Date: Oct 26, 2016 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Now this was truly truly beautiful, I can see something like this really happening. This really did well at showing the kind, giving, selfless heart he always had. You do well at story telling, I felt my stomach drop when Joseph told him to give him the fifty lol. I enjoyed this very much! Again, really superb writing.
Date: Apr 26, 2016 10:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Your story is truely beautiful! It is so touching! And also I think it is realistic because that something I believe Michael would do if he had the chance.
Michael is truely a gifl from heaven. He is one of those few people in the world who remind us how to love and care about each other. It is not that I think Michael is perfect. He has his mistakes and demerits. But I believe he has the most beautiful heart!
I am rambling now :))
Thank you for your story. I really LOVE it. It is very amamzing!
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read and leave your comments on the story! I really appreciate it! :D