Date: Mar 21, 2017 06:10 am Title: Chapter 33_ The Beginning of the End
Thank you for the new chapter. I was so happy to see that you'd uploaded.
Well, that b!tch wasn't hit by a lamp, but she had her butt beat up by Mrs J and then she was killed...that seems fine to me LOL.
Although I did not agree with Ricky's decision to let Bellene get away, I understood for his thought. After all, Bellene was just a young girl who wanted to take care of herself and achieved her dream. But she was too cagey that she became so selfish and heartless for her own desire. At the end, she get bitten by karma.
I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Hey MWNN 😃 thank you as always. Yeah Bellene finally got her karma and I'm sure it hurt alot worse than a lamp. LOL. Lil Ricky's heart is just too pure for this lifestyle. Stay tuned
Date: Mar 19, 2017 07:50 am Title: Chapter 33_ The Beginning of the End
oh my word! this chapter had me feeling so many emotions! first of all lil ricky SHOULD not have tried to help the hoe she don't damn deserve it! she used u and the rest of the gang and you still use your mouth to help her? boy bye. she's a damn manipulative bissh also when they found her and Mrs.J went in I was like Yassss! you go girl beat her ass! i was cheering in the background as she did so! its been long overdue seeing her ass be beat but then secondaly i was like 'OH' sylvia wanted to kill her?? then she was shot and my mind was well at least the witch is dead but overall I hope this heist for both places wont end up getting arrested by the police that is what worries me and that damn janitor is a fool smh.
Author's Response: Hey Lorry!!!!😃😃 I ain't forgot about you, girl. It's been very hectic and stressful where I'm at, hence why it took so long to post this. Also I don't want you to think that I was ignoring you because I wasn't. You know you're my homie Anyway, your rant was Everything! I imagined you cheering right along with Big P while she got her tail kicked Lmaoooo! Jimmy Earl LMAOOOO he's a trip. Lil Ricky is too kind for his own good
Date: Feb 18, 2017 12:02 pm Title: Poetic Dedication and Prologue- For the Love of...
Whoops I must have written my comment in a rush! I meant I'm glad he did so and now all I can wait is for the hoe to be killed somehow. She is gonna pay for it. I meant by the quick reflexes is that the boys all acted quickly to help Mrs. J! Is that clearer? 😂
Author's Response: Ahhh there we go. That's much better 😁 thanks for clarifying
Date: Feb 18, 2017 10:24 am Title: Chapter 32- Shady Business
I was very happy to see you had uploaded. Thank you. And you got me so excited through this chapter that my hands sweated. I could not take my eyes away even for just a second.
Poor Big P. I think he must be the saddest one. He seemed to be so fond of Mr and Mrs J that he didn't want to seperate. I believe to him, Mr and Mrs were truly his family. And he had been with them for so long. Poor Big P! :(
If they could find that b!tch (sorry, but I really hate her now :v), that would be the end of J5 Boys, and I would be so sad too :'(. But if they could not, I would be also very pissed because they would have to struggle a lot and that b!tch wouldn't get hit by a lamp LOL.
Anyways, I like this chapter a lot. And I just can't wait for the moment when that b!tch to be hit by a lamp LOL (or better saying: when karma gets her ;))
Author's Response: LOL I love you and that lamp! Lol thank you as always. Yeah I feel bad for Big P too. You can tell he's sad but too filled with pride to ever admit it. I love that you get so excited reading my work. Those are reactions that I really try to bring through so thank you for noticing. Stay tuned and let's see what happens next
Date: Feb 18, 2017 10:24 am Title: Chapter 32- Shady Business
*rolls out speakers pulling the volume*
Let me just get my hands on that damn hoe! she pisses me off so much! why would she take money that rightfully wasn't hers?! no wonder she was so damn secretive stringing everyone like a guitar! its her fault poor mrs.J almost got raped I sorta of wish michael had bloody put a bullet in his head the fool deserves for trying to rape a pregnant woman?! But thank goodness they have the gun and quick reflexes before those fools caused any harm.
At this point i don't bloody care if the hoe dies by anyone she deserves it for all the trouble shes caused! I just hope Mya doesnt think that she was played its not poor lil ricky's fault I hope they get back together soon.
Author's Response: Hey Lorry thank you for the review as always. But I'm a little confused. You said you wished Mr J would've put a bullet in his head for almost raping Mrs J, but he did put a bullet in his head he put three. Then you said something about quick reflexes and getting the gun in time, I'm a little confused about what you read
Date: Feb 05, 2017 06:55 am Title: Chapter 31- Bittersweet
That b!tch! That b!tch! That b!tch!!!
OK I calm down now. I promise you that I rarely swear or use bad words but I was so caught up in your story :)).
I'd just been away for a short time and you've already uploaded 2 chapters? That's awesome! Thank you :D.
