Date: Jul 29, 2016 03:01 pm Title: C hap ter 2
Hey Kara! You need to update this like...NOW! 😃 I wanna see what's going on with Mike and the family. He seems so paranoid and testy and I wanna see how things turn out
Author's Response: Don't worry, dear! I'm working on it. It's just a bit difficult jugging two stories at one time. I should have waited until I was half way finished with The Priest, but I couldn't help myself lol! Thanks for the encouragement though! <3
Date: Jun 27, 2016 01:02 pm Title: C hap ter 2
Aww I'm crazy about that Micah lol. This was intense and very engaging. Michael is really going through some inner turmoil and it's weighing heavy on his wife. That's sad but happens unfortunately. Great chapter. I wanna read more
Author's Response: I'm glad you like this story and glad you like Micah. Let's hope his parents get their marriage in the right place because the trial has really none a number on the entire family. I will update soon. I just trying to juggle this story as well as The Priest, and it's a little difficult.
Date: May 24, 2016 01:03 pm Title: C hap ter 2
Well well Michael and Kaiilah were certainly with having more than one child my goodness lol, I pity mj so much he's engulfed in his guilty and depression thanks to that stupid trail..now that he can't even acknowledge kaiilah cooking his favourite meal..he truly is broken I hope there is way he'll become stronger..also I can't wait to see where the whole story started again if your going the same route you did in the other version or going a completely different turn! A great Chapter Kara 😘
Author's Response: Yep! Michael and Kaiilah have more than a handful lol! Unfortunately, the trial really did a number on Michael, and is effecting his relationships. Hopefully, he'll bounce back! Gotta read to find out! I'm also going to the same route with my story, but with a twist! Hope you all like it!
Date: May 10, 2016 06:34 am Title: Prologue- C hap ter 1
Omg yes it's back! Thought you deleted this one for good for some reason :( this prolouge is perfect of course.
Author's Response: Yes, it's back! I did delete the other one so I could reboot it! I'm working on the first chapters. I wasn't sure I was going to continue it, but I got some reviews so I'm moving forward. Also, I hope the prologue wasn't confusing. MIchael was having a nightmare. I didn't put it in italics! I had a hard time figuring out how to use HTML tags smh sometimes I can be dimwitted lol! Anyways, now I have it!
Date: Apr 22, 2016 05:51 pm Title: Prologue- C hap ter 1
Since a few other people were also sort of confused, I'd like to make a suggestion.
Put the dream in italics.
Italics are generally accepted to mean what is being written is going on inside the character's head. Have the quotes and the scene where he is in jail/court in italics, then leave the part where he's awake in normal format.
This story seems interesting. It would be a shame for people to be confused. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks, honey! As a writer, I know all about italics, but I have no idea how to use italics and break the paragraph with HTML tags, thats why I use to rarely post stories here because of the HTML format, which is very stressful. I wish there was a tutorial to help me. I wanted to do that, but I don't know how to.
Date: Apr 20, 2016 03:28 am Title: Prologue- C hap ter 1
I found this a bit confewsing.....
Author's Response: Sorry you're confused, honey! I have wild imagination, and I tend to write in abstract so sometimes it is confusing. The prologue is basically quotes about Michael and even his own quotes. He is reminiscing the highlights of his life as well as dreaming about what if he found guilty. We all know that the trial took a big toll on Michael, and often suffered from nightmares and panic attacks after it ended. It's all dream! I have
Date: Apr 20, 2016 01:30 am Title: Prologue- C hap ter 1
So this is what you meant by a remake, I can't wait to see how you evolve this story once again and the changes you've made..it looks like its going to be one hell of a ride! 😁
Author's Response: It's going to be very different and one hell of a ride! Thanks, Lorry!
Date: Apr 19, 2016 10:14 pm Title: Prologue- C hap ter 1
First the background, then the trial and at the end... 'her'... Sounds interesting, even though my heart is aching I encourage you to continue... Gosh! I bet you'll make justice to this specific time, thank you so much!
Author's Response: Thanks, honey! I'll do justice!