she's momming them lol 

 

Uh huh 

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Date: Nov 06, 2017 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 35

I imagine Kim and Jackie were pleasantly surprised to have Katie show up as Mr. Lopez' p.a. instead of Nicole.

Sweet moment with Katie and Michael talking to their baby through her baby bump ;). lol

Bit of an awkward moment at the dance studio with Jake, Michael and Jackie...though I get Michael and Jackie were just being protective of Janet. :)

Author's Response:

Yes they were :)

 

Yes they're sweet :) 

 

Yes they're just being protective over their lil sis 

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Date: Oct 08, 2017 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 34

Well, way to go! Katie has a boss who isn't bothered by having an employee who is disabled and pregnant...Mr. Lopez sounds like a good man :D.

Hm...seems Kim and Jackie keep getting closer all the time :).

Author's Response:

Yes should be more people like mr Lopez out there  

 

Yes they're getting closer  ;)

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Date: Oct 01, 2017 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 33

Wow...an eventful evening at Michael's place...

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

Yes 

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Date: Sep 24, 2017 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 32

Mrs. Carter and her attitude/ignorance...smh :(.

Author's Response:

Ikr? 

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