And when I thought this was really the end of J5 Boys, then they're all broke and there is no way Ricky can go to Chicago with his girl anymore. Poor guy :( (although I think he and Myra moved too fast, but it's good that at least you have hope and dream, you know). Well, I hope that they all can find that b!tch, get money, hit her by a lamp (LOL, yeah, I still remember that ;)), kill and bury her in some forest :)). OK...that's really cruel but can Bellene at least be hit by a lamp? LOL
Honestly speaking, to me Bellene WAS not that hatable. Of course she had her fault for having seduced and had affrair with a married man, but we cannot blame all on her. As women, we have to stand by our side right? ;) To me, to allow what happened happen, it was mainly Mr J's fault. So I did not hate Bellene. She was just not a good girl. But now, well, can she be hit by a lamp now? LOL.
I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: LOL hey MWNN! I was wondering what happened to you, girl!😉 I think it's hilarious that folks hate Bellene but I also understand. The things she did have been foul. Let's just see what happens next and as always thank you for your review. I always look forward to them and they keep me excited to write more. Stay tuned....
Date: Feb 05, 2017 03:55 am Title: Chapter 31- Bittersweet
That little bish! I knew she was doing something shady she must have stole all the damn money when they were not on their guard.grrr I knew she wasn't to be trusted from the start! I hope they find her and get her. I knew this drama was gonna get good *munches on my popcorn like mj* smh. As happy as I am for Ricky I'm more happy for Mrs.j she's pregnant again and I hope it's a boy that child will be beautiful. I'm sorta glad the group is disbanded because they would get caught eventually luck don't last forever!. I just wonder what the hell they gonna do now.
Author's Response: Bellene is Queen!!! LOL nah I'm teasing. She's messed up for that and she threw a monkey wrench in their happiness and plans. Smh. I think it's funny that ppl want them to have a boy. He might be crazy too but let's just see what happens next... thanks as always Lorry
Date: Feb 04, 2017 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 31- Bittersweet
Bellene is such a bitch. I hope they track her down and take her ass out. And PLEASE make the baby a boy!!! Everyone makes the baby a girl in their stories, I want a boy!!! Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response: LOL awww you want a baby boy? That's so cute. Someone else asked me for a boy. We'll just have to see. And yeah Bellene is a bitch lol SMH
Date: Jan 29, 2017 08:59 am Title: Chapter 30_ Hard Decisions
Awesome Chapter Wally stole the light in this one with him watching the epic sex scene between the couple and also him being included into the made up song Mr. J made. I like how Lil Ricky is getting confidence and not being a pushover with every chapter that goes by. I have a feeling that Bellene is going to be involved in the upcoming chapters she has been quiet for far too long...also something tells me that J5 boys will go back to the life they all know too well...very interested to see what is going to happen next...Tell Big P to man up I'm not use to seeing him acting like a bitch...Okay Okay i'm done with my review continue the great work!!!
Date: Jan 28, 2017 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 30_ Hard Decisions
the question on my lips is slyvia and mr.J trying to have another child??? with all love making they be doing and thats just nasty the old man watching he should be ashamed! lil ricky caught him in the damn act lool.
another question i think lil ricky and his girl are moving too fast! like damn that asking for him to move on with her is a bit too early in their relationship she doesn't know that much about him or his job. lil ricky needs to really think either way tubby needs to learn that the family won't always be together. geez mr and mrs. J need their space they are couple. they will always have that bond but damn.
now my final question is who is that group that has it so bad for group?? well all i can do is this below:
that's all xD
Author's Response: LMAOOOO!!!😭 Lorry, this is definitely my favorite review of yours!!😭 The gifs and your take on this chapter is funny as hayle! I was cracking up reading this. Thanks as always
Date: Jan 09, 2017 09:00 am Title: Chapter 29- Reunited?
Yayyyyyy!!! My crazy and favorite couple is back! It surely surprised me that Sylvia came back to her parent's home. Not a second I had that thought, maybe because of her bad past there. However, things were so sad with her dad and mom. I am glad that at least Reverend could say sorry to Sylvia in his own way.
I can't wait to see Mr and Mrs J back to their lovey dovey selves and Mr J backs to the smooth, cool and charming man that I love so so much (I need to say once more time: you've done so great job in creating your characters, especially Mr J).
Thank you for the new chapter. I was really happy to see that you had updated.
Author's Response: Hey MWNN! I'm so glad I could make you happy with seeing your couple again LOL. Thank you very much for seeing how much I've invested in my characters. It's weird because I feel very connected to them, almost like they're real to me. But yeah thanks again for being faithful in reading and reviewing. Stay tuned
Date: Jan 08, 2017 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 29- Reunited?
Yay they're back together!!! Michael and Sylvia Mae have made my day 😂 I hope Sylvie still beats the shit out of Bellene and Michael watches, cheering her on. Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response: LMAOOOO @ wanting Mike to watch Bellene get beat up. In glad you liked it. Thanks
Date: Jan 08, 2017 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 29- Reunited?
Yasssss celebrate my favourite crazy couple are back!! at first i was a bit worried they wouldn't be back together but im glad sylvia set some rules down and not allowed michael's bull crap get in the way. i cant wait for her to hear whats been going on, lil ricky getting his own girl and so forth but the hoe better be kicked out of this group immediately! the heffa can leave but shes been ducking out i bet she's been doing some shady stuff maybe snitching to the police or something don't trust her one bit. i have my eye on her >_>.
Author's Response: LMAOOOO there you go, Lorry! You are so silly! Love the celebration dance btw. Stay tuned