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Reviewer: Mirla Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2017 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

The strangest story I have ever read, but it was so painstakenly beautiful and it really made me empathize with both characters. You are an incredible writer and just so great at capturing the essence of his pain. As twisted as it sounds, I'm happy that Michael's tormented soul was able to find "release", but I was also hoping for more insight into the older Michael's thoughts, as I felt that the POV was more focused on the younger Michael. I hope that there would be a sequel/second encounter coming soon.

Reviewer: TsundeRima Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2017 01:35 am Title: Chapter 1

What an innovative idea was ... perfect

Reviewer: EmilySantosGuimaraes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2016 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Eu adorei a sua fanfic, sério! Ela é sensual e imprevisível! Eu diria que ela merece uma continuação.

Reviewer: ave Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2016 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

So good... so he kind of rapes himself?

Ummm... I'd really like it if you continued this. I want to see what happens. I really loved it.



Author's Response: Hmm, that's a new way of putting it; but I guess so (self-inflicted punishment if you will) And not sure it will be continued :( but thanks again for taking the time to read and leave your comments on it! :D

Reviewer: ddkotf58 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2016 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

Fabulously done...and hot!

Author's Response: *le gasp* I'm shocked anyone read this! Yay! Thanks so much for taking the time to leave your comments! Much appreciated. :D

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